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Reviews for Black Widow Miko

By : madmiko

From ANON - Cherry on September 03, 2008
I really need to find out who done it! I think I have an idea but i'm probably wrong detective I am not. Neway update soon please.
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From poeticpunkrocker92 on August 18, 2008
I love this fanfic so much! Please update as soon as you can. Thanks.
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From ANON - Neo-Crystal on August 12, 2008
FINALLY!! I was starting to think that you might have died on us! I LIKE this chapter!! There is only 2 more chapters?! *pouts* ah, poo.
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From ANON - Silverkitsune26 on August 09, 2008
Yey............you updated (does a happy dance). I seriously just LOVE this story with all it's twists and turns. Can't hardly wait until the next chapter. Love to find out what you will think of next. You write really good and it's fun to read your stories.

I'm sorry for all that has happend to you and yours. I'm sorry for you'r loss (BIG hug). I know it's not much, ut I hope the hug helps a little bit.

Yours Sensearly

Love Silverkitsune26 ^__^
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From lonelyreverance on August 09, 2008
Seeing as you think that there will only be a few more chapters, and rereading this fic from start to finish, i finally feel like taking a guess at the culprit... but the only one that would go through such an elaborate set up, would be onigumo/naraku ... and that still does not answer the question of how the souls got eradicated... Gah, my brain hurts... Please update soon!!!
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From Legilmyth on August 08, 2008
Okay, I know this probably sounds crazy,after reading your last chapter I just couldn't come up with any ideas of who the main bad guy is. (As I said in my last review) But then as I was trying to get some sleep the thought entered my mind and I just couldn't shake it. Shippo.
I know crazy, But it all fits with the exception of how the three guys's souls were purified.
I just think that Shippo is very possesive of his Kagome.
What can I say, I just had to write it down. I'm probably way off.
Any way, love this story, hope to see more in the future.
Legilmyth
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From Legilmyth on August 05, 2008
It was wonderful to see another chapter to this story. It has got to be one of the most in depth tales I've read anywhere. I think the fact that you had HIei and Kagome get married is not only original, but it also is keeping the chapracters very true to themselves. Hiei is very complex and has more depth then his teammates give him creadit for.
Anyway, I totaly understand how time can run away with you and wont bagger you to hurry. But I will be looking forward to the next chapter, I have been wracking my brain for many chapters now trying to figure out who the killer is. Best of luck with your new computer and time for writing I will be waiting to see the fruits of your wonderful efforts.
Legilmyth
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From celticicegoddess on August 05, 2008
OHHHH THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!! I simply loved this chapter. it completly rocked. And now the cat is out of the bag. Please updated as soon as you can. ttyl.
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From swasdiva on March 26, 2008
Sweet...bAbY...JESUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can yell that with no threat of sacrilege because I gave up fanfic reading for Lent, so I think of it as rousing praise for the Good Lord's Easter abundance. God BLESS having this new chapter to come back to. He is risen INDEED!!!!

Alright, my personal tent revival aside, you took this chapter to CHURCH and back!!!! The depth of plot and character development in this chapter alone went beyond any fanfiction I have ever read. In my life. In my 7 past lives. In my first run as a paramecium on precambrian earth. The first scene exploring Kagome's recollections blew me away. It was simultaneously sweeping and intimate, both in her nostalgia of the past and Hiei's reactions to her memories. Their closeness was so tangible I could feel the warmth of body heat and love. Sounds corny, but dag nabbit if you don't elicit that from your readers with each word you write. You immersed me in the past with each of her mates in a bittersweet, fragile, absolutely beautiful way.

