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Reviews for Home For Kagome

By : bookworm810
  • From Sieg on September 10, 2008
    Your story started out good all the way to chapter seven. There it went down hill fast that one chapter alone should have been two. You took out all the details that should have been the conversation between Inuyasha and Kagome. You seemed to rush it way to fast. Chapter eights battle scene was all right but i would say it was also short. The fact that Naraku had 90% of the Shikon no tama and was so easily dispatched was unbelievable. Wile no one was hurt at all with the added power from the Ikioizassou he should have been a little harder to defeat. I do like your creation of the Ikioizassou tho it was a rather neat demon. I do belive that you rushed the last chapters and left out a lot of details. Like Chapter nine Inuyasha would not have mated with Kagome in a human inn for the fact that someone could have found out and tried to kill her. Which is clearly made Inuyasha OOC for the fact that is why his mother was killed and his greatest fear, was that if other knew that he couldn't protect her from what they say. All in all i believe if you worked a little harder added more details this story would have been the best. On your squeal, that is if you still plan on writing one, you should take your time add lots of details. Well if you read this all then well means i didn't just waste my time typing it. Keep up the good work.

    ~~Sieg
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  • From BlazeOfGlory15 on September 10, 2007
    Very good story, not quite enough smut for my taste, but a good story nonetheless. good writing too.

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  • From vikikibouki on May 10, 2007
    I wasn't quite sure about reading this story at first. Not because you aren't a good author, but , actually I was afraid that it would hit too close to home. For years, any kind of story that had anything to do with the word 'rape' was definately pushed aside. I was 2 months shy of my 15th birthday when I went out on my first 'date' and it didn't turn out the way I expected it would. It was a 'Date Rape'. Back in the early 80's it was basically unheard of in my little corner of the wold. I had never been very popular and was ecstatic at the idea that the cutest boy in my town had even looked at me, let alone ask me out. I was also very naive. His family was very influential and mine were nothing but ordinary middle class. Needless to say, no one believed me and I had no where to turn. My own mother, whom I had never been really on good terms with even when I was a child, told me point blank to shut up because either I had asked for it, or I was the biggest liar that had ever existed. I started to wear baggy clothes, changed my hairstyles into the most inconspicuous ways that I could. Basically, I wanted to curl up and die. The pain and hurt that I felt was unbearable and for several years I didn't stray too far from home. School beame a disaster to endure every day because of all the taunting and attacks so I quit. But still I'm one of the lucky ones. I finally found someone who understood and after much patience and coaxing, brought me back from the brink of a suicide. It took my husband all of six months to get me on the right track and, along with therapy I can finally say that 'I'M OKAY'. Years of fear and self-loathing all because of a rich-to-do's bastard son. That's why I can relate to your fan-fiction, and I can say that it was very well written and in truth, you hit the nail right on the head. Many rape victims do commit suicide for the very simple reason that they blame themselves, or as 'Eri' said, they asked for it. There's still a lot of prejudice against us, the victims, unfortunately. I'm sorry if I took up so much space, but if one voice, even in fan-fiction, can help just one person, then I gratefully say thank you. And please keep up you very good work. Yours Truly, Victoria.
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  • From Yashalove on May 07, 2007
    A very good story!! I really liked how you explained the issue of rape as to how and what a woman would go through!! Very well done!! I will be looking for the sequel!!
    Your Friend--
    Yashalove
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  • From WTW on May 07, 2007
    Thank you for taking time in writing this story. You did very well. I can't help but thing that I've read this before however. It sounds so very familar to a story I've read in the past. Then again I've read many Inu/Kag stories here and they can start to get mixed some times. XP lol. Thank you again for writing. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Patty530 on May 06, 2007
    I'm new to this site and while have have fallen in love with a few stories I have read, this was far and away the most beautiful and heart rending. I was very glad to see you put rape where it belongs, not as a set up for hot sex but for the degrading act that it is. Thank you
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  • From wharehouse on May 06, 2007
    Great story, very well written and quite enjoyable. Save for the occaisional spelling/grammar errors this was definatley an incredible read. I am looking forward to your next story.
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  • From XxSangoxX on May 05, 2007
    The first time that you ever have sex can also effect your cycle ...

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