Click Here!

Reviews for A Mere Digression

By : elle6778
  • From marcia on February 04, 2008
    There is nothing wrong with throwing a bit of a plot into smut. I'll take whatever you give us.
    Report Review

  • From on February 04, 2008
    You know I remember reading this when you first posted it way back when and was very disappointed when there was no new update on it. I am thrilled you have finally posted another chapter and can't wait for the next one. Very good story, I just love how Sesshou helps her with her problem. It was very... erotic? I think that's the word I wanted to use. Either way I liked it and liked it enough to post a review. (Which is something I rarely if ever do.) So keep up the good work and can't wait to see where this goes. Much love. Keva
    Report Review

  • From CarnalSin on February 04, 2008
    Your lemony skills are wonderful!
    Report Review

  • From oneswish on February 03, 2008
    wow!! this is actually really almost planned out smut!! i think.

    this is so cool. i like the plot ness and the lemonsssss... they are soo cool and different.. they are really soo sesh like. u grasped many character of intreset.. but one.. inuyasha. and that cliffy was horrible-y placed.. in my opinion.. but it will leave me hanging around. hopefully not too total high school drama.. ya know.. "she's my bitch" fight. b/c there is already soo many of those..

    is inu gonna kick her outta the pack?? does shippou play a bigger role in future chaps??

    im soo curious. i will wait..

    but not forever. noo worries. i'll wait.. muses are funny creatures.
    Report Review

  • From sweetkijo on February 03, 2008
    Hmm, let me say this, you have NOT let us down yet. So my opinion is this.....write what ever comes to you. If it is lemonless, then so be it. It will just make the next chapter so much more sweet. The lemonade is fantastic and almost addictive. I think the little plot you have added has just made this whole experience oh so much more enjoyable. Thank you for writing it. It is just yummy!
    Report Review

  • From CerealKiller on February 03, 2008
    Just give us another chapter!!! hahaha
    Report Review

  • From Rinseternalsoul on February 03, 2008
    I know that I just left you a review, but after reading one of your reviewers comments on the rape aspect of your story, I just had a little something that I would like to say. Personally, I felt like you warned the readers adequetly in the A/N before the beginning of the first chapter. Only an idiot could not discern that "Some would even say that it is somewhat non-consensual" was a warning of rape. Non-consensual is basically rape, so duh?? What was so hard to figure out there? I saw it right off. Personally, I did not find the piece offensive at all, and as for as all that NC mumbo-jumbo, well, Sess was acting of his own accord. Kagome was overcome by a potent lustful poison. She needed him, he fullfilled the need. They both got off, end of fucking story. What's to question? Was that rape? Hell, if that is the case then about 50 chic's from the bar the other night were raped when they got drunk as hell and took home a guy that they never before would have considered. Was the girl raped because she woke up with a loser? No. But, she was horney and he was happy to fulfill her basic need at the time. Did he stop to think, 'Gee, she's really drunk, should I ignore the fact that she is humping my leg?' HAHAHAHA! Like that would ever happen. Nope, home-boy said, "Let's go babe!" Personally, I think that tealeavesgreen was looking for a reason to bitch about something and found one in your fic. In this case, I go back to my favorite saying, "You can please some of the people some of the time, but not all of the people all of the time" Or, in this case more appropriately, "Opinions are like assholes, everbody has one." This story is far from a rape fic. I've written rape fics, both raunchy PWP and in-depth emotional turmoil and this fic just doesn't count in my opinion. Now, I've ranted my own piece of mind and I'm sure that you are tired of listening to me. lol!

    From Rinseternalsoul to you... Thanks for the read!
    Report Review

  • From Rinseternalsoul on February 03, 2008
    Well, I've always enjoyed your stories, but 'A Mere Digression' has been a real treat! I've enjoyed the first four lemony chapters between Sesshomaru and Kagome with the hentai enthusiasm of Miroku. I am such a perv. lol! You're lemon writing style is very good and I believe the chapters could only be improved with the help of a good beta. Personally, I can overlook the minor errors for the well-written and exciting content. Maybe the next chapter, instead of starting out with Kagome's growing lust, you might begin with Sesshomaru finding himself inordinately distracted by his own growing desires. Instead of Sess stumbling across Kagome in a moment of need, he intentionally seeks her out to sate HIM. Possibly at the risk of discovery by her friends. It would also be pretty hot for him to finally let Kagome have her way with him. You know, tasting him as he has tasted her. Well, that is my naughty thoughts on the subject. Whatever you decide to write, I am sure that it will be enjoyable for the readers. ~Rin
    Report Review

  • From L0VER on February 03, 2008
    actually.. i wouldn't mind if there wasn't any lemon. im anticipating what will happen between inu and kagome . dont get me wrong, the lemons are OHWOWINTENSE. but you know, like i said, i wonder whats going to happen to inu. if you can somehow fit a lemon in that, it would be great but somehow i cant see if inu found out about them... then the thing you know, theres a lemon between her and sess. you know what i mean? nevertheless. UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON! : )
    Report Review

  • From marcia on January 31, 2008
    I didn't expect any more for this story what a nice surprise.
    Report Review

  • From Trinh on November 27, 2007
    omg!! please update soon! and please e-mail me once you do! i'd love to read more! my e-mail is thuytrinhhoang@aol.com
    Report Review

  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 06, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
    Report Review

  • From Diamond on November 04, 2007
    Very very hot!
    Report Review

  • From akume on November 03, 2007
    Yummy! That was oh so good. Until next time. Ja.
    Report Review

  • From Areitus on October 09, 2007
    Very nice and entertaining. It's so hard for me to find fanfics that impress me. Usually people just ruin them with the cliches(ie: omg Kagome's in heat! rape her! omg Sesshoumaru's in heat? wtf? mating marks! lets be vampires! surprise! Kagome's secretly a dog demon and she's super powerful and totally a bad ass! no wait she's a pop star! OMFG INUYASHA YOU'RE A GIRL?!) I prefer stories that are set canon and not in say... modern America(Gag!)... and of course it's important to keep the characters in character, like, I hate it when they have Sesshoumaru suddenly showing up like- Kagome, I love you with mouth. omg I r stalking you cuz u r hawts. Then ofcourse there's the whole, "Tiffany Rainbowhair fell through the well where she instantly fell in love with Inuyasha and they were in love and had sprogs everywhere and I finally finished 3rd grade enrish..." I just skip them and pretend the person who wrote them is a pimple-faced squeely 12 year old... in any case I think what I'm trying to say is that you avoided all of these terrible fandom cleches and for that alone you are ok in my book. On top of that you did a convincing and very interesting story which strangely enough is one of the most original things I've come across even tho it's a cannon setting... seems cannon stories are the only original ones left... weird. Anyways thanks for a sexy and entertaining read. Looking forward to more. In the mean time I'll work on my own fic. Lateh~
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!