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By : LadyShinomori

From ANON - B.E.B. on May 23, 2007
OMG!!! that was soo good, the ending was very unexpected but i thought ther was goin to be some Kagome/Yusuke going on besides the flirting but it was all that any ways and i hope you write a second part!!!
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From ANON - Tushuri on May 23, 2007
I LOVE this story. I love your writing style and I am constantly checking to see if it's been updated. I WISH you would write a second part to continue with this story. Your writing is excelent and I hope in the future to be reading more of your work. And I do hope that you write a second part and I'll be on the look-out for one. Congradualations on a well done story.
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From KNK00232 on May 23, 2007
Again, I'm not one to review anything, but DAMN!!!! No doubt you planned to leave us all hanging like this. Oh the possabilities! Will Sango wrap the teddy up and give to Kurama as a grad present? What part is Inuyasha going to play in all this? Can't help but think there's something more to come from him. And the line about Sango has her own problems as well as Kagome, big ones. What was that appointment for anyways? HHmmmm. I'll say it one more time. You need to accept PayPal so we can all pay you to do this full time.
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From madmiko on May 23, 2007
Whew! Well, I am just emotionally wrung out after reading those five chapters. I have to confess, I'm glad you turned all the guys into dicks at once so I can just hate them all. LOL!! Can't believe Kurama wimped out again like that. And Hiei was just a grade A asshole. And what a shocker about Naraku!! Yikes!! I can't believe you threw that at us like that! You're a genius. So, the girls are going to leave for the summer. Will the guys be like Inuyasha and realize what they lost? I sure hope so!! Of course, Kagome is free game for Yusuke, if he decides to go visit her. Then again, she IS pregnant. I loved the part where Inuyasha took Sango to the prom. He's the only likeable guy in the whole story now. I'll bet he'd kick Hiei's ass if he found out Kagome was pregnant. (I've got to believe Hiei is just foling himself about his feelings, though. He thinks he's so smart, but he's as dumb as the rest of them.) You know what I'd like to see? Before they go, I'd like for Kagome to paint a picture, or even a series of pictures of her with a baby and then maybe showing her with a child growing up. Just the two of them. And while she's gone, have Hiei see them. Has he seen the picture she did of him? It'd make a great exhibit at Karasu's gallery. And she could be "discovered" as a real artist. At least it might cement her future since she's going to have a baby to care for by herself. Did I mention how glad I was that Sango went up to try to save Botan? It's about time SOMEONE told someone else what the heck they knew about their significant other. LOL!! Man, my stomach is just churning with all this angst right now, but I know the best part is still to come, isn't it? You're going to have some great stuff to write when all the guys realize how unbelievably STUPID they've been. I have to wonder, though, how in the world Naraku got away from his wife to attend a prom? And no one else knew he was married? Besides the jerks, I mean. You know, every one of those guys, -- even Yusuke -- deserves to have their world fall apart on them. I sure hope you deliver some justice for all of us fuming fans. LOL!! You know, I'd love to see them all go crawling back to the girls only to discover that Botan's aunt has set them up with some REAL men. LOL!! Since you won't be able to post for a while, I hope you're going to be doing something fun -- you deserve it after the wonderful way you've been entertaining us with this story! But, I'll be waiting anxiously for your return. Thanks so much for sharing your imagination and talent with us!
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From Patty530 on May 23, 2007
OMG. Go Sango! Well hell, I hope they both kick ass! Kurama is back to offically being a jackass. My heart is still broken over the way things went with Kurama and Sango. Hope something gets worked out. Update as soon as you can.
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From Patty530 on May 23, 2007
Ok now my heart is broke. :) Loved the chapter, especially Inuyasha making sure Sango went to the prom.
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From Patty530 on May 23, 2007
I feel sorry for Kagome but I have to admit my favorite parts of the story are Kurama and Sango. I like where it looks like they're going. (thats where I hope it goes). Sweet, sexy hot, and romantic. Who could ask for anything more?
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From madmiko on May 22, 2007
Well, hot as usual! Nothing like that naughty 'other people in the room' sex. I see that even after his irritation at her little "joke," and his full-blown thought about them having so much unprotected sex that it would have been possible, and therefore not funny, Hiei STILL isn't using anything. Sorry, but if he's being that irresponsible, he has no right to complain. And if Kurama and Sango keep it up, she's going to be joining Kagome soon. LOL!! So, the gals are going to have an all-night gabfest -- those are always fun. I'm sure they will all find out all sorts of things, -- not just Kag's condition. Maybe they'll make plans for the summer. And we can hear if Naraku is ever going to get to collect on that bet. LOL!! Looking forward to it!
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From ANON - Laini on May 22, 2007
HA,figures Hiei would do something so naughty lol. You know it doesnt surprise me that Kagome is pregnant...makes wonder about Sango tho. Im still trying to figure out if Hiei know about Yusukes feelings for Kagome..*cough* but yeah. Loved the chap,update soon. ^_^
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From bluemoon1755 on May 22, 2007
YAY! Another update can't wait to read and see what happens next, so I hope you update asap please.
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From Patty530 on May 22, 2007
Honey you did it again! LOVED IT! I've said it before, but I'll repeat myself..I love where it seems you're taking the Kurama and Songo storyline. It's both sexy and romantic. Keep it up. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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From ANON - Laini on May 21, 2007
Hmmm now things are interesting. *snort* Of course Kurama has feelings for her..how could anyone NOT notice? lol. Loved the chap,cant wait for the next one. Update soon. ^_^
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From LadyMinamino on May 21, 2007
I am loving this. I can't believe that Kagome is pregnant. I liked the way she tried to tell Hiei. He is going to feel like shit when he realizes that it wasn't a joke. But that has me wondering about Sango. They haven't been using anything so they had better watch out. I can't believe Miroku. The nerve of that guy. I liked it when Kurama made his face unrecognizable(spelling). What is it about Sango now? She gets into a serious relationship and decides to have sex and now all these guys think that they can have her. Jin should just forget it. If she didn't want what little bit he probably has then she isn't going to want it now. That is probably why he said all those lies. He knew she wouldn't do anything with him because he was too small. He had to make himself look better. But I loved the way that Kurama and Sango handled it. Of course he would have looked good as road kill also. Ha ha ha! I can't wait to read more.keep up the good work and update soon.
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From madmiko on May 21, 2007
Loved it that Jin finally made an appearance. And he was still spreading the same kind of crap aboput Sango. He really should have known that sooner or later he'd come across whoever DID end up being her first -- great that it was Kurama! Can't believe Kurama didn't let him have it when he kept on with the lies. Hmmm. I am really still amazed at how you managed to redeem Kurama so much that he's now the GOOD boyfriend and Hiei's the jerk. Wonder where he was off to in such a rush? You know, if he thought about it, he really should be able to tell that Kagome DID skip a period -- if they've been having sex as much as you said. Unlike Kurama, he hasn't had to take a week off. So, Kurama knows Yusuke is interested in Kagome, huh? And he saw him with Sango in the park? LOL!! That's what happens when you have sex in public places. 7 weeks until graduation? Good thing for Kagome. Since it's her first pregnancy, and she's in such good shape physically, she probably won't start showing until she's close to four months. Is she starting to think about what the heck she's going to do? She needs to grow up. I would imagine her condition might be a turn off to Yusuke. I'm still holding out hope for Hiei to come through for her -- still waiting for him to step up and admit his feelings. Looking forward to more!
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From Patty530 on May 21, 2007
Wonderful as always. I LOVE whats going on with Sango and Kurama. I feel sorry for Kagome. But Damn Sango and Kurama are hot together. (sighs). Keep it Up. :)
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