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Reviews for It Must Be Destiny

By : theamberdragonfly
  • From ANON - Teresa on July 06, 2012
    ._. I was wondering when Shippo was going to appear. I had forgot about him until i heard the green eyes part and literally my mouth dropped and i took a double take on that paragraph. This is the first Fanfic's that I've read in a long time that made my jaw drop :) good job!
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  • From Inulover31 on November 03, 2008
    Another excellent story. I once again find myself reading till the end. Your story is so well thought out and descriptive. I was in tears when Kagome read the letter to Inu.

    I would love to have you write in both this story and the first follow-ups that didn't occur so far in the future, though. It would be nice to have some story to follow up on why Kagome was in the bathroom crying in the first one and give some more on when the youngest was born and when they decided to make modern-day their home.

    In this one I would love to see you continue to let us know who is with pup Kagome or Amber or and even better senerio both of them.
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  • From LadyNaught on September 12, 2008
    This story was so fucking funny that it's a wonder I couldn't even read it, truely great, though the lemon could use some impruvements. Ja ne and onto the next installment just hope I can stop laughing long enough to read it.
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  • From Sieg on September 11, 2008
    Even better then the first one I must say. Your a very talented writer and you should keep writing. So far these two stories are the best I have read and I have read many.

    ~~Sieg
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  • From Amysama on January 05, 2008
    I finally found my way back to this story.
    My reading is kind of sporadic. Oh well.

    I really enjoyed this story, and the first.
    I'm waiting rather impatiently for the next installment. If things go well with Inusouta and Amber they will need a spray bottle full of water. "No, No, bad pup/kit."

    For the next installment I was thinking some thing like "Simply Serendipity" if that helps at all..

    Gambette!
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  • From Shadowfox32459 on December 26, 2007
    well since the last 2 titles have Been fate and destiny how about "it was written in the stars" for the next one
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  • From rakanasama on December 20, 2007
    oooh i love this story.... i got a title for you too incase you like it.... Defying Daddy.. kinda catchy.... considering daddies baby will be arguing a lot to go hunt shards lol
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  • From wharehouse on December 12, 2007
    Great end to the story, it really has been awesome for both your stories and I'm really looking forward to your future stories. In the next one will there still be bits of the Amber/Inusouta story? Whatever the story winds up beings, I have a feeling it'll still be awesome :)

    As for still being undecided on the title, if you want to continue the same style of title while still following the guidelines for the story you wanted, how about, "What Dreams May Come"

    Hope you found my opinion constructive and the best of luck to you on your future stories
    The Keeper
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  • From Coldstone on December 12, 2007
    Well, for the third story, I hope we will see some more of Amber and Inusouta, besides Izayoi. Especially Inusouta mastering his new weapons. Maybe he will form a pack with his Sister and Amber, so they will fight together.

    But it is your story in the end. We can only make suggestions.

    Keep up your work.
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  • From Coldstone on December 12, 2007
    Very Good ending.

    I'm eager to read Izayois story next.

    You are a very good author. Thank you so much for two very brilliant storys.
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  • From AngelEvie on December 12, 2007
    I love your stories. And when I got to the end of It Must Be Destiny and read that you'd be writting a third, I was really excited!!! I instantly tried to think of titles to help you out (I'm weird like that). What came to mind was Karma Can Be a Bitch Sometimes (to go with the whole "Destiny" and "Fate" theme). But anyway, I hope you luck in the next story, and I'll be sure to keep my eyes open for it!
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  • From gaiaoftheforest on December 12, 2007
    Ok, I've been reading this story for 4 hours and just got to the latest chapter. Excellent character development, everyone has flaws, no Mary-Sues, and happily-ever-after didn't come without fights and asylums. Overall, I am deeply impressed and hope that you continue with the other girls finding their mates.

    Gaia
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  • From rakanasama on December 11, 2007
    oooh more!! i love this story!!!! i cant wait to see inu-kitsune babies!!!! they'll be soooo cute!!
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  • From Coldstone on December 11, 2007
    GRRR.

    Remember me to throw a Shinku Ha Do Ken at those parents of Kohaku. Very good turn point.
    Well, if they know what is good for them, they remain still. But I have a feeling that her parents think that you can get anything for money. Well, but they will learn a lesson or two I hope.

    Keep up the very good work.

    Will this story be as long as fate? Or will it be even longer?.
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  • From wharehouse on December 10, 2007
    Really glad you finally updated, it really is an immerisive story and I'm looking forward to its conclusion
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