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By : LadyShinomori

From ANON - Shiva on May 20, 2007
DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MOTHER FUCKERS GOT DA SHIT BEAT OUT OF EM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YUSUKE GOIN GET KAGOME NOW? HIEI LOOKED LIKE HE WAS READY TO FUCK A BITCH UP OVER DAT SHIT.
CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT!
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From madmiko on May 19, 2007
Okay. Now Kagome is a certified MORON and Hiei is a dick. So much for that relationship. You have to be some special kind of stupid to "test out" how your guy is going to feel about you being pregnant by passing it off as a joke. And when he knew they were all coming up with stupid pranks, for him to get so enraged seems really out of whack. Since he knows they were having unprotected sex, for him to get so mad at HER is completely unreasonable. With Kagome's thought about him never acting jealous over her, well, I guess that just blows all MY assumptions about their relationship out of the water, huh? I was afraid it was too good to last. *sigh* So, is this going to be Hiei/Kagome THEN Yusuke/Kagome? Or is Yusuke going to have to fill in the part of the relationship that Hiei is lacking since he's such a jerk? So, Miroku's been hearing rumors, huh? About both Sango and Kurama? He likes to hang out with high school kids? Well, excellent chapter, as always. Not my favorite, of course, heh heh! But excellent, all the same. You sure know how to keep it going!
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From Patty530 on May 19, 2007
WOW. What can I say that I haven't said in other reviews? I LOVE IT! Please keep it.
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From ANON - Laini on May 19, 2007
HOLY HELL..uh yeah I'd say Kurama made his point. I find that odd about Hiei too..i mean he hasnt even told Kagome how he truly feels...i dont blame Kagome for starting to wonder either. I'm sry but other then Hiei and Kagome being the cutest couple ever...Yusuke and Kagome are about up there w/ me, lmao. Loved the update,a pissed off and jealous Kurama is so damn sexy...*dreamy sigh* lol. Update soon. ^_^
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From ANON - Laini on May 19, 2007
WHOOT,an update lol. U know i almost feel sry for Botan *winces* But she could handle Naraku,i think. Makes me wonder if Hiei knows Yusuke likes Kagome...*coughs* Interesting. Sango? A visitor?....Who??? Damn i need to know these things! >.< lol. Love this fic dearly,update soon. ^_^
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From ANON - Ryu on May 18, 2007
Oh my god those two have no shame LOL I love it. If Kagome isn't careful he's gonna picking public places on purpose just to see how far he can get her to go. Either that or the more forbidden locations.. He seemed to like the desk thing, I'm sure Kagome would get a kick out of defiling her fathers office just to get him back for the houjo incident. Oh and Botan's aunt sounds like an absolute blast. I can just see how much trouble the girls will get into if they go to stay with her. Great chapter
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From ANON - Ryu on May 18, 2007
Oh man! Nice Yusuke/Kag action there. I can't imagine how forward he's being but then thats Yusuke for you. I wonder how long it will be before Hiei picks up on the fact that his friend has the hots for her and how much trouble will it cause. I'm surprised she didn't deck him for some of the comments he made lol Good job
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From ANON - Ryu on May 18, 2007
Figures she wouldn't even consider getting pregnant until after it'd happened lol Can't wait to see how Hiei takes this, assuming she tells him any time soon. I imagine that she won't be able to keep the cat in the bag for long though, sooner or later she's gonna start showing unless Hiei keeps this habit up of hiking her skirt up lol good chapter
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From ANON - Ryu on May 18, 2007
I really need to stop waiting so long to review so it quits telling me I've reviewed too many times in one day. I really wish Kagome had slugged Kanna too. The bitch needs to realize that she's history and there's no way in hell Hiei's ever gonna take her back. I think the fire fly woulda probably enjoyed seeing Kagome kicking her ass too lol good job
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From madmiko on May 18, 2007
Loved it! More great Hiei/Kagome hotness! I really like Botan's aunt. She seems a bit eccentric, but lots of fun. And what an intriguing proposition she gave Botan to visit and possibly housesit. Wonder if the gals will go and take the guys with them? And Kagome still hasn't confirmed her condition? And she's STILL having unprotected sex? Poor, dumb girl. What would it have hurt for Hiei to tell her the girl Yusuke was talking about WAS Sango? Seems like that would be welcome news, and since they're together, it sure wouldn't be hurting anything. Hiei seems quite obsessed with Kagome, but he doesn't say anything about his feelings or about THEM as a couple. Hope his reserve doesn't come back and bite him in the ass if Yusuke decides to make a real move on her. I'll be looking forward to the next exciting installment, as always!
