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From KNK00232 on June 14, 2007
Another great chapter. I like were it's going so far. And I got to say I love the new, improved Botan. You go girl! They all three have grown and matured and I can't wait till Sango and Kagome tell the fox and Hiei off. Please tell me thats coming. And I'm not going to try and guess about the popcorn, puppies or the surprise. Though I'm hoping it's a big surprise.
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From madmiko on June 14, 2007
Very interesting chapter. So, Naraku never got rid of Kagura and now she's pregnant. I can't believe he brought Botan the bill! LOL!! Loved her comment about his wife and the coal! It's been kind of funny seeing who is meeting up with whom. Hiei approached Sango, but she won't go near Kurama, and vice versa, and he hasn't even tried to see Kagome yet. Yusuke, on the other hand, jumped right in and has been around both of them. And Naraku went for it, even though he's even more tangled up in his marriage than before. But, Hiei is considering going to the bar to see Kagome, huh? I can't wait for that!! But he may find himself struggling to catch up with Yusuke since he's dragging his feet. And when he and Kurama both find out that they're daddies -- heh heh! It's going to be priceless! You know, I have to say, I liked Midoriko mentioning that she hadn't liked Kagome's last boyfriend, because I've still been thinking how nice it would be to see some of the other male characters come for the girls, and I think Kouga would make an excellent stalker following Kagome to her hometown. It would give Yusuke a chance to play hero since he's a cop, if Kouga got threatening or violent. Heck, it would give Hiei a chance, too, since he lives so near her house -- he could see the guy slinking around the neighborhood. Oh! And I liked the way Sango asked about Hiei's wife, since she has to know from Yukina that he isn't married. And he just ignored her. Very Hiei-like. But he mentioned her husband, and found out she's divorced. That's one thing Yukina didn't mention -- whether or not Kagome was married. And Hiei didn't ask. I'm betting he assumes she WAS married, since that's what he tossed her aside so she could do. I really can't wait for all this great stuff to come out!
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From Patty530 on June 14, 2007
Great chapter. I think your doing a great job. My heart is not so broken.now. *sigh* LOL. Love this story, and I'm hopeful about Sango and Kurama.
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From ANON - White Kitsune Shiva on June 10, 2007
YEAH! That was fuckin funny. Great update, cant wait for the celebration. update soon.
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From Patty530 on June 10, 2007
Another great chapter. Poor Yusuke. You've got a real winner here. keep it up. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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From ANON - Anon on June 10, 2007
woo awesome! go girls!! haha
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From ANON - Tushuri on June 09, 2007
I love it once again! Keep up the amazing work. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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From madmiko on June 09, 2007
That was an interesting chapter. I hate it that Sango is still crying over Kurama, though. She needs to get over him. Please send that woman a good man! Seriously, I'm thinking Sesshoumaru. Kurama is quite a prize, isn't he? Shizuru comes over when he calls her and their sex life is never boring. I wouldn't have taken her for being so stupid as to put up with that kind of crap. I love it that Botan didn't let Naraku's woman get the best of her. And I'm glad Kagome told Yusuke exactly why she didn't tell Hiei, -- but I can't wait for her to throw it up to Hiei himself. He's going to have to do some serious convincing to get her back. Interesting that Yusuke has a daughter. Hmmm. I really can't wait to see what Kurama and Hiei's reactions are to finding out they are fathers. By the way, who was the older man Sango was married to? Yomi, perhaps? Heh heh! You definitely know how to keep the surprises coming.
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From LadyMinamino on June 09, 2007
Oh that was funny. Botan should feel very proud. I can't believe Kurama. Even if he didn't want to talk to her she was still a customer. That goes to show you that some guys never change. I'm glad that Kagome's daughter and Yusuke's are going to be friends. Maybe that will help to push those two together. I can't wait to read more.
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From KNK00232 on June 09, 2007
Yet again, more questions than answers. In my thoughts, Yueske is the one that holds all the peices. Now if he'd just put them all together for someone else, anyone else. He's going to have to say something to one or both of the guys. Not much of a friend if he doesn't. I would have told Kagome she had a time limit on keeping quiet. I know I wouldn't be able to keep my mouth shut. And Kurama is still the same old Kurama then. Here we were all thinking he had a serious relationship with Shizura. I think she's going to push it though and the fox will freak. And Sango had stuff to decorate her office huh? Maybe something slid out of the bag and someone will find it. I wonder if it's Yueske that gets invited to dinner by one of the girls or maybe the girls get invite to Yukina's. A meeting? That could be anything involving anyone. Maybe one of the girls meets someone new. And the bill I'm assuming is Sango's van repair, but I'm probably wrong. hhhmmm Is pondering about forty to fifty different variations on everything . . .
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From ANON - White Kitsune Shiva on June 08, 2007
yeah that was good, now im curious will kurama drop shuzure for sango, when will they find out, when will botan get in town. ahh! update soon.
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From madmiko on June 08, 2007
Ah! The newest chapter was just what the doctor ordered in terms of what I'd hoped for with Hiei. Yay!! I love the irony of him breaking up with Kagome so she could find someone who could love her and have a relationship like he thought she wanted -- marriage, kids, the whole shebang, and she DIDN'T! And that HE was the one guy who couldn't move on. I LOVE IT!! I have to confess, I still think you've written them perfectly as a couple, without Yusuke in the mix. And I'm still hoping to see the girls be mature about their situations, while the guys SUFFER through watching some serious competition for their hearts. I'd like to see Inuyasha return, and I think Kouga should take a run at Kagome. I'd also like to see guys like Chuu and maybe Shishi Wakamara put in an appearance to chase the girls. Heck, bring on Sesshoumaru! You shocked the heck out of me with Kurama having moved on, and into a SERIOUS relationship, no less. We're set for some serious angst there. But, again, I want HIM to be the one pining away. This time around, the girls should be holding all the cards. We don't know what Naraku's situation is yet. I hope Botan's bar really cuts into his business! But, I don't see how with nothing but a jukebox. They need to have live bands or a sports bar theme or something to compete with those pool tables. Going to do anything with the girls' artistic talents? I was really surprised Kagome and Sango went to business school. Well, I'm looking forward to seeing what you have in mind for everyone this time around. Oh! Gotta mention how much I love the way you named the kids! And I really liked Yukina's thoughts about how she fell in love with Kazuma when she was a teenager and that it's the real deal -- nice! Thanks for the insight into their marriage and family -- at least SOMEONE is happy in this!! LOL!!
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From ANON - Tushuri on June 07, 2007
I LOVE it!!! I can't wait to see what the guys do and how the story plays out. Amazing writing as always and I'll be looking for the update.
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From LadyMinamino on June 07, 2007
Can you say 'The shit is getting ready to hit the fan.'? I'm glad to see that the girls aren't letting it affect them that they are back. But it is good to see the guys suffer a little. I can't wait to see what happens when they run into each other. *Sharpens claws* Keep up the good work and update soon.
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From KNK00232 on June 07, 2007
WooHoo! An update. Great chappie to introduce Hiei & Kurama's current situations. Poor Shizura. I'm with Hiei on that one I think she's going to get replaced, but not soon though. No I can see it all dragging out between everyone. So does Midorioko get her kitty (Kiara maybe) does Yueske figure out there's twins and their age or can he not figure out his bar tap at Botan's, Sango gets towed by whom? hhhmmm Can't wait for another update and all hell to break loose. Maybe Shizura's kid is Koronue... just a thought.
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