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Reviews for Hentai Bets

By : madmiko
  • From lara5170 on August 15, 2015
    I'm really enjoying this so far but I kind of hope Kagome ends up with both of them. I've been trying to find some Kagome/Youko (Kurama/Shuichi) FF but I've only been able to find about 3 that have been completed and most were just one shots. On the other hand, I've found over 40 Kagome/Hiei and I have a feeling that this is going to turn into another Kagome/Hiei story. I guess I'll have to keep reading to find out
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  • From ANON - rogue on April 21, 2013
    This. was. AWESOME! You have some hilarious comedic timing, and a GREAT imagination, some of that stuff was so freaking awesome! Well, WELL worth the read, I loved it, and it's so hard to find Hiei/Kagome. Thank you so much for writing this! I very much enjoyed what you have for Black Widow Miko, too - I couldn't get enough, that's how I found this!

    Hope you're doing well out there :)

    -rogue
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  • From desolokitty on December 14, 2009
    lol loved it gotta say the last few chapters had me laughing my but off but through it all i kept havin strange images of naraku streakin around and flashin everyone lol much kudos ^^
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  • From ANON - Tala on April 26, 2009
    I love your fanfics....this one killed me i laughed so hard through every chapter i could barely breath thats how hard i was laughing. now i just can't wait for you to update Black widow Miko.
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  • From ANON - Mikki on October 04, 2008
    This is the best crossover ff ever!And I mean it!It is funny and mature!There is NO part what I did not enjoyed reading!
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  • From Mishka on July 25, 2008
    Oh Hiei, if only you knew how foolish you will be. *laughs* Inu really threw the crap around didn't he? Such a mess Hiei has to clean up.
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  • From Mishka on July 25, 2008
    Let's all play musical beds! *laughs* Towel distress situation and hot spring abandonment by Kagome reported. Will take drastic measures for the guys to forget Jakotsu without Kagome there to steer him in some other direction. XD
    I love the pickpocketing lesson--but had to laugh that Kagome understands the Bigger thrill.
    And her Sad relationship outlook makes me want to huggle her. *pouts*

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  • From Mishka on July 25, 2008
    So I had a long review typed up, but accidentally clicked a link so I have to retype it to the best of my ability. *pouts*

    Here goes: Poor Hiei! He didn't get to finish his ice cream! Oh noes!!!! lol.

    Your descriptions of the group before they head down to dinner are wonderful. The "cover of Bishies 'R Us" and "like having one of those American Boy Bands in my living room" are particularly smile worthy. I especially love Kagome--she comes of so sensual and ...Salsa-ish I can picture her swaying to some heady beat. ( And I love the choker/rose combination with the long-long hair.)

    I loved the byplay between Hiei and Kagome in this chapter. It's fluffily squeal inducing. And the "Do you dance?" conversation: [i]sooo~o[/i] cute! And her speech about past faults and its strange relevance to Hiei as well as his bluntness make me giggle--rereading this story I can really spot the foreshadowing, how you are setting everything up to be tied neatly together in the end. (And I should really know by now that Hiei is your favorite CX .)

    I love how Naraku basically says Kagome has a Save-the-World complex. And the fact that the male HSDs are all making bets because they know more about the situation. Maybe a hint that they actually [i]are[/i] better than the SD at their work?

    Anyways, onto the next chapter, the next review. I have a lot of time to waste today. XD
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  • From Mishka on July 25, 2008
    *sighs* O Kagome. You are so wonderful.
    *laughs* And Jakotsu, I don't know how many times I've read this story but he still maintains his shock factor! I love him to pieces!
    The byplay between Hiei and Youko/Kurama is wonderful, I love how their 'conversations' flow and their snipes come across.
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  • From Mishka on July 25, 2008
    Decided to review every chapter. *shrugs*
    Kay *rubs hands in glee* The first chapter: [i]Love[/i] the fight between the two toddlers!The way you describe the staples and the stamps and the betting ogres--priceless!
    The poor SD were simply thrust into such a strange situation that I can't help but laugh. XD
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  • From redrubycutie on April 12, 2008
    Holy Shit i just LOVE IT!! It is so awsome i could not stop reading. Its way past my bed time its like 5am. You are a very good writer. If you have other stories im make sure to read them all!!!!
    Ruby
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  • From ANON - Unruly2love on March 13, 2008
    Oh my God! I just read the first chaper of Hentai Bets, and you are a true genius with comedy. The group that you have put together is hilarious, and I am happily shocked that you actually put a group together without Inuyasha. Inuyasha is a great character, but I have never read a story without him being very close, if not, to the center of attention. I am eagerly waiting to see what is going to happen next, and I know I will love every minute of it. I am going to be laughing my ass off.
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  • From WhiteDemoness on December 02, 2007
    *brain dies*
    BWAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh gods I had my brother pounding on my door demanding to know why I was screaming in laughter and crying!! KUDOS!!
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  • From Tricia1224 on October 26, 2007
    I really enjoyed this story. At times I was laughing so hard I tears running down my cheeks. This is one of the best cross over stories I have read. Also this is the first Yu Yu Hakusho I have read. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - AnimeGurl16 on August 28, 2007
    Oh GOD, was that funny!!! Had me laughing my ass off from the beginning to the end. I never expected for kagome to develop the same fetish as miroku, that was very unexpected hahaha! But what really had me laughing was how the kept leading kagome to think that Kurama and Hiei were gay, now THAT was hilarious, i always knew kagome didn't catch on to things quickly but damn really how could she mistake their jealousy for THAT LOL!!! Anyways great story, really, you should make more like this it made my day so much better!
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