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From Patty530 on May 18, 2007
Honey you did it again. Great chapter. Is Kurama going to confess that he always had feelings for Sango? What about poor Kagome? I love the way you have the relationship between Kurama and Sango going. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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From ANON - Laini on May 17, 2007
Nice,Sango being brazen lol. Kagome and Yusuke...hanging out..conversing....which leads to the topic of sex...*thinks* Odd, lmao. Loved the chap,especially w/ Kagome and Yusuke haha. Update soon. ^_^
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From madmiko on May 17, 2007
HA! Another gem. Nice beach action with Sango and Kurama. He's into the romance, isn't he? THAT has to be a switch for him. And what's this? Hiei gropes Kagome all the time? LOL!! That girl seriously needs to stop fooling around and find out, -- that way she get on something if she's not before she BECOMES pregnant. Loved the buddying up she and Yusuke were doing. But, whew! They go way beyond simple teasing or flirting with that kind of talk. Heck, it wasn't even the kind of thing to get a girl hot and bothered -- more like disgusted. LOL!! And what kind of a moron is she to think about him like that when she might be pregnant with another guy's baby? I'll definitely grant her the curiosity, but she's got enough on her plate. Loved her point about guys wanting girls to be virgins, but how do they expect that if they're not? LOL!! Interesting that Yusuke is wondering if Hiei knows he's interested in her. I am definitely hoping he has a talk with him soon!! I wonder what Yusuke thinks Hiei's relationship with her is? Does he not think Hiei cares about her, or does he really think Hiei would be willing to share her? (Because apparently, that would ruin her tight fit for him. LOL!!) That little fire demon had better be telling her how he feels soon if his best friend is trying to edge him out. And what's going on with Naraku and Botan? Will Kurama have to cough up $500 soon? You're just doing such a great job with this whole thing! You're still keeping me on the edge of my seat! This story has it all -- humor, angst, romance, suspense. You've got it going on!
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From Patty530 on May 17, 2007
What else can I say? Loved it! Love how the Kurama and Sango stryline is going...keep it up.
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From madmiko on May 17, 2007
that chapter may have been short, but it was BIG. (Kind of like Hiei. Heh heh!) Yowza! So, Kag is having a little pregnancy scare. Those little sticks you pee on are cheap, she should do it. Naturally she'd be a little scared to mention the possibility to Hiei, but once she finds out for sure, ... Why the heck AREN'T her and Sango on something? The pill, the shot? Those are more reliable than condoms anyway. And I know I've said it before, but your description of their artwork just really adds a lot to this. I would LOVE to see someone draw that painting!! Do you draw? It's really sad that Kagome and Hiei are having such an intimate relationship, and she doesn't even know if he will take her to the prom. and by intimate, I'm talking about all the time they're spending together -- not just the sex. You've made her feelings perfectly clear -- loved the comments Karasu made about Hiei having some hold over her that brings out a passion and intensity in her art. And you've shown in mnay subtle ways that Hiei cares for her, but apparently she isn't even confident enough about their "relationship" to call him her boyfriend. He needs to step up here!! I can't wait to see what kind of surprise Kurama has for Sango. And I'm not going to jump to conclusions like I usually do about your teasers, because I'm always WRONG. So, Kagome might be going to spend an evening with someone else, but I'm not assuming we're talking about anything going on that might put a kink in her relationship with Hiei. But i can't help but wonder who it will be? The obvious conclusion would be Yusuke, so I'm wondering if she's going to end up talking with Inuyasha instead. Or heck, maybe Miroku or Hojo will pop back up. Maybe her DAD will want to spend some time with her. (Okay, I confess, I AM nervous about it!! I don't want Yusuke mussying the waters with her and Hiei now that they're so established. And I DEFINITELY can't imagine her having sex with ANOTHER guy when she's already scared she might be pregnant. And she obviously is pretty much in love with Hiei. AArrrggghhh!!! You are just too, too good at this. The waiting -- even when you update more frequently than any other author I know, is killing me!! Bring it on!)
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