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Reviews for For the Man You Love

By : Freedom2love
  • From Suniko on August 17, 2007
    AWWWWWW! I got so excited to see that you have updated. I wanted sooooooo bad to read the next chapter(ssssss)! I hope you typed it out soon! Please email me letting me know that its up. My email is suniko_jubi@yahoo.com

    I hope it will be up soon.

    Suniko
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  • From ANON - Ru-Doragon on August 17, 2007
    She's crazy! A relationship can't be buit on lust alone! And it defenatly can't be onesided and forced! -pauses- CRAZY!!!!!!!!
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  • From Vyncent on June 23, 2007
    Actually, your lemon was rather good. It is just a little awkward, but it came off very well. Do not worry, you did very well for this chapter.
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  • From fangirlqueen on June 23, 2007
    It was good but i think Kagome gave in a little too quickly. othwerwise it was fine and entertaining ^_^
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  • From LADYWELLES on June 23, 2007
    this is getting really good i cant wait to read more please update soon TTFN
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  • From ANON - Jessie on June 23, 2007
    love the hot spring part but the chapters are still alittle too short...can't wait to read more^_^
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  • From ANON - I~Plead~Obsession on June 22, 2007
    Ok first off, you have a great story idea but you need to work on a few things in order to pull this off.

    1) expand and describe. Do not be afraid of detail
    2) slow down your story, take your time, explain the situations the characters moods, thoughts, feelings, everything! but do not make it so slow that it's agonizing to read.
    3) work on your grammer and punctuation. And also your choice of vocabulary, because you repeat the same descriptive word over and over.
    4) You characters are EXTREMELY OOC. Although funny, try to keep them a little closer to character... you did fairly well near the end of the second chapter though!

    SO just work on a few of these and your writing - plus this fanfiction!- will greatly improve. And in no way is this mean to be a flame, it's just meant to be helpful critisim. So I apologize if I sound mean.

    Keep up the good work ^^

    I~Plead~Obsession
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  • From SesshysRose on June 22, 2007
    Have I said I LOVE this fic! B/C I DO! I think you're doing a great job on this fic! Keep up the awesome work, cuz I can't wait to read more!
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  • From fangirlqueen on June 22, 2007
    You really did as well as the first chapter ^_^ i love how Miroku hot his groping in even while Kagome was upset.
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  • From ANON - .... on June 22, 2007
    i love this story, i check like everyday for a update. keep it up, please......

    awesome job
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  • From ANON - Jessie on June 22, 2007
    that chapter was great! but it was a little too short......can't wait to read the next chapter ^_^
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  • From ANON - cocoke5 on June 22, 2007
    the story is real good and i can not wait for the next chapter and you are doing a real good job. up date soon.
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  • From ladyai21 on June 21, 2007
    i really like where this story is going. I cant wait 2 read more.
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  • From Doyla on June 21, 2007
    Nice job on the second chapter...^_^...

    ~Darkened: Com on Kags!...You got Yasha!!!
    ~Yasha: Yeah Kagome how could you for get me?
    ~darkened: I want Sessy!!!!
    ~Yasha: Why do you want him, when you can have me Darkened?..
    ~Darkened: NO!! I want Sessy!!
    ~Yasha: I'm BETTER!!! I have the ears!!!
    ~Darkened: SO!!!...Sessy has that tail!!!
    ~Kagome: I thought you loved me Yasha!!!
    ~Yasha: You want my brother wench!!
    ~Darkened: You can keep her Yasha and I'll take GOOD care of my Sessy!!!...

    ~Sesshoumaru: Foolish Half breed neither of the humans want you..*Evil smirk*
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  • From ANON - Kaze on June 21, 2007
    Well, this is well-written and all. But seems kind of wierd.

    I mean, Sesshomaru takes Kagome on a promise that he will spare Inuyasha's life.
    But then, Inuyasha loses Kagome, won't he be alone and lose will to live anyway.
    I don't really get it, probably have to wait for more chapters.
    Keep it up.
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