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Reviews for Sweet Release

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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 27, 2009
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 20, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From winter1992 on February 24, 2008
    they must be sex fanatics to be doing that everyday
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  • From ANON - puppydog on February 20, 2008
    Sweet! Love it! Keep it coooming,keep it cooming,keep it cooooming!
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  • From ANON - Kitty on February 10, 2008
    Write more please.
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  • From ANON - Kitty on January 31, 2008
    Is that it? Please tell me you are going to write more. I want to read more, it's so good.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 28, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From sweetkagome on January 11, 2008
    such a great story i love it!!! please update soon!!!!
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  • From inulover16 on December 09, 2007
    I liked the concept of the story, but the problem for me was the grammar. I saw that you wrote you got a beta, and that you had revised the chap. ?? The fic still needs a lot of work. I'm sure that you can do better. More detail, better grammar and I believe this will become a great fic.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 06, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From savewolf on December 01, 2007
    honey aword opf caution never and i really mean never leave a cliff hange rlike that ok it could get you kile despacially with such a greats tory liek this one but honestly love ths tory please hurry and make more and send e the lingk when you made another chapter my email is normamourani@yahoo.com
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 07, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From yeiko87 on November 02, 2007
    This story has such great potential. You seem to have a lot of good ideas. However, that having been said, the grammatical errors were so prominent that they nearly took my attention away from the story. My advice would be to get a beta reader, or to at least type out the stories in Microsoft Word (or some type of spellcheck+grammarcheck program) before you upload them. I look forward to seeing future chapters :P :)
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  • From ANON - Bj on November 01, 2007
    Very erotic.....nice I like!
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  • From ANON - Aiko on July 23, 2007
    The idea and the raw content are good, solid. However, the grammar is shaky at best, I'm assuming you're either ESL (English as a Second Language) or just a "young" writer. I suggest using a beta-reader to help with this little bump in the road. Keep writing.
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