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Reviews for The Sex Fiend...Kagome!?

By : Sexgoddess2110
  • From ANGEL2006ASHLEY on June 26, 2007
    I think that would have been a really cool beginning to a whole fanfic and I think you should do it. Good luck and if you don't do it then it's very good how it is too.
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  • From wildkit on June 26, 2007
    You cant end it here. You must continue. You deserve 1000000 wet-willies if you stop here
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  • From IrvinAzure on June 26, 2007
    Hey I thought your story was good and all, but I think you need to find a common ground with your story switching back and forth between P.O.V. is good to show all views, but switching back and forth between first and third in the middle of a paragraph is grammaticly incorrect as well as confuseing; so you really need to watched out for that. MK
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  • From Neptunee on June 26, 2007
    that was a good one shot and the only thing that I would change is the first person view. Othe then that it can become a good story, do like a little bit of a before for the first chapter then have it come back to after they fuck. that's what I say you should do. If you do make it a story I would read it.
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  • From Doyla on June 26, 2007
    that was REALLY hott!!!!!!!....*takes a cold shower*...Kagome has all the funn....*Pouts*
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