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Reviews for Timeless Love

By : kissthesky237
  • From madmiko on September 26, 2007
    Beautiful, just beautiful. I was looking back through my reviews and I realized I really haven't praised your writing enough. (I spent too much time grumbling out my grievances against Inuyasha's stupidity. LOL!!) Your style is clear and fluid, and your descriptions are very evocative. The emotions are so strong, I almost have to close my eyes beczuse I feel like I'm intruding on them. You have presented Kagome's POV as well as I have ever seen. The situation in this chapter, (5), -- her sorrow at his going to Kikyou, followed by her anger at the other woman for hurting him just make Kagome the most incredible woman ever. She is the most sympathetic heroine in manga, and fanfiction, that I know of. And you do such an incredible job of portraying her. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how this plays out. I just hope that somehow, by some miracle, Inuyasha becomes worthy of her. Lovely job!!
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  • From InuGoddess715 on September 26, 2007
    EXCELLENT story. The lemons are HOT, but the emotional intensity is wonderful. You can actually feel the pain of these characters. Not everyong can do angst well without being melodramtic....but you do a great job with it. I definitely look forward to reading more soon.
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  • From Patty530 on September 26, 2007
    Ah, Sweetie. I really don't know what to say. (a first I assure you) That chapter was incredible. Intense. Exciting. I'm Sooo glad you said there would be a happy ending. Here's hoping your muse and all your plot bunnies stay happy and healthy. :)
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  • From JLucPitard on September 26, 2007
    As a fan, I don't buy the premise that he promised to end his life or go to Hell with Kikyo, and I think that's borne out in the manga as well... but this story is awesome. The lemon in the latest chapter was very realistic and intense. I like that there was angst without angsty dialog. Very nice.
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  • From LadyCash on September 25, 2007
    Nice.
    I have the feeling that bad things are a'comin.
    Was this goodbye sex?
    What has IY gone and done now? Or not gone and done?
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  • From on September 23, 2007
    Ya know, I wasn't going to read this story. I'm such a pro-kagome fan, I didn't want to read about Inuyasha going off with Kikyo. But, I did decide to check it out anyway, and I'm so glad I did. Loved the sex scene. Very sensual, sexy and believable :). I'm intrigued where this is going...I'm hoping for a happy ending...that's just me:). So...I'm really looking forward to reading more. Thanks so much for you hard work, I'm really enjoying it!
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  • From Patty530 on September 21, 2007
    I know I've already reviewed this chapter but after rereading my last review, I relized it didn't even begin to cover what I wanted to say. So here goes another attempt. This chapter was heartbreaking and uplifting all at the same time. Kagome's emotions are right at the surface and her efforts to heal and keep her memories from consuming her are written with just the right amount of angst. As a reader you never feel like she's going to give up her future for her past.
    Thanks again;
    Luv; Patty
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  • From Kijo52 on September 21, 2007
    Excellent! I love how you've stayed the to the characters themselves all the while manipulating them to serve your own stories needs, you naughty author you! It's been so long since I've read any fanfics, but I've just finished watching the series and found myself still wanting. Just can't get enough of those dog ears....~Sighs dreamily~ Anyway yours was the first to catch my attention and I'm glad it did though its extremely well written and the lemon was very sweet. And I COMPLETLEY agree on the point you made about expert virgins. We all know the first time is awkward, but I think that makes it special. Anyway I've got your story bookmarked, and being a fellow author ~Coughs at the layers of dust on her word program....~ I know how much it can mean to get reviews, so I'll be sure to post my opinions at least every couple of chapters or so. Happy writting!

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  • From JLucPitard on September 18, 2007
    I'm interested to see where this story is going now that she's away from home.
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  • From LadyCash on September 18, 2007
    Nice chapter. Good to see K moving on. Will be interesting to see how you turn this.
    A lemon? With whom? A flashback or present day? Where is this going? Must know,
    write, write!
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  • From madmiko on September 18, 2007
    Just had to throw in a quick P.S. -- since Kagome and Inuyasha were lovers, did he ever think about the possibility that he might be leaving her to raise a child of his alone? His sense of duty is so messed up. He didn't even think about trying to explain his situation to Kikyou? Heck, if she was all that, she might have understood and let him go. LOL!!
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  • From madmiko on September 18, 2007
    Chapter was beautifully-written. It's difficult to read, though. So sad. The emotions are very real, as is the whole sad situation, -- it's the one we all feared and hated the thought of in the manga. LOL!! Honestly, I hope Inuyasha is enjoying himself in HELL, since kagome seems to be there, too. His going with Kikyou to soothe his feelings of honor and loyalty were really selfish, since he had to know what he would be putting the one he supposedly really LOVED through. Hell isn't a fun place, and I don't think they let people be "together" there. LOL!! So, it really was just a momentary gesture, which caused Kagome a lifetime of pain. I'm still very curious to see how you bring him back into her life, but really, I'm not in favor of her taking him back. I don't know if a heart so bruised can truly forgive and forget. It is much more likely to hold a grudge. In the end, in spite of everything, he DID choose Kikyou over her, -- maybe not for love, but what does that matter? He's just as gone. I love your writing, though!
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  • From madmiko on September 18, 2007
    Well, chapter three was unexpected. You said it yourself in there, Inu having sex with her, when he KNEW he was still going to go to hell with Kikyou makes him just about the biggest bastard on the planet. It was a well-written lemon. Got to agree with you about the virgin sex. LOL! It really seems like his obligation to Kagome should have weighed heavier with him, after they had been through and all they had experienced together. Got to say, I can't root for him to get her after all he's put her through. But, I see you've got another chapter up, so I'm going to dive right in asnd see what happens next.
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  • From Patty530 on September 18, 2007
    Thank You So Much For The Dedication! That was an "oh wow" chapter. I really am addicted to this story. You're building up the tension just right. I'll try and be patient, waiting for the next update. I won't promise, but I'll try! :)

    Thanks;
    Patty
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  • From Patty530 on September 17, 2007
    Ok, I know life can get in the way, but I'm going to beg anyway! Please, Please update...

    Patty
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