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Reviews for Black Widow Miko

By : madmiko
  • From celticicegoddess on November 05, 2007
    YAY!!!! Oh i love you. Shes pregnant...with TWINS!!! AHHHH...Ok now back to reality...i am sooo confused. Does something take over her when she is pregnant? Don't let her kill HIEI. I don't think she wanted to kill her mates...but could it be that she absorbed Naraku? and he comes out? So confused....PLEASE UPDATE!*Puppy eyes* PWEEEEEASE????

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  • From ANON - MidNight on November 05, 2007
    wow this chapter had me on the egde of my seat.
    Kagome! twins! OMG! I have nothing more to say but WOW
    an you kill me with the cliff-hangers but its awsome Ya :D
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  • From ANON - Neo-Crystal on November 02, 2007
    Holy frinkin crap! I read ALL the chapters in one full day! and I have to say, OMG!!! THIS STORY IS FRINKIN AMAZING! PLZ don't have her sleep with kurama! (wow. normally its the other way around. since I usually like kur/kag, but I CAN'T SEE KAGOME or HIEI IN MORE GREIF!) have hiei storm in there and claim "his woman"!!! if you have any list that you update alert plz put me on the list!!!!
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  • From Tricia1224 on October 28, 2007
    This is the second story I have read written by you. I do have to say that you do a wonderful job. This story is great. The descriptions you use of objects and feelings make me see and feel what you are portraying. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter of this story.
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  • From LindaJ on October 19, 2007
    All right, madmiko, I've been a bum. I swear I'm going to try to start writing reviews. But you have to keep writing this story! You've left me hanging forever this time! Do you want me to say I love it? I love it! Do you want me to say it's great? It's great! Do you want me to beg? Please, please write some more! Did it work?
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  • From ANON - slave2maru on October 19, 2007
    oooh im dyong to find out what happens! please update soon
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  • From ANON - curious_corbie on October 15, 2007
    Your Evil. Damn your cliffhanger!At least thats what i see the ending as. I spent ALL DAY yesterday reading your story which was brought to my attention by my good buddy Legilmyth(Also an author here)and then almost 4 hours tonight to finish it. You are an absolutly fabulous author. I love the details you give and you have the characters attitudes perfectly! I love the humor you have added to break up the parts dealing with the more "serious" and emotional parts. I am anxiously awaiting for you to update. Which i hope shall be soon. This in one of the very few fics i have been able to enjoy in quite some time. keep up the good work.
    Corbie
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  • From szaugg on September 18, 2007
    I don't know how I keep managing to miss your updates, but I do! I even look for the story, and still miss them.

    I liked this last chapter quite a bit. Hiei's surety of what 'will' happen, combined with his deeply held worry over rejection that comes out at that one crucial moment were very nicely done. I was completely carried along with the story. Laughed over how the sons deal with each other and the 'free for all,' and I am looking forward to, I hope, Kurama getting his ass completely handed to him by Hiei. I am also hoping that my sad, pathetic inability to catch up to the updates means that I get to see the next one before too much longer.

    Oh, re: the blowjob. Once again, I am enjoying your sexual creativity for Kagome and Hiei. It's nicely done, different, very smooth style that gives enough physical description that it's very erotic, but enough emotional and mental 'stuff' is in there to feed my own love of the romance of it all. I can hardly wait for next chapter!

    And sorry this one was a bitch to write, but as a reader, even waiting almost 2 weeks longer due to personal dumbassitude, it was STILL worth it.
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  • From ANON - Ru-Doragon on September 15, 2007
    I just went and looked at the other reviews. Silly me. How could I forget.


    -takes deep breath- WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU THINKING SENDING HER TO KURAMA!?!?!?! WELL!?! Based on what he said I don't think that it could really be anyone else. Just make sure that she says no okay? You will be in BIG TROUBLE if she doesn't. Honestly, I would consider that rape. Kurama's forcing her, even if she doesn't know it, to do something that she doesn't want to do. Still thinking about that poison thing.

    -looks at clock- AHHH! WORK! Must get ready! -suddenly calm- Damn. I hate working. I only like it b/c I get paied. I like money. Even if I don't get to keep it all for me to spend on whatever I want. Must get ready now!
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  • From ANON - Ru-Doragon on September 15, 2007
    I'm just about ready to kill you right now. You know that right? Thank's for telling me that I'm wrong though. I'm guessing that in the next chapter Kurama's gonna open that box and that's where all the clues are gonna come from am I right? Well I guess I'll find out next update. Sorry I didn't read this earlier. I've become obssed w/ FMA. Riza and Roy you know. Such a perfect pairing. Anyway. OF COURSE I'LL BE STAYING TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS! You really think that I would stay w/ this so long and then just LEAVE!?! Are you crazy?! Not gonna happen! -completly serious- Know that if you don't finish this I WILL find you and make you finish it. Finishing this story is NOT and option for you. It's gonna happen. Anyway. -pauses- Again. I can't think of anything for the poison right now and I have to go get ready for work so I'll have to think about it later. If we don't find out about the poison in the next chapter hopefully I'll be able to get another theory from it. If I think of something else before then I'll leave another review telling you what it is. Probably anyway. If I remember to do that. I might not. Anyway hurry up and get Hiei and Kagome back together. You are going to get so much flame for that. Or at least almost everyone comenting about it. This is a really great chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon. ^_~

    I think this might have been the longest chapter yet. Keep it up. I love this story.
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  • From ANON - Dark_Rose_of_chaos on September 09, 2007
    Oh my, if anyone knows how to fuck something up its Heie. If anyone knows how to feel extremely guilty for someone else fucking it up its Kagome. If anyone knows how to make a situation worse its Kurama! What is going to happen! Only the Kamis know but I am willing to bet that Kurama is going to walk out of this one short one testical. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - YIN-YANG on September 06, 2007
    NNNNNOOOOOOOooo!!!!!! dont go to kurama dont do it plz plz plz plz plz plz plz!!!!!!!


    plz update soon:)
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  • From ANON - hmm___oo on September 06, 2007
    for some reason i really hate youko kurama in this story..i want to stab him with his own..tool o_O
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  • From ANON - river on September 06, 2007
    Oh HURRAY for long chapters that require snacks and beverages!!! Those poor manly men and their inability to interface with their emotional responses in a rational manner.

    And, if Ayame had her heart ripped out, wouldn't she end up in the Reikai? Wake up, you binky-sucking toddler... do you think your team might need that information? Or does Yemon know how to trap souls? It is so complex... a plan within a plan within a plan... now I will spend the next week obsessively checking for the next update ^_^;;
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Wolf on September 05, 2007
    CRASH! *don't worry, that was just my jaw hitting the computer desk*

    WTF!????! I ... um .... great chapter! Lots of details, and emotions! I wonder if Hiei will "accidentally" catch Kagome and Kurama, and do some damage? I shouldn't be surprised that Youko is playing underhanded, but Kurama? *shakes head* I am disapointed in him.

    Does Hiei get to beat the @$&% out of Kurama? Can't wait for THAT!

    Keep up the excellent work! 50 odd pages huh? Wicked!

    Until we meet again.
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