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By : LadyShinomori
  • From Ellen on May 24, 2007
    Now that I have read a few of the other reviews I have to agree with madmiko, I loved her review. I want to see what happens next not yrs on down the road.
    I don't think Sango needs to spread herself around though.. but I do think the guys need to fight/prove themselves to get the girls back.. I like happy endings and I'd like to see the guys happy too. Yeah they were jerks but they weren't the only ones making bets and some of it is to blame on poor communication, best thing for a relationship communication ... hehehe I'm rambling now. Thanks again, it is your story do with it what you will! I will read! ^_^
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  • From Ellen on May 24, 2007
    Wow have loved every min of the read and I'm glad you finished it, but that's the end? o.O? I have been reading for a while, just not very good at the review thing. Got a nice surprise with all the last chapters at once.
    I was kind of hoping the guys would give chase ... then when you added the cops the guys could use the cops to find them and then bail them out of jail. I know that a woman doesn't need to have a man to be happy and fulfilled ... blah... I would be happier though. Thank you so much for sharing. Please do write s'more I would love to read it.
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  • From ANON - CyndeLou on May 24, 2007
    I loved this story!! You really should continue with them as adults. So PLEASE PLEASE continue!!!!! I'll be looking for it.
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  • From ANON - Gosh on May 24, 2007
    Id like to see waht happens to Kagome and her baby and if they ever find happiness whether its with the boys or someone else.Please create a sepual.
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  • From ANON - jet on May 24, 2007
    I loved this story! Please please please write about them as adults! There wasn't much closure for the girls, and there wasn't enough Kag/Yus. I'm hoping for a five or yen year reunion where the girls are happy. Boton maybe married...Sango dating and successful...Kagome getting together with Yusuke...Anyway, love the writing! It made my days better and told a great story.
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  • From madmiko on May 24, 2007
    Okay. Just saw the last chapter up. I'm so sad! I hate to see it end. I DO love it that the guys all DID realize what fools they were. I liked the way you devoted a paragraph or two to each of them as they thought about it. I have to confess, though, that if you're thinking of doing a sequel, I'd rather see them a few months down the road instead of a few years. I just see a lot of potential in this summer's events and adventures. (And I don't want the guys to move on without them. Heck! I want a happy, romantic ending, darn it! And Hiei should have to change some of those diapers, too. Heh heh!) I absolutely loved Sango's farewell at the school -- nice touch! And Botan really did a number on Naraku's car. LOL!! I don't know if I mentioned before or not, but I really liked the way Kagome had started thinking about the baby, and the fact that she knew she loved Hiei and would love the baby, too -- even though she knew it was not all going to be fun or pleasant. I also liked it that she wasn't after Hiei to marry her -- she just wanted to be sure he loved her. Seriously, I'd love for the story to continue from here. Hiei SHOULD find out he fathered a baby before it's born. You know, something else I kept hoping to see, or at least THOUGHT we might see was a great little scene involving Hiei's job and Kagome's bad driving. I was waiting for you to spring an accident on us, with the car being towed to Hiei's place of work and him, and possibly the others, freaking out trying to find out if the girls were okay. At this point, I'd like to see Inuyasha and Yusuke maybe keep in touch with the girls or go out to see them while the other guys are still looking for them. Heck, I was even dreaming of the guys showing up just in time to hear Kouga pledge his love to Kagome and promise to take care of her and her baby. And considering Kurama's spreading his stuff around so much, I thought Sango should have a action going with someone else. Like I said, I was hoping to see Botan's eccentric aunt maybe send some young men their way, so the guys would have to really fight to get them back. You see, every chapter you wrote sent my imagination off in lots of different directions. You really did a fantastic job. This was an enthralling read. I'll definitely keep an eye out for anything else you write!
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  • From bluemoon1755 on May 24, 2007
    Yes you must write a second part to this story, just thinking that you wont make me all most cry. You can't leave a fantastic story like this go, with out people knowing what happens next. So please start doing the next part soon.
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  • From ANON - white kitsune shiva on May 23, 2007
    I have read this story from the beginning. I have kept up with every single up date, keeping you on my "FAVORITES" checking DAILY for any kind of update. I don't really like: Kurama/Sango...(I believe he's Kagomes because they relate on a leave on one else can understand)...Hiei/Kagome...(I think Sango is for him because I think she challenges him, in wits and courage. I believe she can show him the love he needs)...and Im just be real and say not ONCE has the THOUGHT of BOTAN/NARAKU!!!! EVER, EVER, EVER crossed my mind. But its because of authors like YOU who are full of imagination and shit that I love to open, myself to new and different things. I PRAY that you make a sequal for such hard core fans...completely and utterly talking about myself here...or make some new wild and crazy ass story SOON! P.S. U R THE LONGEST REVIEW I HAVE EVER WRITTEN>>>TYPED:D
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  • From EternalTwylight on May 23, 2007
    More please *begs and whimpers* You can't leave it there, so much was left unfinished. I want to know if they come back, how the baby turns out, what Sango's secret was. You've just got to do a two parter. I want to see them as adults, I want to know every juicy little detail. I've been hooked on this story from the first chapter and damnit... I want more!!!
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  • From ANON - Drac on May 23, 2007
    That was actually a lot better than I expected. I'd love to see how you make them out as adults. I'm also kinda curious as to whether or not you see them reconciling. Nice work!
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  • From Patty530 on May 23, 2007
    Please don't end it like this. Maybe I'm a hopeless romantic, but lets have at least one happy ending.
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  • From KNK00232 on May 23, 2007
    OMG! You have to do more. Please write more. I want to know what those bastards faces look like when they finally find out. I even promise to continue to break my no reviewing habit if you'll right more. I swear you're writing is addictive. I use to make fun of my mother for watching soap operas. (Hangs head) I will no more.
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  • From ANON - Laini on May 23, 2007
    Wow...that was kinda sad in the end. Hell yes I would like to see a fic where they are adults. I really enjoyed this fic and hope to see a second part. Good work,I salute you lol. ^_^ *prays for a sequel*
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  • From ANON - BT on May 23, 2007
    Hi! I love this story. This is an okay ending, but you need to finish it. We're gonna want to know what happens to all of them and how they are as adults. We'll also want to see whether or not they get together once they're more mature. I wanna know how Kagome raises her child. I wanna know about Sango's kid too (i'm assuming that's where you were going with that). I wanna know about the divorce and whether or not the guys can get their heads out of their asses long enough to make things right with their girls. Please, Please make a second story.
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  • From LadyMinamino on May 23, 2007
    Oh God that was great! The guys to me are total idiots. But hey what can you say. I feel bad that Kagome couldn't tell Hiei about the baby, but she was probably right about how he would react. All the girls were hurt and they will survive. That is what you call "GIRL POWER". I wish my graduation would have been that eventful. I thought that was great the throwing the cap and gowns down to reveal nighties. And Sango putting how she felt about Kurama in her speech. I thought that was romantic. I bet he feels like a fool. The part where Botan basically f*cked up Naraku car was excellent. And then when Yusuke went back in the bar and basically told them that the girls had just left was so funny. This is a great story and YOU CANNOT END IT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!
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