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Reviews for What comes after 'happily ever after or the end?'

By : Furuichiko
  • From LadyNaught on August 30, 2008
    The story was good over all, I can't really say great cause I've read better but it was good. However the ending was... I'm truely sorry to say this.... complete crap. Though your not a half bad writer, you just need some more practice. And for the love of god read your own work, there where several places where the scene repeated itself at least once just slightly different and the grammar it wasn't bad horrible but it could use some work. Best of luck.
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on December 01, 2007
    and they lived happily ever after... I loved this-- very good-- very dramatic!
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  • From Youkai06 on November 15, 2007
    Bring on the Epilong. Love this story. You still need to continue this story.
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on November 15, 2007
    Wow! That was really good. My only complaint is -- it could have been a few more chappies but I tottally loved it! Perfect 10... reminds me.. I gots to finish mine..
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  • From AletaRois on October 18, 2007
    Though you could use a good beta and the names, along with the timeline, are a bit confused in places, it's a very good story and you should continue writing it.
    I look forward to future chapters.
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  • From kookookitty on October 08, 2007
    watch malapropisms and typos... a quick read over and spell check will catch some of them.

    i am so glad that yash and kagome will get together in this. i can't see him getting too irrational about the wish, after all she was nearly raped and felt helpless and weak.

    good chapter.

    thank you,
    ginny


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  • From Angelchan on October 06, 2007
    Hurry up on the next chapters.
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  • From kookookitty on October 03, 2007
    i don't usually go for the 'kagome turns youkai' but this is quite interesting. i'm confused as to why sesshoumaru doesn't want yasha to see kagome, i wouldn't think it would matter to him especially considering who he's with.

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From Youkai06 on September 27, 2007
    Hay what happened to the second part??? I was getting into the story!
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  • From psych0ticw0nd3r on September 23, 2007
    i love this story i have to know what happens next please update soon

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  • From madmiko on August 24, 2007
    That's cute. Who knew Inu had such naughty thoughts? LOL! And I can't believe he actually asked Kagome where a bathroom is so he can go relieve himself. LOL! Kag's buying condoms was funny, too, -- what size? At first, it semed like maybe Inu's feelings had waned, and it makes sense that kagome would have been worried about him NOT arguing with her anymore as an indication that he didn't care as much. But after he got to her time, ... he's expressing his feelings in an unusually upfront manner for him. Kagome is wondering what will happen when it's all over, and I guess he is scared about that, too. I'm looking forward to their time together -- I wonder where they will go to spend time ALONE?
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