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Reviews for Betrayal of the Body, Betrayal of the Heart

By : Koruchan
  • From ANON - myeternalanguish on October 13, 2013
    Wow, it was indeed not a happy ending but I really enjoyed it. I think you dis a great job portraying this couple. Kagome is always leading poor Kouga on to get Inuyasha jealous and when she runs to Inuyasha in front of Kouga in that episode, I thought she was the biggest hypocrite! She thinks Inuyasha is a jerk for going to Kikyo and being insensitive to her feelings but she would do something like that in front of Kouga despite his feelings? Not cool, Kagome. I liked the lemon almost as much as I liked the realistic, non-cliche ending. This was perfect!
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  • From ANON - Starshima on September 19, 2013
    Woooow I feel bad for koga :( awwww move on..
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  • From mrskgoodman on July 22, 2009
    Your take on this was totally realistic. I love it. I am a huge fan of alternate pairings. I enjoyed this story very much.
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  • From kissthesky237 on September 13, 2007
    The logic of this whole story impresses me. I can't stand when people just throw Kagome and Kouga together when things are clearly more complex, and Koga would never want to play second fiddle to anyone. This was wonderful.
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  • From mrskgoodman on August 30, 2007
    Yes Yes Yes!!! Finally someone sees it as I would.
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  • From Suniko on August 15, 2007
    It was really good! I like it. Will there be a sequel? Keep up the good work!

    Suniko
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  • From cowgirlkitten2000 on July 04, 2007
    very depressing but yes u had it pegged correctly all the way. i really enjoyed reading this type of version.
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  • From Aleya on June 27, 2007
    IT was nice, and i totally dig ya when you mention that Kouga is always ready and willing to be second best in most of these fics... I don't know but this... this was a nice twist to it all! Happy Writing!!
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  • From 4inukag4 on May 30, 2007
    I saw this story had no reviews and HAD to fix that. I happen to like the way you made Kouga stay the strong individual he is. I am more of a sess/kag person of late and I liked seeing something different. Inu/kag has sort of been done to death in the canon universe... Mine is in AU, other words real life... Hop on over and read it if you wish.

    I do appreciate Kouga's reaction and am dissapointed in Kagome. She knew better.

    Thanks for the good read.


    HollyS
    "I have gone to find myself. If I get here before I come back, keep me here so I know where I am."

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