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Reviews for Maybe Next Time

By : ShaeyaSedjet
  • From XYZ on September 18, 2008
    PLEASE DO YOUR HOMEWORK! You mentioned the fifty states, basically stating that this story takes place in the United States, so kindly read up on the laws before writing this! Claims for insanity only work for criminal cases, not tort cases. For tort cases, as long as there is intent, knowledge, and action is enough for conviction. The fact that she wrecked his car - insane or not - is enough for her to be convicted, in this case mostly as a fine. This fantasy world you created appears to be one where anyone can break the law. Also, if it's a criminal case, insanity needs to be verified and then they get stuck in an institution; they still to not get off scotch-free! Please fix this before continuing this story, and meanwhile, go talk to a law student or read up on tort cases!
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  • From chanda on June 06, 2008
    Chapter one

    LOL. That was funny. I love the plot all ready. Acting out in a bedroom, I don't by it.

    You certainly did your homework. Looking forward to chapter two.

    Chanda

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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on March 02, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From blackr0s3 on September 23, 2007
    I absolutely love this story I wish i could somehow get an alert everytime its updated! plz update soon the whole plot and writing is fabulous! ur a great writer PLZ PLZ PLZ update soon!!!
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  • From SesshysRose on August 03, 2007
    This story is awesome...I've never read anything quite like it!!!!
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  • From ladysinistra on July 03, 2007
    Oh please update this soon! I am in love with this story! (Could you email me when you update it, please? mrsroymustang11@aim.com thanks!)
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  • From DL69 on June 19, 2007
    T____T omg... they need to get back together...but what inu did... that will take some serious kissing up... maybe have him break down, crying beging for forgiveness ^.^
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  • From WalterKraken101 on June 19, 2007
    wow. good story. I'll be looking forward to reading more of it.
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  • From StrawberryFusion on June 18, 2007
    Holy crap, this is one kick ass story, Keep up the good work, I can' wait until the next chapter.
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