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Reviews for Torn In Two

By : LadyMinamino
  • From ANON - neo-crystal on May 15, 2007
    Wow. That wasn't a twist I was expecting. I think this should be a kur/kag/hiei!!!! I LOVE that pairing!
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  • From madmiko on May 15, 2007
    Very, VERY interesting chapter!! But, what kind of training did Keiko do? She may have half the jewel in her, but she isn't a miko. She doesn't have any powers, right? So, did Genkai just help her learn how to fight? Kind of like Kuwabara withougt the Spirit Sword? I do hope this will focus more Kagome, though, than Keiko. The whole idea of Kagome wishing for the jewel to be in two pieces is very intriguing. I love her being Kuwabara's cousin, for a change, instead of Yusuke's. And I love the way you have Kuwabara and Yukina married and expecting. Nice. I am always, above anything else, a Hiei/Kagome fan, so naturally I have to root for him to get her. But I have to confess, the way you've written Yusuke's situation, I wouldn't mind seeing BOTH of them get her. I love the way Kagome dismissed Kurama, though. Heh heh! (Not that I don't like him, because I do, but, it was just funny.) Nice job of telling what happened with Naraku -- of course, I hate the idea that Kikyou was the one who killed him in the first place instead of Kagome, but then again, she obviously wasn't strong enough to really kill him, was she? And Inu should have loved Kag more. I like the way Kag dissed both Yusuke and Hiei. I love the way Hiei immediately made up his mind about her -- that seems like the kind of thing he would do to me. I can't wait to watch them both go after her. And like I said, I'm rooting for Hiei, but already I feel like it would be a shame for either one of them to lose. I can't wait for your next chapter!! This is going to be awesome!
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  • From ANON - Shiva on May 12, 2007
    ooooohhh! that was very funny :)
    I think it should be Yusuke/Kurama/Kagome!!!!
    just because its hot, but if not either on with her makes me
    very happy!!!! continue soon. yomi/keiko....ewwwww:O
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  • From bluemoon175 on May 12, 2007
    Sounds like a really good story so far and I can't wait to read more to see what happens next, so I hope you udpate asap please.
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  • From LadyShinomori on May 12, 2007
    Wonderful start! I hope to see more of this fic. I like Keiko but I don't like to see her with Yusuke. They aren't a good couple in my opinion. keep up the good work.
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  • From madmiko on May 11, 2007
    Hmmm. Very, very interesting beginning. It looks like you cleared Yusuke's plate for a possible romance, but I'll have to hope for a Hiei/Kagome story. (Because I love that couple!) I love the whole set-up with Yusuke and Keiko, and I think his feelings make sense. How is Keiko going to get together with Yomi, I wonder, if most of this story is going to take place in the Makai? (Or is it?) And are you going to come up with a way to overcome the aging problem? I see why Yusuke and Kurama went for this assignment, but why did Hiei agree? Loved the info on Kuwabara and Yukina. I'll definitely look forward to more of this one.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 11, 2007
    good start. i like the story already. so update soon.
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  • From kookookitty on May 10, 2007
    don't tell me that you won't write a kag/kar fic because he's yours and no one elses. =/

    good beginning, the interaction with kei/yus was very believable. i am curious what mess kagome finds herself in this time. well written.

    thank you,
    ginny
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