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Reviews for A Broken Soul

By : SesshyBitch
  • From darkbabe466 on October 13, 2007
    that was awsome update
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  • From LADYWELLES on October 08, 2007
    i really like where u are going with this i hope to read more soon TTFN
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 11, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 09, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 30, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Bloodsrose on August 28, 2007
    I really like this story, you've got a really good idea here and I can't wait to see where you take this. I love stories that have Kagome having a very motherly relationship with Shippo and to just see where Kagome and Sessh go from here ^_^

    However, I really think you'd benefit from a beta reader. I was a little confused at times with some of your wording. Like here:

    Kagome turned her hard blue, gray and green eyes on Sango...

    It took me a moment [not long at all to be honest about it] to realize what you were trying to describe but the wording is very awkward. I think if you even just had a friend or someone take a look at your chapters before posting them it would make the wording flow a bit better.

    Otherwise keep up the good work!
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