In this chapter specifically, I was very aware of how much deliberate care you take with word choice, or at least, that you can fake attention to detail like a high-class ho. Isn't that something to be proud of? Each character had substantial time in the spotlight. Not one sidestory was compromised in your goal to further the bond between Hiei and Kagome. I tell you, I don't miss the minute allusions and subtle details you put in your work, not in the description and not in the dialog. Even though I'm still nursing the shrapnel wounds from the Genjiro bombshell, the solid strength of your writing ability left me more than fulfilled. Actually, speaking of said WMD, I seem to recall that Genkai used the word "related", not "siblings". Hmmmmmmmm.....*swasdiva thoughtfully strokes chin and puffs pipe, then coughs like an old Jersey grandma*

I utterly adored the entirety of this chapter. Every. Single. Word. And oh yeah, the last ones especially. Good boy, Hiei. Very, very, very good boy. I cannot wait to read the follow-up to THAT.

We now interrupt the regularly scheduled review with a word from our...uh...reviewer....

So yeah, since I don't know your email, I just have to thank you where all the world can see. It is reviews like yours that make me want to write stories at all. I am, of course, referring to the exquisite, should-be-dipped-in-bronze review you left for "The Grand Cross". I take great care in formulating plots and choosing words. That's why I appreciate it so much when I can see that same effort in another author's work and why it takes me eons to post a stinking one-shot. I'm both lazy and way too meticulous, a lethal fanfiction combination. The fact that you got exactly what I was trying to do really means a lot, I mean copiously, heinously, profusely, really, really, *really* means a lot. So thank you for the perfect review. It made my life.
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From ANON - kala on March 25, 2008
I like this story and hope that you update soon!
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From ANON - saiyajin princess on March 06, 2008
oh boy... i cant wait to find out what happens next, with our little couple..
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From ANON - Lost Child on March 04, 2008
wow this took me awhile to read, but I couldn't write any comment on the story until I reached the most recent chapter. I have to say this is what I've been looking for in a story...your chapters are very long. It takes me at least an hour or two to read just one chapter! lol, I do enjoy that, makes it more enjoyable what you get to read so much of a good story...lol and you still leave it with a cliffhanger. I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it will be soon. I'll be keeping an eye out for it (after all I gotta know Kagome's response to his question) Keep up the awesome work
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From DarkRoseofChaos on February 23, 2008
Wow. YOU FINALY UPDATED!!!!!! I used to check this story on a daily basis, now its kinda faded to a weekly basis and when I saw the 'next chapter' button, I thought that I had momentarily lost it XD It took me about an hour to read this chapter, which makes me happy as I really have nothing better to do with this being a saturday, but anywho, I love how long it was! I loved getting the information from Kagome, that really helped me see what was going on and stuff, GAH! I dont know where my mind is taking me right now! My apologies! When Hei asked Kagome to marry him...... I squeed (a mixture between screaming and saying cute in a high pitched voice.) I had not expected him to do that! I eagerly await your next chapter!
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From ANON - Neo-Crystal on February 22, 2008
OOoo! I want to be mad at you since you took so long, but I LOVE THE LONG, INCREDIBILE AWESOME CHAPTER!! the plot just gets thicker and thicker! I just love how long you make the chapter, but UPDATE QUICKER THIS TIME! I need to find out the whole plot! Kagura's son IS SESHOUMARU'S!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????? WHAT??!! the only way that I could think its possible if kagura was in the plot some how and they were able to get something from sesshy when he was being killed. Are you going to give the FULL story on each of their deaths in the chapters to come?? And PLZ PLZ say that their souls were not purified!!! Kagome should be able to say goodbye, and hehe I wanna see those three give death threat warnings to hiei to take care of her!! hehehe
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From Tricia1224 on February 22, 2008
I was surprised and delighted to see a new chapter up for this story. I was so caught up in reading it that I almost burned dinner. *Extra crispy garlic bread anyone?* I loved this whole chapter. I was a little surprised to find out the results of the aura paternity test. Now I just wonder if there was a scheme or if Shesshoumaru really did cheat on Kagome. If Naraku was still alive I would blame it on him. :) No worries about taking a long time to ad this chapter. Sometimes writing takes a while, then there is the whole editing thing to do, not to mention family disasters. *hug for you* I am looking forward to the next chapter. Have a great day and smile.
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