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By : LadyShinomori

From ANON - just-me172007 on April 23, 2007
Woo hoo another great chappie. And you even added a sexy Sango to it. Can't wait 2 chapter 4 and hopefully, more sexy Sango, and of course, every one else!
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From ANON - white kitsune shiva on April 22, 2007
lol a bitch luvs to eat and run that was a great chapter.
Ill be waiting 4 the next up date.
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From madmiko on April 22, 2007
Oh, that was a GREAT chapter!! Love the idea of Sango and Kag being artsy. It was great that Botan fixed Sango up before she went to see Kurama. Even though I winced in sympathy, I still enjoyed the emabarrassing scenes, too. Loved it that Sango played it off as trying to interest another guy. Loved Kurama's little predicament. Heh heh! Too funny that the teacher called him on being lewd in front of the clay baby -- LOL!! I thought things went really well between Sango and Kurama -- I like the way she started talking to him and put herself out there as a friend. Nice. I really enjoyed the tidbits about how things were going with Botan and Koenma -- TOO funny!! What's up with out little prince? (Apparently: nothing. Heh heh!) I can't wait to see Naraku start working on Botan. Hmmm. Interesting bits of info Sango let slide to Kurama about Kag not being able to cook or write reports. The driving thing is cute, too. I can't wait to see what happens with her and Hiei!! Loved it when the baby shut up when she picked it up and he had the thought that he would, too, if he had his face in her tits. Ha!! I have to wonder, will he make a move when he gets to spend some time alone with her? Or will Yusuke be hanging around with them when they work on their report? I'm still dying to see how the THREE of them come to be together. This is a terrific fic! Thanks for the lovely long chapters!!
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From madmiko on April 19, 2007
Just have to add a couple of other comments. This is such a great fic! I was thinking about it, and it struck me that so far we've had some interesting revelations about Botan and her thoughts and hopes, etc, AND some great insight into Sango, too, about her attitude and past experience, etc. But so far, the Kagome info has been more along the lines of things she's said out loud about her and Inuyasha and their pathetic relationship. So, I'm just hoping there will be a little more inside info and a better look into who she really is in the next chapter. The fact that you're going to set her up with TWO guys has me very curious as to how you're going to do it. Will Hiei and Yusuke come to an agreement first? Because she's now set to go after Hiei, right? I hope her friends will be accepting of her being with two guys. I am particularly fascinated with the way you've made them seem so typically "high school" in some ways, and yet you've kept their youkai or miko status. It makes things twice as intersting and opens the story up to a lot of possibilites. And I just HAVE to congratulate you on making Yusuke and Naraku brothers. It really just hit me several hours after I'd read the 2nd chapter what a great match-up that is. Truly inspired. I am so looking forward to more of this!!
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From ANON - Ryu on April 19, 2007
Oh this just keeps getting better and better. Now both sides have bets going, what's going to happen when the secret comes out? Now that Sango's got a reason to want to win I think Kurama might want to watch out, I doubt his disinterest will last for very long. I find it amusing that Hiei refused to answer the question, maybe he didn't want to let it slip that he'd already been thinking about bending Kagome over? Can't wait to see how this plays out. Please update quickly.
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From ANON - Ryu on April 19, 2007
The pool scene was funnier than hell, somehow I'm not surprised that Hiei figured out that Botan was playing their group for fools. I see the sexual tension in the group quickly going through the roof though I'm not sure who's going to be banging who first. Kurama makes an excellent manwhore, I think Sango's going to have her work cut out for her if she wants to keep him faithful. Cute chapter, funnier than hell. I'm anxious to see how the story progresses.
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From ANON - VixenOfTheFlame on April 19, 2007
LUV IT AND PRAY U UPDATE SOON.
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From madmiko on April 19, 2007
Hee hee hee! Great chapter! Love all the witty banter flying -- your writing is perfect. Very interesting idea for a home ec. project -- the idea of "animated babies" is just a bit scary. Hmmm. So now the girls have a bet going, too -- it just gets hotter and hotter! Hiei sure is remaining aloof. I'm so glad Kag dumped dog boy. Is he going to cause trouble for her? I loved the addition of Koenma into the mix, but I can't wait for Naraku to make a move on our fair Botan. And I really, really loved the bits about Yukina and Kazuma! That was an excellent touch. This is shaping up to be such a great story -- I'm really enjoying it!!
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From justme182007 on April 19, 2007
Damn, that chap was so sweet. (I mean sweet as in tight,-cool-) OH and i love ur fic by the way, and i hope i didn't come off as a complete bitch last chapter..But the next time u update could u send me a e-mail. You know something like-''bitch i updated, go read and review'' or something like that..See ya!
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From jetpunzl on April 18, 2007
Love it so far! Can't wait to read what happens next. I'm curious to know how Kagome will break up with InuYasha and make it stick: maybe she'll cheat on him in order to get the point across? And you aren't going to have them assigned to work on a group project in their classes, are you, because I don't think that fits into this storyline.
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From madmiko on April 18, 2007
Woo hoo! Love your AU set-up! Veeery interesting. Somehow, I never pictured Kagome and Sango as cheerleaders, though. I LOVE your pairings! There's nothing better than Hiei/Kag, and Yusuke makes a nice addition. Botan/Naraku has me intrigued, too. And can I tell you just how much I love Kurama being a man-whore? Hilarious!!! I really liked the way you had Hiei tell them all off after their little pool match. Trust him to have noticed that the girls had to know how to play. I think the way you're writing Hiei and Yusuke is just right, too. I was really surprised that Kag had slept with Inuyasha -- interesting touch there. Hee hee! I can't wait for her to throw him over for a couple of punks!! That will be so awesome!! So, the bet is between Naraku and Kurama over Botan, eh? I DO hope there will be more to Kag than her cheerleader personna. Oh, and Kurama should know Sango has a nice body since she wears a cheerleading outfit, right? Thanks so much for the awesomely long introduction with this first chapter. I am really looking forward to this story!! Very original!!
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From ANON - M.C. on April 18, 2007
great start. sango is my fave and i like it so far. i agree that i want to see her in something sexy just to knock kurama off his high horse. but i like how you have her. she's comfortable with who she is. she doesn't mind following her friend around despite the nickname kurama gave her. nothing wrong with wearing loose comfortable clothing when you are sure of yourself. she's sango so she has every right to be. i think kurama is just pissed off that she isn't falling all over herself and he wants her to. dolled up, easy is his type and she isn't fawning all over him. don't change her personality though. and as far as kagome is concerned just have a threesome sex scene, some raw action. Update please.
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From justme182007 on April 17, 2007
Ok, i love ur fic so far, and hope u update really soon. But my one problem with that is why did u make Sango seem so mannish and unindependent...I.E. -Higurashi's shadow...Hand me down jeans...Kurama thinking Sango's a lesibian..-Sigh- Well i really do like thought, and i hope u can at least make Sango sexier--plz---Well bye!!
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From ANON - Lady Minamino on April 17, 2007
OMG!!!!! I laughed my ass off when I read that. I love the way this story is going. Needless to say, I think things are going to get very interesting. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
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From ANON - TheSexyOne on April 17, 2007
I have only one request since your flow is smooth and there weren't many mistakes. Hard to find a good highschool fic that don't look like the others. So far the plot looks original and I love how you didn't make the girls all prim and proper and stuck up, I really hate that. I just ask that you don't have any of the girl's sappy and all gaga. Also no sappy sex. Let's be honest there is nothing romantic about sex when you are under twenty. Keep up the good work!
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