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Reviews for My wish

By : Miliinka
  • From WiccanMethuselah on April 25, 2007
    I loved this one-shot! It was very nicely done, just the right amount of angst and suspense, with a little OOC-ness in Sesshoumaru, but not too much. I REALLY liked the ending (although I am a sucker for happy endings anyway)!! That was a wonderful place to leave it, however, you also left it open for expansion, should you decide to base a full-fledged fic on this. I think you have a lot of promise as an author, your writing needs a bit of polishing where it concerns spelling and grammar, but overall this was quite good! Thanks for sharing it with us!!!
    :D
    ~~Wiccan~~
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  • From kookookitty on April 25, 2007
    yes i enjoyed this, it was sad because she was leaving so i cried and then in the end when she was greeted by everyone i cried happy that she had her friends... moved to tears.

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From ANON - alatera on April 24, 2007
    Very sweet. It gave enough to make an ending but left enough for us to wonder about. If you wanted you could add at least another chapter explaining their lives through the ages( short versions of course) and how they are alive, etc. But thats only if you feel like it. Its fine as it is. Also reaches more people as they can imagine their own versions of what happened or what will happen and that keeps everyone happy.
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