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By : LadyShinomori
  • From madmiko on June 27, 2007
    Wow! What an action-packed chapter! I'll be chewing on that one for days. Loved the set-up for Kurama and Hiei to find out for sure. And I really loved it when Kurama pointed out what an idiot Hiei had been not to notice when he and Kagome were together that she hadn't had a period in months. LOL!! That was brilliant. I can't believe Hiei insisted on going right over and finding out, though. He sure hasn't been in any hurry to see Kagome. I loved the way Sango told Kurama off. I can't believe Kurama told her that just because he didn't want HER didn't mean he wouldn't have wanted his kid. Because he didn't break up with her because he didn't want her -- he broke up with her because he was afraid of how serious a relationship with her would be because he LOVED her. And Hiei really loved Kagome, too, even if he wouldn't admit it. He broke up with her to give her a chance to find the kind of relationship he thought he couldn't give her, right? Only to find out he probably COULD. Neither one of those guys has any right to complain. I was disappointed at Hiei's attitude about Yusuke being with Kagome, though. I thought he hadn't gotten over her. And he sure can't call her a lying bitch -- what did she lie about? I think she was way too easy on him. I want to see some serious, gut-churning jealousy from Hiei and Kurama over the girls!! And I want to see Kurama and Shizuru fight. Has he told her yet that he DOES have two sons, after all? I loved Touya's thoughts about being put on the spot in front of Sangos two exes! But I'm really glad he spoke up. Ah ha! Coyote Ugly bar -- there's the theme. LOL!! but I wanted to see Kagome get up and dance and Hiei freak out. Heh heh! And what DID happen to her last boyfriend? Heh heh! Great chapter! Just what I needed, though I'm hoping to see Hiei start acting like he wants Kagome back. And for him to DO something about it. (You know how much I love that couple!) And Kurama needs some serious ass-kicking. Bring on the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Tushuri on June 27, 2007
    Oh I love it! Amazing writing as always on your part. I'm almost saddend that Kagome didn't get her turn on the bar but I can imagine. I'm, as always, curious about what will happen with the realationships and can't wait to find out what happens next. Amazing writing and I will be looking foward to another update.
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  • From kawaiigirl4life on June 25, 2007
    Love the story! You got me hooked!Baby daddy's drama! Please continue......
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  • From ANON - anon on June 23, 2007
    please update.
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  • From Silent Pluto on June 20, 2007
    hehehehe
    (evil laugh)
    the plot thickens
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  • From Ellen on June 18, 2007
    Oops sorry missed reviewing for a bit...
    I'm all caught up now though. Thank You Thank You THANK YOU!!!
    Oh goodness if things weren't complicated before they get more and more complicated with each chapter and new love interest. O.o;
    Its so sweet and frustrating at the same time. Definitely keeping my interest.
    Thanks again for sharing and I hope to read S'more soon!
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  • From madmiko on June 17, 2007
    Oh, wow! NICE one! I'm still rooting for Hiei and Kagome to find their way back to each other, but even I can't deny that Yusuke is the man on the spot, and he's making all the right moves and saying all the right things. Hiei is waiting too long to make his move. Damn it. But I completely, totally, absolutely LOVED the parts with Sango, Kurama, and Touya! Yay! We found out so much in this chapter. Kurama is still a complete dog. And he and Shiz are actually ENGAGED? And they're having an open relationship? Well, I wouldn't waste my time getting married, in that case. And having already been divorced once, I would think Shiz would be smart enough to avoid that pitfall. The way you had the go-between deliver Sango's message to Kurama was sheer genius!! First, we discover Kurama apparently still sticks his dick in every hole in the wall, then when he didn't come out to talk to the woman, she let it out about him having two kids. Hee hee! Go Sango! And THEN, after he and Shiz have a nice little fight about THAT, they end up at the restaurant WITH those kids!! BRILLIANT! I'd love to see Youko turn on his Dad and treat him to some of those dirty tricks. I like it that he picked up on the fact that Kurama was looking at them in disgust, AND that he was still making his mother sad. And THEN Kurama realized who the kids were. Oh, joy! I hope he wet his pants! Bringing in Touya and giving him a background with Sango where he had had a crush on her was just what the doctor ordered. And now they're going on a date! I'm so very happy! It's going to be a VERY interesting night at the bar, isn't it? I can't wait!!! And I really DO hope you're going to reunite Hiei and Kagome, even if Yusuke is a part of it, too. Would a committed threesome be acceptable in that world? I'm hoping so!! Will Naraku show up for opening night, too? It's going to be GREAT!!!
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  • From ANON - White Kitsune Shiva on June 17, 2007
    confrontation confrontation confrontation confrontation confrontation confrontation
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  • From MIAMax on June 17, 2007
    GAH! I cannot wait to read the rest of this!
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  • From ANON - Bluey on June 17, 2007
    woo go sango!!! haha
    good last two chapters.
    can't wait to see what's going
    to happen next
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 16, 2007
    That's just great. I can't wait to see what he has to say for himself. Serves him right for being an asshole. I wanted more than a kiss between Kagome and Yusuke. He should have let her taste the cock. keep up the good work

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  • From LadyMinamino on June 16, 2007
    Once again you have made it so that I don't like Kurama. You are good. Of course, I don't think any man would believe it if some woman came to him saying he had kids. But once looking at them it is obvious. He is going to feel so bad. Ha Ha Ha! I love the way this story is going. Please keep writing. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From KNK00232 on June 16, 2007
    Woooo! Go Yusuke! LMAO at Kurama. What an idiot. I love the fact that Youko has already decided he doesn't want Shizura either. Oh this is gonna be so good. And thank you, thank you for finally giving Sango someone worth her while. At least I'm hoping Touya is. Just wondering if Youko and Shippou will accept it though. And I am so looking forward to Sango and Kurama when they get face to face. Oh please let Sango hand his ass to him. Not to mention Kagome handing Hiei his. And I almost forgot about the blonde in the first chapter of this part. When will that be coming into play? And when do we get more Botan action? Again, thanks for such a great read.
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  • From hieikag on June 15, 2007
    thanks for continuing
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  • From ANON - White Kitsune Shiva on June 15, 2007
    wow
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