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Reviews for The Sickness

By : theMaven
  • From ANON - Srta Laila on September 17, 2016

    Wow, first I'm sorry about my bad english, I really hope you understeand. I just Love this fic so much, wow, this story is so hot and at same time all the characters are so lovely and sweet. This perspective of Sesshoumari not knowing what to do, and taken advices from his mom, is so cute and funny. I love the way both sesshoumaru and rin just don't know what to do when they are realy "doing", was so real. 

    And I just want to say that I realy love the way that you write, and love yours fanfictions, the first I had read was the translate of In different Ligh in fanfiction,net, and I fall in love for all the story and the way the relationchip of Sess/Rin has grown. And wow you write the best hentai scenes that I have read in my life! 


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  • From H4r4S4m4 on December 16, 2007
    I loved this fic so much! Probably the best Sessh/Rin fic I've read this far. Wonderful! *goes to read your other fics*
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  • From orvida on December 08, 2007
    i find myself quite enjoying reading this story of yours and i hope to read many more stories from you in the furture.
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  • From Kakkara18 on September 06, 2007
    I have to say that was one of the best Sesshoumaru/Rin Fan Fictions I have ever read. I read A lot of them, and rarely find them to keep my in a suspension of disbelief. You Have a wonderful Talent to keep it believable. I was even inspired to draw a sketch of them. I would love to be able to send it to you.
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  • From perihawk on September 03, 2007
    That was really awesome. I adored Sess' mom and the flow of the story. THANK you for writing.
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  • From liliesformary on August 18, 2007
    I love how you write Sesshomaru, and the scenes with him and his mother are really touching. It's nice to see him so unsure of himself, especially when he's usually the sex god. Well done, I really enjoyed it!
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  • From Reymond on August 17, 2007
    Oh yes ! welcome back ! I’m very glad to read you again. (Sorry for my english, but I’m French you see ? I love Inuyasha’s characters too much I just had to read fanfics in engliss, which improved a lot, thank you to all the fabulous authors for that !)

    You have such subtilities in your writing manners and lemon, I love it ! I have to say that for me “In a different light” is one of the best Inuyasha’s stories, with a Sesshomaru I see as one of the four or five best Sesshomaru’s character described between all the fanfics I already read !!! That’s true ! Sure, I have loved a lot of others, but never forgot the yours…
    These I loved the most are from the following stories :
    - “Across the ages” and “Chronicles of the West” by Inuyoukai8 ;
    - “Conversations with a taiyoukai” by Demonlordlover on FF ;
    - “Tales from the house of the Moon” by Resmiranda ;
    - “Teaching Rin” by Avonnalay on FF
    - “Passion” by CiraArana
    - “Tortured love” by Rinseternalsoul ;
    - “Kagome Where are you ?” by Jeffs

    And in M/M section :
    - “Domestication” by Amber Rose ;
    - “Inglorious” and “Fraternal” by wickeD plUm.

    Well, more than five in fact, mmm !
    I hope to read you more, thank you to be here !!!

    From a french mother and reader,
    Bonjour de la France,

    Merely Truth


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  • From on August 07, 2007
    This story was amazing. You have talent.
    ~Brittany Sambrano
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  • From OdietAmo on August 07, 2007
    Wow....that was utterly amazing. The writing was so beautifuly done, and the emotions were expressed fantastically. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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  • From NireNekoSama on August 06, 2007
    Oh gosh!!! Long time no chat, right?!?!
    I thought you forgot about us peoples at AFF but apparently not!
    I am such a huge fan of yours and have read your fics religiously! Hahaha =)
    I guess I'm going to have to read the manga to fully understand the fic, but I loved it anyways!!
    You are such an expert at portraying the characters. Down to a T!! I am just SOO amazed at how talented and wity you are!
    I totally loved Sesshoumaru's mom. I've always wondered if someone could ever portray her so well and obviously you have!! I clap in the name of you. Hahaha *standing ovation*
    I will always remain loyal to you and I hope you will write more soon.

    =)
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  • From Mmoirai on August 05, 2007
    That was an interesting spin on Sesshoumaru's sex-ed and he and Rin's first time. You have portrayed them both as very naieve here, and have done a good job. Nicely written.
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  • From northstar on August 05, 2007
    Hehehe, welcome back! Excellent writing style, great humor, and hot citrus makes for a very satisfying oneshot. I can definately see your point on the characters' speach patterns. Also, it was enjoyable to see a fanfic that is current with the manga! Sesshy is having a hard time of it lately and its nice to see a fic where he retains his dignity despite what he's gone through. The conversation between Sesshoumaru and his mother was priceless too, a mixture of serious and snickers both.

    I hope to read more from you in the future. Feel free to drop me an email if you wish to chat or such.
    Warm regards
    ~ Northstar
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  • From WTW on August 02, 2007
    lol, met the computer store in the sky. XD Honestly you've done better than I have in that factor. Same happend to mine and I have yet to get a new laptop. *claps for you* Great job on getting one so quickly hun.

    You've done very well with this story. Not at all anything OC about the way you do things. Its like so in character and I'll say it again so very much updated with whatall has been going on in the maga series that I'm astoned. ^^

    Thank you for writing in such detail and do please continue to write when ever you able. Thank you for sharing you talents hun.
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  • From JLucPitard on August 02, 2007
    Hot, but handled very delicately. Full of laughs, especially at Sesshoumaru's expense! I enjoyed the long build up and the idea of Sesshy getting "the talk" from his mother, but you include a lot of wonderful character insights along the way. Well written and up to date on the recent manga as well. It's a solid fic all around, though at points I felt like Sessh was taking advantage of Rin's mental incompetence (um, like the kid with the very low IQ?), but we'll pretend she's only ignorant of sex. You'd think with all the traveling she'd have seen animals in the Spring, but for the sake of the fic, she's never seen what "the limb" is used for. Maybe Jaken always covered her eyes? A fun read.
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  • From Rubenstein on August 02, 2007
    Great conclusion! There was something indescribably sexy about Sesshomaru being a virgin... and touched for the very first time. Anyway, I loved it and I hope you make more great smut! :)
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