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  • From CloverBabe on August 22, 2007
    very very interesting story.

    love the whole concept and that you made Kaggie a badass.

    yesss.

    :D
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  • From sharinganblade on August 22, 2007
    love it!!!
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  • From madmiko on August 21, 2007
    That was a fun chapter. I enjoyed their spar, but Kagome DID cheat. LOL!! I'm glad he apologized. I agree, I hate stories where he's a jerk or an asshole or a cheater or a "player." That's just not the Inu we all know and love. Having Jinenji in it like that was really fun, but I'm surprised he doesn't know Kagome's engaged. Or is it a really recent thing? And Inu was shocked that she knew about Shizuru, huh? I don't know, I would have expected her fiance to share his past with her. But I am wondering if perhaps she knew the story from Shizuru's side -- like she knew her from the University or something, or possibly her hometown. I guess I'll have to wait and see for sure, huh? Looking forward to more! I am really wondering how you're going to get the two of them together without destroying poor Shun.
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  • From InuGoddess715 on August 20, 2007
    Great story. I just found it today, and I love it. It's mature and complicated, and not to mention sexy. I definitely look forward to reading more soon. By the way, I'm glad that you made Kagome a brawler. I hate stories where she's too much of a wimp to stand up for herself. Inuyasha is too strong a personality to be with a wimpy woman. After all those slaps in this chapter, I see that that definitely won't be a problem for THIS Kagome, LOL!
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  • From madmiko on August 16, 2007
    Great chapter! I love the history you provided with Inuyasha, Shun, and Shizuru. You really set up a great little story here. And you've definitely made things difficult for Inuyasha and Kagome. What a great scene when Inu was trying to confront Kagome, and she hadn't a clue whether to admit they had met the night before or not. It was completely believable. And his verbal attack on her later made perfect sense given the history you let us in on. But, I'm glad he regretted it right away, and realized he might have been too hasty in condemning her. Or did he just feel bad when he saw her start crying because he couldn't help himself, and will he continue to think she is like Shizuru? He'd better hope she pulls herself together before Shun comes out, or if he sees that she's been crying, there might be hell to pay. Will you be letting us in on what happened between Inu and Sun AFTER that scene with Shizuru? Because I'm sure the fallout from that must have really taken a toll on ALL of the friends. And have I mentioned how much I'm loving the way you're writing Kouga? This is a terrific story!! You've made them all so real, and the situation such a real one, too. Great job!
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  • From madmiko on August 14, 2007
    Well, your summary said she was engaged to his best friend. Poor Yasha. So, was Kagome NOT supposed to be the one to hand over the envelope? Because I was thinking it seemed like SHE was set up, too. Aw, I hope things aren't going to get too angsty in this. I was enjoying the light-hearted atmosphere. I've got to beg you, whatever is going on with Kagome and Shun, please don't set Inuyasha up with someone else in the meantime. Most fics seem to have Inu with all the gals, or at least one,(usually Kikyou), and Kag waiting for him to realize she's the one, so I'd love to see it work the other way for once. Let her be the one with the relationship, and HIM watching from the sidelines, by himself, until they connect. I'd like to know more about this Shun. I was really interested that you picked HIM to be the one Kag was engaged to. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter.
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  • From madmiko on August 14, 2007
    The first two chapters are great! (Haven't read the third yet.) I love the prank the guys pulled. They were so funny together, too, -- so real. They seemed just like a bunch of frat brothers. Loved the way he was affected by his very first sight of her. You wove that into the song really nicely. Looking forward to the other chapter!
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