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Reviews for AROMA

By : darkmind
  • From WTW on July 10, 2007
    Oh? So your translating it then? I see. Well! Please go on and finish the rest of the 9 chapters left please. ^^

    Thank you for doing so! A few spelling mistakes but that can be easly over looked with how the plot is going. I'd love to see what Kag does when she wakes up. XD
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  • From Palmerdreams on July 10, 2007
    If you would like after you are done translating the fanfiction. I would be happy to beta for you. I like the story so far and I can't wait to read the rest of it.
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  • From inuyashaloverr on July 10, 2007
    Well, I have no idea how to translate anything, but I do like what you have here thus far, so I do hope you can continue with the translations.
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on July 10, 2007
    The translation was pretty good. A piece of advice while you are translating: go back over what you have translated and apply your grammatical skills to it. There are a lot of areas where you have used the wrong tense, and that can throw people off while reading. Other areas suck as while doing their dialog are oddly contructed. An example of how to more clearly state what you are saying:

    "Do you smell that?" Inu Yasha asked.

    "Smell what? I don't smell anything," he responded.

    And so forth and so on. Another thing I noticed was that commas (,) were used where there should have been periods (.).

    Please do not take this as harsh criticism or anything. You really are doing a wonderful but hard job. I know that translating can be rough. I did enjoy the story though and do hope that you keep translating the other 9 chapters.

    Take care.

    Good story and please update soon.
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