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Reviews for Fallen

By : Knowledge
  • From ANGEL2006ASHLEY on June 12, 2007
    Hmmm... Well I think it would be interesting to read this. It's too short though, next time try to hit at least 1,000 words. But don't just drop it off at the end of each chapter... Make the reader want to keep coming back for more. Also you said you wanted us to get into the characters mind a bit... but we don't know who the character actually is. Iono what else to really tell you. Well just try to make the chapters long... like I said at least 1,000 words and you wont get told it's too short lol. Or you know set a word goal to reach in each chapter. Well I for one look forward to reading this story so start typing up the next chapter already lol. Good luck on this.
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