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Reviews for What a Mess

By : razvanwink
  • From eyecanread on April 03, 2012
    Brilliant! I laughed all the way through. It wasn't so unbelievable or out of character to be ridiculous or unreadable. Bravo. I enjoyed it immensely.
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  • From ANON - Akina on June 06, 2007
    omg...Rin was watching???....lol, anyways, i totally love the story!its Awesomes!
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  • From ANON - Swiffa on May 01, 2007
    Hey, great fic. I really enjoyed it. Very entertaining. I'm looking forward to reading yur other fics.
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  • From Qiana on May 01, 2007
    Perfect end
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  • From rowdygirl on May 01, 2007
    absolutely hilarious! i love it. good job!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 30, 2007
    Wow
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  • From bluemoonvixen on April 30, 2007
    Loved it! ^.^ Poor Kagome having to travel inside a slug. o.O; At least it talked. lol

    The cheering bush at the end had me giggling. Would make me paranoid, but still was funny. ^.^
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  • From JLucPitard on April 30, 2007
    Well thought out and very funny idea. I'm enjoying it for the laughs!
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  • From ANON - AmberEyez on April 30, 2007
    Awwwwwwwwww happy ending! fun story, too. Can't wait to read your next one!
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  • From Mikka on April 30, 2007
    Hey again! I'm sure you're read lots of reviews like this one, but I really wanted to say that I loved "What a Mess" and it's the fanfic that I've laughed the most while reading! Seriously, the scene when Sesshoumaru throws meat at Kagome's head, I was like: "Oh gosh, he didn't! ... He did!! LOL!"

    You've done a great job! And even if the characters where a bit... out of character, I still loved the way you've made them real. I laughed so much with their child fights! I never thought Sesshoumaru could turn out to be such a hilarious character. And the beach scene, when Kagome is shouting and ranting at nobody, it reminded me of Elizabeth Swan (in the POTC: Dead Man's Chest, dunno if you saw it) when she's shouting "ENOUGH! I'VE HAD IT!" at the three guys who are sword fighting, and nobody's listening to what she's saying. XD

    What more can I say? Oh, thank you! Thank you so much for making my day with this fic. I don't know if you like Kouga x Kagome, but I'd love to read a fanfic of yours dedicated to that couple. I'll be waiting for the "Spark" update. Good luck with your novel! *hugs*
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  • From szaugg on April 30, 2007
    man, I am enjoying this. I kept meaning to read it and kept forgetting, so glad I finally remembered! I haven't yet finished, but I'm sure I'll enjoy everything coming up as much as the stuff I've already read! I've been reading spark, but have to stop for a little while. Poor rin just got to me so much that I'm gonna have to let the angst inside die a little before I continue, but I know I'm going to some day, as it was so well written. This more light hearted humorous smut is exactly what I needed right now. Thank you!


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  • From ANON - Kouga's Gurl on April 30, 2007
    it would be funny if kagome walked in on sess bangin another chick! lol. btw update asap i loved it!
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  • From geniegirl117 on April 30, 2007
    I absolutly love this story i think it hilarious and i just love it but i hope she beats the crap out of him he left her
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  • From Qiana on April 30, 2007
    I hope she beats him up, He left her
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  • From ANON - mrsjonathandavis on April 30, 2007
    Ahaha! I love your story, its fucking hilarious. A real treat to sit down and read. Keep up the good work! Oh and i highly anticipate the next chapters coveted lemon. Hawt demon shex! - mrsjonathandavis
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