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Reviews for A Mere Digression

By : elle6778
  • From yeiko87 on October 02, 2007
    this is quite good. I liked how you didnt use a lot of overly-creative language in your descriptions haha some people do that and take it a little too far...so, um, yay :P
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  • From AmberEyez on September 04, 2007
    VERY nice. I like where this is going - and S/K isn't my favorite pairing, but this story is well worth it!
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  • From SesshysRose on September 03, 2007
    WOW! I'm really interested in fining ut where you plan to take this story from this point. It's very well writtenand I can't wait to read more!
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  • From candycrys on September 02, 2007
    wow can't wait to read more
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  • From AnimeKay on September 02, 2007
    Wow I love it and I can't wait for more please update soon
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  • From akume on September 02, 2007
    Yummy! I can't wait for the next digression. There will be more right?
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  • From akashicrecord on September 02, 2007
    i think that this is awesome so far! i will just have to wait patiently for the next update... or at least try to(wait patiently)! you have excellent descriptive skills in my opinion, which make for a fun read, because i can picture things well in my mind's eye. keep up the good work and update soon pretty please!!!! : )
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  • From Cochrann on September 01, 2007
    I like this story and I can't waite to see where it's headed.
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  • From Areitus on August 25, 2007
    Very hot. You kept Sess very in character imo, and that's always a bonus. Nice writing skills. ohhh we so need a chapter 2!!!!
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  • From ladyai21 on August 23, 2007
    Oh my gosh I luved this story. I wish u could continue it but alas it was a one shot. Well good job on it.
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  • From akume on August 23, 2007
    Awesome lemon. Wish there was more though. Thanks anyway.
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  • From tealeavesgreen on August 20, 2007
    Well, it's rape. If that was what you were going for. Denying control over one's own body, FORCING sexual intercourse between two people who at this point haven't even had a real conversation. I wish you'd labeled it as mind-control or rape (same thing, really), and I would've avoided it. I like SessKag when there's some actual development. When I'm not mostly certain that Sesshoumaru would kill her in the morning, for daring to touch him, for causing him to lose control. I'm also fairly certain that Kagome would experience some serious emotional fallout, probably similar to actual rape victims. Sesshoumaru was raped, Kagome was raped. You took away their will and self control. Dictionary.com definitions of rape include "any act of sexual intercourse that is forced upon a person" and "to force to have sexual intercourse."

    Mind control isn't a good plot device, even for a PWP fic. In fact, your fic was part of the inspiration for my most recent fanficrant, over at http://community.livejournal.com/fanficrants/5288169.html. Your grammar was good. I'd recommend a beta, but that's because every author can use a beta, and you had a few awkward commas. There's potential, I won't deny that. But I didn't want to read a rapefic. When you said "multi-part" and "neither could resist," I assumed that, through increased exposure to one another, an attraction developed that they eventually indulged in despite his racism and her loyalty to the Inu-tachi and her own time. I blame myself for that, but.
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  • From akashicrecord on August 19, 2007
    yuuuummmy! your lemon-writing skills seem to be just fine to me! can't wait for an update!
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on August 19, 2007
    Wow. I hope the next installment of this comes out soon. Take care.
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  • From undercoverfreak on August 19, 2007
    wow, I liked it, really good, I love this pairing!
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