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By : madmiko

From blackheartwhiteblade on July 07, 2007
Aw, shit, man, I thought I'd die laughing there! Wow! Don't get me wrong, the scenes were hot but, daMN, WtF!!?? Great work! I look forward to your next project!! I'll be keepin' an eye out aight? Keep it up and Take care!!
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From CloverBabe on July 06, 2007
ahhhhhhhhhh.

damn. and i was fully excited to read a yummy Kurama/Kagome lemon. bah. but it was a really damn good fanfiction.
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From ANON - Phoenix Wolf on July 06, 2007
OMG ...!!! Wha? ... And Kagome? ... Damn! She is one LUCKY Miko!!

I LOVE what you have done!! And Hiei got to have his "little" revenge on Musou too! He should be one very HAPPY demon come ... Sunday. *hentai grin* Oh to be in Kagome's place!

I see now why you had Kagome heal Hojo, and now Jakotsu is a VERY happy man! He has a new "playmate."

You have DEFINATELY made me Xover to Xover. *snickers at own bad joke* I can't wait for the next chapter! I also can't wait to find out what you have in store for us should you create another story! Oh, I really hope you do! This story is a smash HIT! And I'm certain that you will have a loyal following for any other stories you may decide to create! I am first in line!

Until we meet again.
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From LadyE on July 05, 2007
Yay!!! I was the 100th reviewer!!! And this chapter is all for me? :D I'm a sucker for good reading, and this story's got me hooked. I actually enjoy giving reviews. It lets the author feel appreciated, and when a review mentions something that happened or how the chapter pleased them it makes a writer feel as though s/he had some kinda impact, however small, on the reader. As a writer myself, I know that feeling all too well. Reviews can light up a writer's day just like a new chapter can light up a reader's. That said, it's an honour to be your 100th reviewer. Well, now that I've gotten that out of my system, onto the review. And this long chapter deserves a long review.

Musou is a genius. No doubt about it. He was watching all along? Damn, he really is Naraku reincarnate. And Jakotsu still cracks me up. Leather? Melted wax? Cherry flavoured oil? Manacles? He was even checking out Musou! He is definitely the biggest hentai in the whole group! He's also my favorite character in this story. Too bad he didn't get Hideki... Daichi... Masaharu in the end, but Naraku did have a point. But Hojo?!?!?!! Roflmao! Hiei that was soo evil!!!

Poor Hiei, always turning green and back again. This whole mission has been nothing short of an emotional roller coaster for him. Poor Kagome, too. She was literally in the middle of a serious game of tug-o-war.

Way to go Hiei! Tear into that monster! Castrated with his own intestines? Eeeeeewwwwwwww!!!!!

Lol! With all the action that happened before i completely forgot that Kagome still thought that Hiei was gay! The way she reacted was a lot less explosive than I expected. Sess sure did a lotta slaughtering when he appeared! I bet he looked simply scrumptious while doing it too! ~sigh~

�Tie your robe, you degenerate exhibitionist!� lol! I love the way past events repeated themselves in this chapter, from this line, to Hojo showing up in Jakotsu's bed, to Kagome picking Kurama's pocket! Gives a sense of continuity that's hard to find in a lot of stories.

And the bets go on!

Another great chapter from a great story! Thanks a bunch! Eagerly anticipating the final chapter!

One error to note though, at the end of the chapter after Hiei leaves the room to mate with Kagome, you have an *H* for Hiei talking to Kurama when it's really Youko.

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From blackheartwhiteblade on July 05, 2007
RoFL, THAT was awesome! And as for your rep, I'd say it was a good thing! After all, not many can pull things off the way you do, so feel proud! And I understand your sudden affection for the fire apparition, I'm the same as well, but I stand between the kitsune and hybrid (though I would rather have the miko ", don't tell my sister and I won't tell your husband, deal? ",) Anyhow, I look forward to the next chapter! Keep it up!!
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From ANON - Shanalir on July 05, 2007
Oh wow! I was definitely surprised over the reason for Sesshoumaru's visit! I didn't actually think he'd kill them! Make them beg for death, maybe, but not actually kill them. This chapter was magnificent! I loved the fight, Muso definitely got his (yay!!!) and Jakotsu got someone (who really deserves to be gotten by him). And as always, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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From Patty530 on July 05, 2007
Perfect as always! You just keep outdoing yourself. As much as I hate the thought of this story coming to a close, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Luv ya!

