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Reviews for Black Widow Miko

By : madmiko

From celticicegoddess on September 05, 2007
milady i bow to your creative genius. i think hiei will win but not after kagome runs him slightly insane. i know that she fears being with him might make him a target, but please tell me that he makes her see reason, and that she is not going to be sleeping with kurama at the end of the chap. that just might get kurama killed. but i can't wait for you to update. ttyl.
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From ANON - Timmy22 on September 05, 2007
Love this story and one of the best i've read. The storyline is great but the details are what makes one of the best. Can't wait for more to come and am looking forward to it. Kuruma and Kagome should't have all out sex though because she's under stress with Hiel and that braclet so it almost be like rape and we don't want that. Great job can't wait to read more.
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From ANON - YIN-YANG on September 03, 2007
OH I FEEL THE LOOOOOOOVVEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! I'M JUST ON THE EGDE OF MY SEAT WITH EVERY CHAPTER WOW! I MEAN F'N WOW! YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN I LOVE TO READ A GOOD MYSTERY THIS IS WOW!!!

please update really soon thx!!!
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From szaugg on August 25, 2007
woo hoo! loved it. looking forward to where they gofrom here. crud, no time to type. love, want more, that sums it up!
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From swasdiva on August 25, 2007
It's 2:30 in the morning, and while I have not the clarity to write a decent review, I will say this about the last four chappies I've just caught up on:

HOT DAMN.

Seriously, you've covered every angle of awesome: in-depth plot, twists, mystery, SEX, blossoming love, intrigue, SEX, schemes, desire, SEX and SEX. Yeah, this story is definitely one of my favorites, and I swear, you have single-handedly made me a Hiei/Kags shipper, because I never could get into that pairing before your fics. God bless you!!!!!

And I have to wonder about who exactly is behind the deaths of Inuyasha, Sesshoumaru and Kouga. Is Kanna and that mirror accounted for, considering their souls are missing? And thinking back on the story of the Great Quest...this whole mess wouldn't have happened had a mortally-wounded thief not surrendered his soul and taken on the appearance of both Inuyasha and Kikyo in order to make them *think* they betrayed each other. Who could do that besides Naraku? I know some of his attachments could. Could someone in the appearance of Sesshoumaru have convinced Kagura he was legit? If so, whose son would Genjiro be in that case? Plus it seems like Kikyo, Kagura and Ayame are loosely working together, or at least they're aware of what the other is doing. What's up with that connection, too? GAH!!!! So many questions and possibilities, but I'm normally heinously bad at guessing the right twist, so I'll leave it to your masterful way with words, sit back and enjoy the ride...every single super badass hot and sexy one of them!!!
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From ANON - Phoenix Wolf on August 25, 2007
WOW!!! Another absolutely fantastic chapter for you!

I would like to write more, but I am so dang tired right now ... I'll save my guesses and thoeries for your next wonderful chapter.

Until we meet again.
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From ANON - Ru-Doragon on August 25, 2007
Well duh it wasn't him. If I had realized it was Kagura who said that last time I probably could have even told you who it was. -looking bored- Does anybody else have this theory or is just me? Am I the ONLY ONE trying to figure this out? Seriously? If my theory is right to I get a congrats? I'll say it again, you've never denied my theory. That leads me to believe that I'm right. If it's not right please tell me now. I want to be able to come up w/ another theory before the truth is revealed if I'm wrong. Oh, and if Sess gets his arm back, that's great! I like him better w/ both arms. I just feel like he can do more when he has both. Ai ai ai. It's 12:45. I need to go to sleep soon. Know me though, it's not likly that's gonna happen. -scratchs head- So, what kind of spell does Kagura have to make her kids aura seem like Sess's huh? She has to have something now doesn't she? I mean, he's not really Sess's son now is he. I'm not real sure what the bitch and ho were fighting about, but frankly, I don't give a rats ass. At least not right now. -yawns- Shit. I'm tired. Well then. This is a great chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon. ^_~
This is tied w/ like, 2 others, for my favorite story on this site. Then again, I don't have nearly as many stories on this site that I do on regular FF. -srugs- Less stories here. Oh well. Probably better that way. Ja ne.
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From celticicegoddess on August 24, 2007
it was soooo worth the wait. i am crying. the end of the chapter was soooo sweet, and i get the feeling that someone is going to walk up on them. i will laugh if it is her sons. or shippo. aww heck even one of the other detectives, just because it would be funny. oooh or maybe yemon walks up on them. lol. ok i give you a hug for how great this chapter was. ttyl.

