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Reviews for This Sesshoumaru Needs Not A Mate - ON HOLD

By : ElegantPaws
  • From roseredautumn on September 14, 2009
    so much for next week, darling! come on back, we miss you.
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  • From SnowWolf on May 06, 2009
    Wow this is very long and interesting, I hope you can get the final chapter up soon. Take care.

    Ja Ne,
    Wolf
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  • From LadyRed7 on December 18, 2008
    OMG! This story is amazing. I love it. It's a new and interesting merger of two of my favorite styles for sesshomaru. The kindly and the usual stoic.
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  • From ANON - rowdysgirl on October 11, 2008
    Thank you , thank you, thank you. I have been looking forward so much to another installment of this story. It is so good. Thank you.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 22, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - shan on June 27, 2008
    I've just finished reading chapter 22. Initially I thought I would hold off on the review until I've read the last chapter. However, the sheer delight I have received from reading your words has inspired me to review now. I can't wipe the goofy grin off of my face because of the joy I'm feeling towards this piece. The emotion is so raw, real and exciting. Truly amazing. I've howled with laughter and giggled with glee. I've re-read passages just because... Today even, I read chapters 1 thru 4 again so I could look back on their relationship and how far the Lord and the Miko have come.

    Not only that, I took the time to look up "The Tao of Pooh." Thank you for the reference. I enjoy gaining unexpected knowledge and intend to purchase the book.

    I kissed a lot of frogs as I thumbed the the pages of this site but your story as truly made it worth it. Excellent! By far one of the best fantasies I've read, fanfic or otherwise. Just wow.

    Thank you.
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  • From nightshade41230 on May 30, 2008
    I really love the story,I hope you finish writting it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 14, 2008
    This is just such an awesome fic! I look forward to the conclusion. Thank you for your gift of the pen!
    Sesshomaru is so hot!!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on March 27, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From NanaTsunade on March 27, 2008
    I have really enjoyed reading this story, and will be sorry to see it come to an end. You are a wonderful writer. I love the little plots twists which keep me wanting for more. Can't wait for the next chappy! BTW, where can I find your Valentine's story??
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  • From NanaTsunade on March 21, 2008
    WOW! This has got to be the best fic I've read about this pairing! Your writing is flawless, and the storyline captivating. Please, hurry with the next chapter!!! I can't wait to see how Naraku gets his ass kicked! And, thankyou for a wonderful reading experience..this is at the top of my favorites list.
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  • From ANON - Animefreak242 on March 13, 2008
    Second attempt:

    I like this story so far. The overall idea is kind of cute. I really want to see where you're going to take this. I'm rooting for the dirt road. The well-worn path is so... boring; not to mention severely overused. I just have a couple of questions and suggestions. First would be Sesshomaru's reaction to Kagome. Is this supposed to be a sudden occurrence? Because you said in the first chapter that his 'inner beast'/subconscious had been acting up (for lack of a better expression). It just seems like such a violent reaction to be so recent. My other question was in regards to the manner in which Kagome addresses Sesshomaru. Is there a reason you have Kagome act so disrespectfully towards Sesshomaru, but then have her turn around and (in both her thoughts and aloud) address him as 'Lord Sesshomaru' and 'Sesshomaru-sama'? I might be reading too much into this, but I though Kagome was being a little sarcastic... *shrugs*

    My suggestions... Well, my suggestion (as it's only one thing), would be to get a beta to seriously proof read your story. I've only read up to the end of the second chapter, but there are a lot of grammatical, punctuation, word order and word usage errors scattered throughout. Particularly the overuse/misuse of the pause and a thesaurus(?) (i.e. in this chapter you said, "She could hear breakfast being prepared this morning by Inuyasha – a novelty, Sango lecturing the Houshi Miroku on some lecherous infraction - imagined or otherwise, and Shippo and Rin demanding the return something or other from Inuyasha who kept ignoring them, answering with barely a grunt." A smoother way of saying the same thing could be, "Kagome could hear Inuyasha preparing breakfast - a rarity. Sango was nearby, lecturing Miroku on another one of his lecherous episodes (be they imagined or otherwise), while Shippo and Rin demanded the return of something or other from an indifferent Inuyasha"). Again, it's just my two cents.

    In any case~ Overall, I do like this story. So, I guess I'll keep reading. Ja mata!
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  • From deceit on February 01, 2008
    Absolutly Love This Story!!!!!! Please update soon I am so excited to see where it goes! Keep it up! ^,^
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 01, 2008
    This fic is so awesome! With every update I start it all over. It is just awesome! Hey, do you do any Naruto fics? If so, please let me know. Again, I can't say enough about your writing. Keep up the good work and update soonest!!!

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  • From on January 31, 2008
    I have spent the last three days reading this up to chapter 16 and I loath you for it. For now I am so caught up with reading this until I get to your last posted chapter, my stories are being neglected badly. I try to write a chapter but then I come back to your story because I want to know what happens next.

    With that said; from now until I am to the last posted chapter of this awesome piece of work, I will tell all those that ride my butt about getting out a new chapter for an unfinished story that it is your fault I haven't posted anything.

    Good work. Keva
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