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By : LadyShinomori

From justme182007 on April 28, 2007
Yeah, that chapter was great. I was laughing my ass off at some parts, and i'm glad u update so soon. Well now Kagome and Sango both have a chance to win the bet, and poor Botan but at least she has Naraku..Anyways i just have a question and hope u can answer it. Since we all know Kurama's a fox, can he transform in to Youko or is it just Kurama?
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From ANON - Lady Minamino on April 27, 2007
I swear I love your writing. I thought it was so funny the way Yusuke and Sango were playing around when Kurama pulled up. That'll show him! I love all the characters and the way they behave. Kind of reminds me of my sister and me. I can see that this is going to be a very good story once it's done. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work! *pats you on your back* And please let Kurama get a good kick in the balls.
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From madmiko on April 27, 2007
Wow! That was another fantastic chapter! I don't know how you keep grinding these babies out so fast, but I'm NOT complaining! It was good to see some Yusuke action in this one. First he saves Kag from Inu, (which I loved, btw), then the great teasing and horsing aropund with Sango, followed by setting Kurama up the way he did. Just awesome! Love Inu trying to get back with Kag. Nice little tidbit about Yusuke and Kag sharing a liking for the same music. When Kurama came to check out the car, and Sango wondered if he was going to woo it or which hole he was going to promise to plug, I thought I'd die laughing! And the call to Karasu was simply inspired, though it's a shame Sango didn't let them think he WAS her boyfriend. (Of course, then we wouldn't have been treated to that steamy kiss.) I loved Sango trying to use Yusuke's finger to blow up her car. LOL!! You were on such a roll! You have a real gift for all this witty banter going on. I just can't wait for more!! I must check this site 3 or 4 times a day (and night) just to see if you've updated. Thanks so much for doing this story!!
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From ANON - Anon on April 27, 2007
That was a great kissing scene. Loved it, I can almost taste the sexual tension between Kurama and Sango. Hope he gets his head out of his ass. At least he finally asked her out. Can't wait to read more. Please update ASAP!
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From justme182007 on April 27, 2007
This chapter wasn't as long as ur other ones, but still great anyway. And poor Sango, i was so hoping she would win the bet, i guess not. -Shrugs- Oh well, anyways hope u update soon...bye
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From ANON - white kitsune shiva on April 26, 2007
u updated so fast i hope u can do it again...and when is yusuke goin to join kagome/hiei
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From madmiko on April 26, 2007
Another great chapter! Of course, I still wonder how the evening ended at the bar. Sounds like Hiei and Kag are going to fail that class if she's so bad at writing reports and he's being NO help. LOL!! Love the way you brought on the kiss there. Very hot! Nice, timely interruption, too. Love Hiei's bluntness about thinking about trying to get her into bed. I can't believe she asked him what she did, though. Wonder what she thought about his, "not interested in a relationship, but would probably want to do it more than once" statement? What a cop-out! That just makes him a dog, and I don't see her going for that. Interesting, though, how her thoughts about just sleeping with him to win the bet changed when she realized the intensity of her attraction to him. And if he's had girlfriends before, then what's his problem with dating her if he already knows he doesn't just want a one-time thing? Yep. Their situation is a bit more complicated than Sango thinks, isn't it? Again: there was the hint about Kag having to be home for Sunday dinner for her father -- I just love the glimpses you're giving us about her home life. And I LOVE it that you made JIN Sango's old boyfriend. And the way you revealed more about Kurama's past attraction to her through Hiei's thoughts was excellent. You know, Botan seems to know a lot of horrible things both Inuyasha and Jin did to her friends, but she never told them. What's up with that? She caught Inu with Kik and knew the lies Jin was spreading -- I think she should have told them. Did Kurama ever hear the stories Jin was telling about Sango being so wild? As always, I'll be anxiously checking for updates of this story -- it's just great!
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From ANON - Kya77 on April 26, 2007
Awsome, Awsome, Awsome!! Did I express clearly how awsome this story is? LOL I think you are doing a great job and I look forward to reading what comes next for everyone. I wonder how you are going to make it into a Yus/Kag/Heie, but I'm looking forward to seeing how it works out.
