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Reviews for Devotion

By : BlackberryPatch
  • From Onyxlight on February 17, 2008
    When Inuyasha says to back off he means back off *giggle* this was great... nice and smutty and you write their intamcy so well it almost shameful!! ^_^ You have a real talent for action and drama and I am uber glad you created an email list for this!!

    I must say it seems as if Sess was (at leaset at one point) rather free with himself *heh heh* I couldn't help but picture him wrapped up in a threesome with the pair they encountered in chapter 5. ENCORE and well done!
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  • From Onyxlight on February 13, 2008
    Oh and I must say Ros with Jaken was shocking to say the least (gives the reader weird imagery) but hey the little green guy needs love too so Kudos! It was a cute twist and I hope it pops up again. ^_^
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  • From Onyxlight on February 13, 2008
    "He said... unkind things about... you." His eyes narrowed and his lip curled in disgust as he eyed the blood on his hands. " I tore out his heart, and then I broke his neck."

    Way to go Sess!! (That line was beyond superb!!) I was pleased to see that there was more to the Inglorious, Fraternal, etc Arc. I hope to see this continue for quite a few chapters for it is worthy of reading and constant rereading (as I have done) Kudos and if you have an email list going out when you update please add me to it Onyxlight06@yahoo.com
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  • From ladyjay62 on November 26, 2007
    Well I've read the whole series now and it was most excellent !
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  • From ANON - Demitria on November 22, 2007
    Great chapter! I love the confusion on both sides when they confess feelings for each other; Sesshomaru is so adorably cute sometimes... And I love the possessiveness as always! ^^ I hope that Doror stays dead! Grrr! And more inucest comes our way! Yay!
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  • From ANON - gen50 on November 21, 2007
    you updated! thank you.
    i enjoy this part of your series.
    having their relationship acknowledged is a very good thing.
    the only thing i regret is that it is short, and leaves me curious about this strange country they are traversing --

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  • From calenloke on November 21, 2007
    YES!!! I think this is one of my favorite chapters! The demon just had to go and I like the way Sesshoumaru handled it! I simplu adored it! I love it to pieces.
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  • From LynLin on October 17, 2007
    Whaaaaaaa I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - ladytokyo on October 16, 2007
    Opps! sorry I didn't mean to make you mad ( go run and hides under a big book. can you see me here?) ok sorry I sniff just sniff wanted sniff to sniff read sniff another chapter sniff! wailing louder than shippo ever could.
    hehehe someone walking a very thin line. and on someone else terrtiory. dog fight he's MINE!!!!!!!
    ok update.

    ladytokyo
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  • From drcomalfy on October 14, 2007
    *claps* Yay! I hate yet love when jealousy arises with this pairing. T_T Poor Inuyasha, getting a taste of envy... lol I'm so excited! I look forward to your next update! Great job!


    -DM
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  • From midnightsweet on October 09, 2007
    why are they still with him??? i go with iun he needs to go.
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  • From calenloke on October 09, 2007
    ARGH!! I hate Doror already. he dares look at Sesshoumaru that way! I feel sorry for Inuyasha for feeling inferior in front of that Demon. And Also proud of Inuyasha's maturity when it comes to Sesshoumaru, he loves him, but will not see him as some possession. Doror should just leave them alone! lol I love it. can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on October 08, 2007
    bummer a third wheel will definitely knock down the sex quotient
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  • From ladytokyo on October 04, 2007
    Please update gotta see whos in the cave with them. whats wrong with Inuyasha beside him thinking that sesshomaru thinkd that he's weaker than him. he's only being a good lover. So when will Inuyasha top Sesshomaru again? and don't think I forgot that you mentioning something about sesshomaru going over a cliff. please update soon.

    shivonne aka ladytoyko
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  • From ANON - ladytokyo on September 06, 2007
    Um sorry I push the wrong button. ok where was I? oh yes WHY DAMN YOU WHY!!!! now I wont be able to breath until I know what happens. Whats going to happen to Inuyasha is someone going to try to use him again? What did the other youkai say that's gotta Sesshomaru so mad and please update really freakn soon. I love the lemon it's not bording and the snow sence was cute I wish I could see Sesshomaru play in the snow in RL. ok plz update soon.

    ladytoyko aka shivonne
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