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Reviews for Yuudai no Keikoku

By : ashlin86
  • From Shadow2040AD on July 30, 2007
    interesting story keep up the good work
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  • From windlg84 on July 28, 2007
    please update soon
    Love the story
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  • From acr1228 on July 25, 2007
    Good fic, I'm really enjoying it. Though it bothers me that all of Inuyasha's emotional damage is being blamed on Kagome. Sure, she's really immature and abuses that necklace...but Sesshomaru has been just plain cruel and malicious. If ANY of these dog-demons had bothered to seek Inuyasha out and teach him, he wouldn't be so uncivilized and emotionally dependent. Really, lousy vassals, aren't they?

    Don't get me wrong, I love S/I fics...but I guess I feel like Sesshomaru needs to feel guilty first.
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  • From MidnightDusk25 on July 25, 2007
    Good so far! I love seeing Inu and Sess interact; you keep them in character without going overboard, which is a nice change to see in Inu/Sess romance stories. *claps* And Kouga's coming in too!! I really can't wait to see how the gang is going to react when they see Inu's castle.....(insert evil laughter here) Kagome's behavior has annoyed me since I started this series; I could see the need for the beads early in the story, when Inu was trying to kill her, but when they became friends, why not take them off? You don't keep your friends by slamming them into the ground whenever you feel like it or are in a bad mood. But at least this story gives her some reasons too; I've seen a lot of Kagome-bashing in Inu/Sess fics, so it's nice to see a change. I love your OCs so far, especially Junko and the twins. *laughs* Oh to see Kouga's face when (if?) he sees Inu's castle....Hehe. Anyhow, so far so good and I'm eagerly awaiting your next chapter!
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  • From Limericks on July 24, 2007
    Yay you updated! I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm happy to see Junko making some progress in healing Inuyasha's spirit. I would love to hear some stories about things that happened when he was young and on his own. That Rin is adorable, more enjoyble than shippo because shes not whiny, shes a pretty self- sufficient little girl. I'm really happy that the two of them are getting along so well. what is it about this little girl that can get under both sesshomaaru's and Inuyasha's skin? I also enjoy catching glimpses into the other characters relationships. Can't wait to see some more progress between inuyasha and sesshomaru. Keep up the good work and please update as soon as you can.

    Thank You:D
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  • From keomah on July 23, 2007
    Chapter 6
    Junko is great; she's helping Inuyasha and she's got a plan to get rid of the kotodama! Will she be taking Sesshoumaru to task at some point? Most of Inuyasha's problems are caused by Sesshoumaru. It's his fault that Inuyasha behaves the way he does and has self-esteem issues. Thank goodness for Rin! She's turning into the highlight of his day it seems. She's not judging him or trying to change him in any way and has no ulterior motives (like Sesshoumaru). She just wants his company. Looking forward to your next chapter!
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  • From Silverwindfara on July 23, 2007
    This story is interesting fun and well written.
    You've done a great job so far.
    I'm looking forward to read more from you
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  • From killakell on July 23, 2007
    This story is absolutely amazing. Your writing skills are crazy good. I really hope you update this story regularly and I'm going to have to start reading any other stories you are writing or have already written.
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  • From szaugg on July 23, 2007
    I am just getting more and more interested in the story: just feeling so much for Inuyasha and his life and it's just soooo sad, but makes me hope even more for a happy resolutation, and I love Junko. waiting for more and wish I had more nice things to say, but too tired!
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  • From FathomX on July 22, 2007
    Wonderful. I find that this story kinda pulls me in. Kinda makes
    me feel like Inuyasha is a real person and this is his story.
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  • From midnightsweet on July 22, 2007
    looking forward to whenever and whatever you update. i really enjoy this story. looking forward to the changes in inu and sess..
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  • From ladytokyo on July 17, 2007
    Oh how could you say that this chapter is long and boring? I really really like this chapter. details tell you what you need to know and I really love long chapters, it's like getting a present reading what 10 extra pages or so. Now then I really love the end finally someone understands Inuyasha, someone is going to help him and consoul him and help him. Finally someone saw what no one else wanted and their thinking about him first. and I'm quite please about it. I'm so happy that you did something different, a social worker of sorts fines that kagome miss way too much school. I mean really who would buy all of those lame excuse the old man been giving? And I'm going to make this very clear I DON'T LIKE KAGOME AND SHE SHOULD NOT BE WITH INUYASHA!! I wouldn't want to be with someone that treats me like a dog and have so called friends and don't see anything wrong with it. I'm glad kadea is finally starting to see she is one of my favorite characters. In chapter three were you said that inu close his eyes you said there were gold when he was a human at that time. and there are some words missing. I hope you update soon. Because I only login when the fic is good enough, or if I just review. Please update soon I fine myself really looking forward to your next chapters and please don't be shy with long chapters and to repeat myself there is nothing word with what you put in this fic. I love details how else do we get to feel like the people you are writing about? well than I'm sure theres more I wanted to say and can't think of it right now to plz update soon.

    ladytokyo
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 17, 2007
    Very good!
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  • From atomicbluekitty on July 15, 2007
    Amazing!
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  • From windlg84 on July 15, 2007
    please update soon
    Seems like inyasha has a long way to go

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