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From ANON - Dark_Rose_Of_Chaos on August 19, 2007
For some reason, the sight seems to have kicked me off. Hmm, interesting. It also apears, as I was rereading the chapter, that I missed the last part there. All I have to say is WOW!!! OH MY DEAR GOD WOMAN UPDATE PLEASE! You like to keep us all chomping at the bit, dont you? Now I have so many questions that are unanswered. For instance, did the souls of the Taiyoukai get purrified or just not move on. Is Sesshomaru back from the dead to teach Kagura a lesson, or is Heie just really good at vantriliquism?! I must know!! or perhaps I am going to far into this and I dont know where I wanted to go with this. Darnit! Maybe Youko magically healed himself and is going to beat the shit out of Kagura becaus he feels like it. I dunno......Answer my questions.....pwetty pwease? And again, good chapter. Adios!
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From ANON - Rianith on August 17, 2007
Such a wonderful story. I'm not really a Hiei fan, period.. but It's a good pairing.

Personally I prefer the three supposively dead Youkai boys. ^_^ {The inu brothers and Kouga} ... So if Kagome isn't useing them anymore, I'll gladly give them a home. :D
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From ANON - CyndeLou on August 17, 2007
Ok awesome chapter!!! I'm glad that Kagome and Hiei are finally opening up more! And Whoa!! What�s up with the sudden appearance of Sesshoumaru very good cliffhanger! I can�t wait for the next installment! Keep up the good work!
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From DarkRoseofChaos on August 17, 2007
Oh my! It just keeps on getting better and better! I just think that Heie is going to end up killing something before this settles down. But its so cute *w* Ok, now that that is over with, I hope that you update this soon! I really enjoy this story and I am sure that the people that dont have enough wit to review do as well. Untill next time, Au Revoir!
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From MysticAngel77 on August 16, 2007
Oi! Not fair! Now I'm dying to know what the hell is going on - sneaky witch you! It cant be her mistaking one of the sons as Sesshoumaru since she's seen them before. Not Youko, ears are a dead giveaway.. hm. Really cant be the true Sesshoumaru because that would be crazy awkward with the Hiei situation, because at this point, she would just go back to her mate and this would cease to be a Kag/Hiei fic. /ponders Imposterness? I mean, Naraku has done it before... attachment getting all copy-cat with his daddy's pranks? Guess I'll just have to wait and see!! I really enjoy the length of your chapters and appreciate the time you spend on them, I know it must be difficult. I hope your muse keeps things flowing, because this is a wonderful story. Kagome has a nice balance, she isn't too perfect, you know how those stories go. :)
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From ANON - Ru-Doragon on August 15, 2007
You do know that I'm going to kill you for that ending don't you? It can't be Sess that's for sure. Wait. Was there a point in the story when Inu, Sess, and Koga were all together somewhere and were watching over Kags? Since this chapter took me 2 HOURS to read I can't really remember. I didn't say they were too slow. I just said that nothing else had been revealed that we didn't already know. And you still haven't said anything about the poison in the story. When are we gonna find out about that? Not to mention you haven't told me I'm wrong so until you do I'm going w/ her leaking her powers unintentionally. Also the fact that you didn't deny it right off the bat makes me think that even more. And I never said anything about taking off the purple playtapus costume. I don't even know if he has anything on underneath. -pauses thinking- On second thought you're right. -turns to Sess- Get that damn thing off. It's AFF. Everyone here has some henti in them otherwise they wouldn't be here. -Sess staring back at me- Hn. Females are good for only one thing. -I frown and throw heavey book at Sess- Shut up or I'll go get your mom and you can deal w/ her. -turns back to review- Sorry about that. Back to the review. Of course you love Kurama. It's your story! You made him that way! And yeah. He probably is on a ton of people's shit list by now. And yes, he's defenitly on mine. He should feel honored. I don't normally have a shit list. Normally I deal w/ people right then and there if they piss me off. I don't always hold grudges well. Did you know that Sess is just a male version of his mom? Wierd. Expecially since people normally think he looks like his dad. I'm not even sure that he got his hair from his dad. It's more blue than white. A really pale blue and really long. Oh, and don't forget to have Hiei beat the crap out of Kurama. You already said that he was gonna do it. Or rather you had him say that he was gonna do it so you have to have him do it. This is a great chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon. ^_~
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From ANON - Mistress of Darkness32 on August 15, 2007
Sesshoumaru's alive!?!? How??? Are Kouga and InuYasha alive as well? This story is the best. I love it, and I just can't quit reading it over and over again. Hope to see the next chapter out soon so I can figure out what is going on. I mean Sesshy comeing out of no where to stand up to Kagura. Not to mention is Kagura's son actually Sesshy's, or someone elses. And did Kikyo, Kagura, and Ayame have kill Kagome's mates, cause Ayame's coversation with that wolf sounds really guilty, along with things said and done by all three of the women throughout the story so far. This is just to good.
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