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From ANON - white kitsune shiva on April 25, 2007
hey that was great an kind of kinky. Cant wait for the next update.
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From madmiko on April 25, 2007
Chapter 4 was just awesome! Woo hoo! I love it that they went back to the bar, and Botan got to compete in a pool tournament. There really wasn't much Botan, Naraku, or Yusuke in this chapter, but I have to confess, I didn't mind a bit because I'm SO loving what you're doing with Hiei/Kag and Sango/Kur. You could concentrate on the 4 of them and I'd be happy. SO many good things to mention. Loved the guys' reaction when the gals first walked in. And the way Hiei called Kurama on his attraction to Sango. AND the way he fessed up to the fact that he wants Kag. With the way she's going for it, and his willingness, well -- they're bound to win that bet unless SOMETHING happens to delay them. I'm wondering if he's going to offer to take her home from the bar. Of course, it would be nice if they actually got to know each other a little more and started really caring about each other first. The lust is great, but you're already laying the groundwork for more -- Yay! The way BOTH Hiei and Kag were offended when Hojo dismissed him as a possible rival was great! And what's this? Kag's father has already promised her to Hojo?!!? And she doesn't know it? I can see THAT playing a big role later on. And I think it hints at more of Kag's life than she lets show. Obviously, her father has certain expectations of her and she has great responsibilities to him and her family. Like her earlier thoughts about who she dates. I think that many of her choices have been dictated by that. This is going to be so good! Loved Kurama's being an ass leading to him having to give up his shirt. Poor Sango! But I really liked the way she and Kag whooped ass. Were the guys surprised? And the way you have the girls banter back and forth is so wonderful! It's great the way they use it to reveal things -- both true and made-up -- to other people. The Kag/Hiei lap scenes were hot!! And the way you threw Miroku and Hojo into the mix were brilliant. Perhaps Sango can capitalize on Miroku's interest to get Kurama to move. And now Hiei can have TWO targets: Hojo and Inuyasha. (I'm still hoping Inu will try to get Kag back -- loved the way Sango dissed him to everyone when she was building Hiei up as Kag's boyfriend -- LOL!! Gee, will Hiei offer to show Kag just how good he is?) Since Koenma wimped out of the picture so soon, *cough probably gay cough*, will Botan try to get them to let her substitute someone else? Like ... Naraku? So, Kag and Hiei still need to work on their report. And I'm curious as to what role the gals' artwork will have in this? Perhaps to help the guys see there's more to them than great bodies, and they're not just ditsy, shallow cheerleaders? I don't think it would take a lot to develop and show the guy's growing feelings for them -- a little jealousy here, a little protectiveness there, etc. This is just a great story, and it has rapidly become one of my favorites. Thanks so much for updating so frequently and for such great, long chapters! I can't wait for more!
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From EternalTwylight on April 25, 2007
Such crude language, such violent behavior and all spiced with just the right amount of sexual tension. I fucking love it!! Been an amazing and entertaining read, can't wait to see more. I'll definately be looking for future chapters.
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From ANON - Ryu on April 25, 2007
Awww love the scene for Hiei and Kagome there. Bet that put Houjo's knickers in a twist. I can only imagine what lengths he'll go to in order to win her over now. The fight was interesting too, pity the two fools most likely won't remember it when they sober up. Good chapter, looking forward to more.
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From justme182007 on April 25, 2007
Hey was up? Anyways i loved chapter 4 and can't wait till chapter 5. Poor Sango having to sit on the floor, and has that fat man almost squish her. -LOL- but i loved it, especially the part about the tatoo's really nice!!-See ya!
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From ANON - Ryu on April 25, 2007
Damn Kurama is such a perv. What is it with him and not being able to go 24 hours without getting his rocks off? I think I'd be worried about it falling off from overuse at the moment. Love how fast you are at updating, keep up the good work
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From ANON - Anon on April 23, 2007
awesome chapter update asap
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