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By : chicke222
  • From angel23 on May 11, 2020

    Update please


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  • From angel23 on January 27, 2019

    Please update soon


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  • From SammyJams on March 24, 2017

    Wish this was finished :(


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  • From ANON - guest on December 02, 2014
    wow, please updates this, i really like it
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  • From ANON - angel23 on September 22, 2013
    Please
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  • From Hansanumai on February 10, 2010
    OMG PLZZZZZ MORE!!!!! I read one of your stories so naturally I had to come see if there was more; I like your writing style. :D I wish to read more on this one and don't be...lol surprised if you have more comments on ur other stories from me. :) Heehee
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  • From darkswordjedi on October 06, 2009
    finish the story!!!! you left us hanging.........
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  • From yaoifan199 on October 02, 2009
    Dear Chicke,

    I have read most of your stories and I am now hooked. I would love to offer my services and become a beta for you. You can contact me by email at pisces199@hotmail.com. I wait to here from you. I thank you for your time and consideration. If you have any questions please ask them.

    Sincerely,

    yaoifan199
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  • From Nescafevh on July 21, 2009
    When is the next chapter? If you're short on ideas I have one. Sessy's beast wants to take care of his new mate and pup. However Sessy himself don't want to make it look like he's willing, so he tells Kagome if she comes to live in his home he will give her safety, comfort and food for her and the baby during the duration of the pregnancy and healers and aid for the birth. His excuse is to hide the 'embarrassment' of conceiving an half-breed and mating with an ningen.

    However, during the rest of the time left for birth Sessy comes to feel guilt for his actions and the desire to not only raise and care for his child and desire then love for Kagome. So he tentatively starts to try and develop an relationship with Kagome, who at first doesn't want to even get to know him, but she has a good heart and begins to waver.

    I think you should do an ending like either InuYasha or Naraku attacks the home, trying to get to and kill Sessy (InuYasha either as revenge for believing Sessy has locked her up as a prisoner for sexual reasons, or had brain-washed her into staying) or Naraku after Sessy for his power or to get to someone he thinks as an 'weak spot' of Sessys-or-sudden thought-what better way to get power from both Kagome and Sessy then to absorb a child born from their combined genetic material.

    In an final moment Kagome jumps in front of Sessy (I have an image of her being impaled by one of Naraku's tentacles as it had launched at Sessys heart). In that moment Sessy realizes what started as obligation became love and-if you uses Naraku-the anger and grief causes him to loose control and slaughters Naraku. He therefore gets the full jewel from his corpse and without realizing it during his grief, wishes her back.

    Happily ever after.


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  • From scarletwitchextreme on December 05, 2008
    omg update, update, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From HeartStar on September 23, 2008
    oh please update this story soon r when you can please!!! hank you.
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  • From loretta537 on September 16, 2008
    poor kagome, i wonder what happens next. please update soon
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  • From lifeuncensored90 on July 07, 2008
    oh please for the love of all that is right in this world continue the story, PLEASE.
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  • From nightshade41230 on May 26, 2008
    please finish your story it is very good
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  • From moodymel on May 25, 2008
    This story is great! Most of the stories where Kagome gets raped by Sesshomaru has Kagome forgiving him too easily. Your story is more realistic and I think truer to the actual characters. I really like what you've written so far and I look forward to future chapters.
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