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Reviews for Yuudai no Keikoku

By : ashlin86
  • From Aini on August 30, 2008
    Glad to have this story back. :D Excellent chapter. I didn't notice or think that there was anything missing at all. And you're not rushing the romance at all. In fact, I think it's going at the perfect pace. You're doing very well to bring the emotions in slowly, instead of the "I hate you"/Sess saves Inuyasha from something/"I love you" pattern. You've placed emotions into the characters and made it seem as if they've always been there. I'm very excited to read your next chapter. I hope that it comes out soon, but don't push yourself. Good luck with everything! And keep writing!
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  • From MilleniumForever on August 22, 2008
    This story is progressing perfectly.

    Im glad your okay. *cookies*

    ~Sophie Max-Anderson
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  • From Pumpkinpi on August 21, 2008
    Hi,

    I just wanted to let you know that I really like your story so far. Its very entertaining. I hope you will be able to finish :-)

    Take care,

    Pumpkinpi
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  • From cshadow on August 18, 2008
    Yippy, your back. I love this story. It's one of my favorites. I can't tell you how many times I've read it hoping for an update. I can't wait to see where you take this story. Keep up the great work.
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  • From wolfluv on August 17, 2008
    To me this chapter was seemless you wove your story perfectly! Ju is the only one right at the moment thining of pairing the brothers I think the speed you've set so far is great! I always check to see if you've had the time to update this story and I was thrilled to see that you had, I'd rather wait then have a story never be finished you are kind enough to share this story with us what more could we ask then to hope life allows you the time to see it through.

    I'm glad you are okay from your accident!!!

    THANK YOU FOR UPDATING AND TO YOUR MUSE!!!
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  • From Shadow2040AD on August 17, 2008
    interesting
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  • From KIKI441 on August 16, 2008
    first off, i'm glad you weren't hurt too seriously
    in the accident. and second, i didn't see much
    wrong except for a couple off sentences that had
    an extra word that made the senctence odd but
    other than that it was fine. i was so glad
    inuyasha is free from those rosary. you can
    tell kagome never really cared about inuyasha
    when she didn't realise that the important thing
    she lost was her connection to inuyasha.

    and as for sesshomaru and inuyasha's relationship i think you
    are moving it along at the right pace. i can't wait until
    the time arrive when kagome finds out that she can no longer
    'sit' inuyasha. i bet she is gonna freak.


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  • From 1127 on August 16, 2008
    Welcome back !!! So glad to hear that you were not hurt badly. Thanks for the great chapter !!! I can hardly wait to see where you take it from here. As for going to fast... Trust yourself. As with your first 8 chapters I'm sure we well not be disappointed !!! Once again, Welcome back!!
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  • From nchsmi on August 15, 2008
    Welcome back! I'm so happy your alright, and back strong as ever with a kick ass chapter! You were sorely missed!

    B reading U!
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  • From Afrieal on August 15, 2008
    oh goddess we're glad you're okay and all... we loved the update and look foreward to more when you can. Oh and we understand near death experiences reviving muses. Well that and being forced for a month to endure psychotic relitives with limited internet that will do a lot as well *smile*

    affie and rysha
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  • From Limericks on August 15, 2008
    YAY!!!!!!! I was so shocked when I saw that this story had been updated, I thought for sure I would never find out what else what going to happy. yay for Rin, such an awesome kid she is. I just really loved this chapter and I don't think that they're moving very fast. I think Inuyasha's and Sesshomaru's pace is perfectly fine, I can't wait to see what happens at the gathering, what stupid thing Koga is gonna say to Inuyasha. I'm so grateful you've got your muse back and I hope it continues to inspire you:)

    Thank You very much!!1:D
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  • From MilleniumForever on July 11, 2008
    I await your next chapter with Baited Breath. I, too, have an on and off affair with Inuyasha...well Sesshoumaru, but still. This is my favorite pairing from this anime....so, naturally this story has my attention. It is very well written and thought-out. I take offense to the "typical Aires" statement. We Aires are not flighty....we are just very picky....XDDD it is good to know another Aires with an Inuyahsa love affair. Well met.

    ~Sophia Max-Anderson
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  • From loretta537 on May 23, 2008
    i love this story, will you update it when school gets out in a few weeks? we really need to find out what's going on with kagome and the social worker.
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  • From Afrieal on May 13, 2008
    we just stumbled across your story and LOVE it we hope to see more of it when you return thanks for sharing what you have

    affie and rysha

    oh drop us a line if you can we found this great japanise dictionary online and would be glad to share it with you
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  • From loretta537 on April 12, 2008
    this is a great story. i really like the fact that inuyasha and sess havent fallen for eachother yet and you are taking time to delve into inyasha's background and feelings. i hope that you update this story very soon.
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