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Reviews for Hentai Bets

By : madmiko

From ANON - river on August 24, 2007
Chapter 7 was too funny... my favorite lines: " I must have been really bad in a former life. Oh wait. I guess I was Kikyou. Yes, that explains it."
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From Shanalir on July 27, 2007
EEEEYAAAAAH!! You updated the last chapter the weekend that my family had two weddings, three receptions and family visiting from out of state, and I MISSED THE UPDATE!!!! Well, at least I finally went looking for it and got to read it. I was laughing my ass off at all of the bets, and damn! those lemons were steamy! All in all, though, a great wrap up for a great story. Thank you so much for sharing it!
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From ANON - babiesrcute@sbcglobal.net on July 27, 2007
-burst out laughing- HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! THIS IS ONE OF THE FUNNIEST THINGS I'VE EVER READ! Do a sequel about the mission in the brothel or whatever it is! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! I LOVE THIS! It's great! -still laughing- Seriously though, you could make a really great sequel for this. I'm sad and glad that this one is finished at the same time. I don't think I would have been able to take the waiting for the next chapter to be posted. It's so funny though! -starts laughing again- You did a really great job on this. Congrats on such a great story. I'm sure Black Widow Miko will be just as good. -still laughing- I can't wait for the next update. HAHAHA! ^_~
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From swasdiva on July 22, 2007
Oh sweet God of every spec of dust in this universe, I think I lost 10 pounds laughing. Seriously, you should see my svelte figure now. We could market your fanfiction to GNC and Suzanne Somers and make MILLIONS. The instant weight loss plan: laugh your fat ass right off with Madmiko's super-slimming fanfic, "Hentai Bets". It's an 3 AM infomercial waiting to happen. Just as long as Naraku flashes everyone at the end. I'd put that on my DVR. So funny I think I'm about to die.

You really did stick it to me with the Hiei/Kagome pairing...I actually, quite acutely, dig them now. They were just never in my repertoire before, but after this story, I can't stay back. I swear, you've really got the comedic talent, you know that? I mean, biff, bang, boom, every line was spot-on, perfectly delivered, every scene perfectly executed (in some cases, literally), and the characters...no one, I repeat, NO ONE has taken Naraku and made him not only hilarious, but sympathetically hilarious. I mean, he's nothing more than a loveable fratboy now, if you think about it: an arrogant, thick-headed, smooth talking flasher with a gambling problem. Oh, and he's recockulously hot. Yep, definitely a frat boy. And for some reason it really tickles my fancy that he and Miroku get along so well. It's devilishly delicious! (Hmm, that sounds like a twisted Lucky Charms jingle...hehe, I got your "Lucky charms" right here, boys...*cough*) Maybe I WILL experiment with the Naraku/Miroku/Kagome triad!! HaHA!!! Yep, I saw your review of my humble little fic, and what do you know? We've got an inside joke. The N/M/K challenge lives on!!

Okay, gotta make a brief pit-stop in the gratitude lane. To say I'm extremely enthralled and amazed that you praised my ficlet as much as you did is a severe understatement. I loved your story so much that you enjoying *my* fic means more to me than Adult Swim 7 nights a week. I love and cherish every review I get, but I know you understand when a fellow author reviews, it's something to really be giddy over. So thank you!!

But back to what matters. Seriously, I think the main thing I loved about this story was the wild but frightening believable characterizations. EVERYONE was pitch-perfect. I couldn't pick a favorite if I tried...okay, I'm lying, I obviously love Naraku's tranformation the most. Still, though, I love them all. And...I see you have a new fic posted. I don't really have the time in the next few weeks to start it, but mark my words, there WILL be more praise from the swas in the near future.

