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Reviews for Yuudai no Keikoku

By : ashlin86
  • From midnightsweet on July 13, 2007
    so far so good. i like his teacher's . they will do him a lot of good. he will be something too see in six months. looking forward too the look on his friends faces when they meet the new and improve inu..or should i say lord.
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  • From KIKI441 on July 13, 2007
    i didn't think it was too long and besides, once you
    get the introduction of all the characters out of the
    way. then you start t o get to the good stuff. i for
    one hope junko is able to remove the rosary. that is
    something inuyasha can definitedly do without. kagome
    only uses it when she's frustrated and angry with
    him for some stupid little thing. then she sits
    him in front of koga. that is humiliating to be
    sat like a common dog in the face of your rival.
    anyway, i hope the next update will be soon because
    i am dying to see what will happen next.
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  • From acr1228 on July 13, 2007
    good chapter! Another soap option might be soapwort or a similar plant.
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  • From szaugg on July 12, 2007
    I really enjoyed this chapter. I didn't find it boring at all. Yes, there wasn't a lot of action, but it was all intersting and the characters were fascinating enough that I was really curious to see what was coming next.

    As for the 'pull the character out of one's ass' thing...I think sometimes those are the ones that end up really enriching a story. The last one I did was a character who shows up in the second chapter, and ends up being the main antagonist! Who knew? :-) Maybe it's the whole ass connection: yaoi, asses....gotta be something good there, LOL.

    Anyway, I like the swordsmaster, the servant, and the mystic gal. I am enjoying the depth of research that is bringing this alive, and I like the pace. It's slow, but it's rich and engaging; a good combination, IMO.
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  • From kallipso on July 12, 2007
    Yea! I love your work so far. Keep it coming. I can't wait so see where this is going.

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  • From keomah on July 12, 2007
    Chapt. 5
    Thank you for all your hard work digging up facts! They give your story depth and allow us to see the little nuances that make up the scene in rich detail. It's great Junko is on hand for Inuyasha; bringing her in sounds like the only really good thing that Sesshoumaru has done for Inuyasha. Some one who can heal his broken soul. And get rid of that nasty kodoma! Maybe Kouga can stall Kagome and the others for a year or two waiting for the 'correct' invitation...lol
    Bibi11
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  • From Limericks on July 12, 2007
    Another awesome chapter:D I'm very happy that somethingis going to be done about the rosary around his neck. Finally someone is thinking of protecting him from kagome, finally someone to understand his feelings. I love the new characters, everyone is so interesting. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to see the new chapter.

    Thank You!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2007
    Keep the details. They are interesting. I like how this story is progressing.

    Sorry 'bout your computer woes, they can be SO frustrating!
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on July 12, 2007
    this is really, really, really good. i abosultely love it so far. i cant wait to see how inuyasha handles his lessons and the change of the relationship between him and his brother. till next time, ja!
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  • From Limericks on July 08, 2007
    YAY a good story!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!! I'm so happy you decided to write this story. There is such a shortage of really good sess/inu stories out there and this is looking to be one of the really good ones. I'm really loving this plot. I like the idea of something so magnificent belonging to Inuyasha thus giving him the opportunity for sesshomaru to get to know him. I have no respect for Kagome taking out her frustrations out on Inuyasha. I'm always disappointed when the others never say anything to her. Kikyo used to be his first love. He wants her to find peace and he still loves her, you can't treat him bad because hes inadvertently hurting someone else's feelings. Will sesshomaru find a way to get the beads off before Kagome and the others get there? Can't wait to read the rest of your story. Keep up the good work and please update as often as you can :D

    Thank You
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  • From FathomX on July 08, 2007
    Wow... That left me wanting more. Hope you update soon and
    good luck untill then.
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  • From midnightsweet on July 08, 2007
    nice story.
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  • From szaugg on July 08, 2007
    I liked it a lot. Inuyasha - I am very happy to find Inuyasha sticking to his honor so wonderfully. and I would say more, but I've gotta go. Just...looking forward to more, really enjoying it, and I like how you're doing the characters and the plot!
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  • From nchsmi on July 07, 2007
    Keep it up, I love this story! Great job!
    B reading U!
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  • From kogaluver on July 07, 2007
    Another good chapter. I like Sess's patience with Inuyasha, and Rin is always adorable. The lessons should be fun, especially the ones on manners, lol. I don't know if Inuyasha could actually have a conversation without thowing in some cussing.

    Stupid Kagome's going to lead Kouga on. I know Kouga's stubborn about accepting the fact the Kags loves Inu and not him, but he's so sweet. She shouldn't be using him. I would love for Kouga to see a different side of Kagome while they're staying at his dens. He's never spent much time with her so he really doesn't know anything past her beauty. And Shippo should get a crash course in respect as well. LOL
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