Patty
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From blackheartwhiteblade on July 03, 2007
LoL
Damn babe, now that I've reread what you've written, I realized that you DO live up to your reputation as the MadMiko! I'm proud of yah!! Even if you leave your readers on the edge of their seats, then leave 'em hangin' ",

*sigh* But I was kinda rootin' for Kurama on this one, ah well, readers can't be choosers, especially if it's a great fic! Keep it up aight? And as to that last one, that Mus guy has a twisted sense of humor, writing "come to me" on a piece of paper then enveloping her in a shpere, wonder if she even had time to read it? ",

Anyhow, update soon, aight? See yah!!
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From LadyE on July 03, 2007
It really was his watch! I thought he had the whole watch made out of the gem, and not put into only a part of it, but it was the only jewelry he carried (a guy wearing something like that as a chain would seem justifiably more gay than the whole Kurama/Hiei fiasco). And boy did he get what he deserved. Hiei gave him the thrashing of a lifetime, and Kagome put in her piece too? Priceless! Not to mention her "method of identification". This chapter from the beginning had me laughing my ass off! I am so glad that traitor got his too! Jakotsu finally got reunited with his someone, and Hiei finally got his mark on Kagome... I see smut-filled victory parties in their futures.

Looking forward to the next chapter (especially Sesshoumaru's long awaited appearance) and the upcoming fight against Musou!

When will Kagome ever find out that those two aren't gay? And how will she react when she finds out that everyone knew about it? Shippou definitely will have some explaining to do!
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From DarkRoseofChaos on July 02, 2007
AACK!!!! Your really enjoying our pain, arent you? Well, anywhoo, good work and thanks for telling me when its gonna be up so I dont get overanticipated and then angry.....again...lol
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From CloverBabe on July 02, 2007
yes ma'am.

so i'll review you twice.

just cuz i love this story too much.

:]
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From ANON - Phoenix Wolf on July 02, 2007
Damn! Kagome should have hit him more. *pouts* Never mind that she shouldn't have healed Hojo so well after his first beating, but she is a miko, *shrugs* what can you do?

I am so loving this chapter! Hiei is going to have one hell of a time trying to convince Kagome that he has NEVER wanted Kurama to being with, then he will have to explain everything! *snickers* I so can't wait for THAT! I wonder if Kagome will try to beat his ass like she hit Hojo? *grins evilly*

Now, what is Muso going to do to our beloved Kagome? Will Hiei get to her before Muso gives her a "proper" mating mark? I sure as hell hope so!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Until we meet again.
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From Chaosharbinger on July 01, 2007
The thing with Hojo implanting it in his eye, I just couldn't get the image of Hiei taking great "care" in removing it... *evil grin* Anway, great chapter. You certainly know how to keep us coming back for more. I just can't wait for the next chapter.
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From Doyla on July 01, 2007
Yeah!! They are all mine now!!!....*Evil laughter*...They are mine all mine!!!!...*Ties sexy hot ass hiei & Kurama & Sesshomaru to self*...I can't leave out my sexy lord, now can i?....Muhahahahahaahahahaha

~Darkened~
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From ANON - Shanalir on July 01, 2007
Wow! That was awesome! Not only did Hojo use the gem wrong and make Kagome see him as Hiei, but he got bloodied for it multiple times! And, yes Kagome's punch was one of the highlights for me, I loved it! I think my favorite part, though was Kagome identifying Hiei by his butt. That was just perfect! I really can't wait to see what happens next with the whole Muso situation, so I hope you can update soon!
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