God bless you and your warped, deranged and utterly fan-freaking-phenomenally funny fic. Yikes. Say that five times fast. No really, say it!!
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From lbjackson on July 13, 2007
I loved your story. I appreciated how you explain Inuyasha being out of the picture with him not being a total ass. Most of these crossovers Inuyasha is completely horrible to Kagome to the point you want to waste him. Yeah he was an idiot and stupid to hurt Kagome, but you explain how bad and insecure he felt. Beside it was for the best because she got the love of her life. It all works out. I hope you write a continuation to these characters. How about the gang go the cat house and Miroku find Sango's reincaration there. I am intrigue to know why you keep them apart and he is paying for his sins. You could bring in Kilara as well. I miss that fire-cat. Great story and the love scenes were smoking hot.
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From ANON - slave2maru on July 11, 2007
just had to say that i absolutely loved your story!!!!
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From DarkRoseofChaos on July 09, 2007
I'm sorry that I didnt review the last chapter, I was out of town withough internet *cries* But that last chapter was amazing! I hope that you continue to crank out amazing stories like that!
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From LadyE on July 09, 2007
Ah, the end of the story. You know what they say, parting is such sweet sorrow. I love this story to pieces, but it had to end sometime.

As I said before, I love giving reviews for stories that I think deserve them, and this certainly is one of my favs! So you're very welcome and thanks for writing this story! You're definitely doing it right.

Hiei's thoughts during foreplay are hilarious! Send all his friends after Jakotsu? It might sound like a good idea at first... but if Jakotsu's nearly as good as he claims, he'd never hear the end of their gay love stories! And rubbing it in with a pic was just too cruel!

Sweetlips? Honeybuns? rofl And to think that Hiei was just thinking about sending everyone after lil ol' him. Clearly he's beginning to think they want him too lol! Ah... the cowboy shows... explains the comment before about jumping out the hamper wearing chaps. And he remembers Hojo's name!

Hmmm... the kama sutra eh? ~sigh~ I wish I had an eternity to try all those things too... That some nice lemon too, not to mention their lunch. After all those episodes of foreplay you did not disappoint. An interesting mix of waff and wild sex. Two gallons of chocolate ice cream! They broke the bed!?!?! No wonder Kagome's equally possessive of Hiei too...

Those hentais with their bets and comments just crack me up! And Sesshoumaru still is the all seeing eye! Poor Kuwabara will soon be corrupted to be as dirty as the rest! They just live for tormenting poor Kagome! Naraku really did get the last laugh too.

Hey that's right! Kagome did do the seducing in the end! (Seems this story is making me a Kagome/Hiei fan)

It was a great end to a great story! Rest assured I love the ending. Thanks on behalf of all your readers!

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From ANON - Phoenix Wolf on July 09, 2007
*gigantic grin* Oh to be Kagome ... *sighs dreamily* I figured he would have the stemina, but .... they broke the bed? O.o Hot DAMN!!

Well, I will definately be checking out your new story! You have a new fan here!!

Until we meet again
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From Doyla on July 08, 2007
*Cries*...NOOOOO!!!!!...It's over!!!!!.....*Continues to cry*.....
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From ANON - elfenmage on July 08, 2007
I loved the story. The way you captured the spirit of the emotions was just great.
Can not wait to read the other one when you get it up.
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From Patty530 on July 08, 2007
Thank you Sooo much. Loved every word. Thank you for finishing it and taking all of us on a wonderful ride. I'm sad it's over but the ending was incredible.

LUV YOU AND CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT STORY!

Patty
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From ANON - Legilmyth on July 08, 2007
Bravo! I must say that I enjoyed this fic so much that in a way I am sad to see it finished. But you did such a fabulous job bringing it to its conclusion that I wont complain any more, I'll just have to read it over again.
I almost felt sorry for Yoko and Kurama, but then thats a fox for you, they bring it on themselves. And I loved the last chapter, all the bets was a perfect ending to this wonderful story. I look forward to your next one.
Legilmyth
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From CloverBabe on July 08, 2007
hahhahaha.

yah. i was pretty damn disappointed when the hunky fox didn't win over dear Kaggie. but it was a pretty good ending.
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From ANON - Fub on July 07, 2007
.....*SQUEALS!!!* *Rushes over to glomp you* Thank-you SO much for writing this story. Each chapter has never failed to make my day worth it.
Fub

P.S. Love the ending
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