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By : Meggiez
  • From midnightsweet on September 14, 2007
    this is moving along nicely.
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  • From drcomalfy on September 13, 2007
    You have... NO IDEA... how much I liked that chapter. Inner thoughts, NO TORTURE!, a slight arousal of the inu brothers, NO TORTURE!, calm... NO TORTURE! XD I realllllyy like this chapter since it delved more into feelings and thoughts (and the no torture aspect XD) and had a calm feelng about it (or maybe that's just me... I feel so sick and tired right now ugh). Though in places it felt awkward and confusing... (again, it was probably me, my mind is almost mush right now X_X) but other than that, yosh!


    -DM
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on September 13, 2007
    Hey!! No fair *sobs*....evil cliffy.... but very good story I look forward to the rest of it!
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  • From mamarita on September 12, 2007
    intense and fast paced... very hot and Sesshomaru is definitely HOTTTTTTTT
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  • From drcomalfy on September 12, 2007
    Ow, ow, ow, owwwww!!! I seriously FEEL for Inuyasha (like, literally you make me feel what he's going through X_X). But I liked it regardless (sorry Inuyasha! ^_^;;)! I hope Inuyasha heals though. I seriously do feel for the guy. *sniff* It's like... forceful, consensual sex... sorta. Very forceful consensual on some level sex XDXDXD Good job! You totally get the feelings of both inus AND what's physically happening to the hanyou across X_X (a little too well... but in a good way for writing lmfao!)

    Looking forward to more!


    -DM
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  • From calenloke on September 11, 2007
    Sesshoumaru sure has problems. lol. I can see Inuyasha with Sango, she is more sensible and can actually take care of herself. She is calm and collected and truly does accept Inuyasha for who he is. Love it
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on September 11, 2007
    I bless you 1 million times for using Sango and not Kagome-- I cant deal with her. This was wonderful. Sesshomaru is such a complex guy to write and you nailed him-- its hard to tell if he loves or hates Inuyasha. I await more mwhehe.
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  • From atomicbluekitty on September 11, 2007
    HOLY................... MAN THIS IS GOOD!! Usually I'm not a great fan of rape, but you made it hot so It's all good!
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  • From midnightsweet on September 11, 2007
    the morning after should be fun. nice story.
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  • From calenloke on September 11, 2007
    Brilliant! I totally agree, but still a part of me feels for Inuyasha, because Sesshoumaru may want to dominate his little brother, he may think that Inuyasha belongs to him, but where was he all those years before. Inuyasha acts like an ass most of the time because of how he grew up, well... at least that how I see it, A defense mechanism. He knows nothing else. Sesshoumaru has no right to demean him more when we all know that Inuyasha already feels less than mosy vile of things. Okay...I think I have over dramatized the whole thing. lol sorry. But I usually get riled up when I read a great story and makes me so conflicted. I love this story...at the same time I want to stop because I love Inuyasha too much. lol

    Love it. can't wait for morw
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  • From drcomalfy on September 11, 2007
    That made me cry. And squirm! POOR INUYASHA!!! *sobs*

    I thought this line was funny as hell for some reason: I would treat him as an equal in bed, at least. Maybe he could be a house hanyou. LMFAO!!! XDXDXDXD

    Ahh. And I'm so totally upset by this chapter. I need to go sleep to cleanse myself from Inuyasha's pained arousal... yeah. XD


    -DM
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on September 11, 2007
    Wow so much at once hehe! I love it-- every single bloody juicy bit of it please keep it up!! I wanan se mooore more violence more pain hehe!
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  • From drcomalfy on September 11, 2007
    WAHH! I'm totally loving this. And let me tell you- I do NOT go for this kind of stuff. T_T I feel so dirty and perverted and-! And-! I love it regardless! ToT lmao.

    Ahh, as for the manga... they better update soon, I wanna know how Sesshomaru uses Bakusaiga! *weeps*

    Anyway! lol I look forward to how the next chapter will go- Will there be punishment for Inuyasha or will Sesshomaru somehow make Inuyasha watch him torture Kagome or what's going to happen?! Ahh the insanity this is driving me to trying to figure out! X_X lol


    -DM
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  • From calenloke on September 10, 2007
    This is an interesting story. Love the intense emotion, but DAMN! Sesshoumaru is too cruel. I feel for Inuyasha about his hair. :( Poor guy, he has nothing left, now he's just a common dog without even is only pride of vanity.
    Don't get me wrong, I love the story, I just feel bad for Inuyasha. And to realize that Seshoumaru just likes to hurt him this way.

    I'm guessing that this is only going to get worse. (Sigh)

    I'm a sap when it comes to angst stories, hoping that there will be happy ending....will there be? lol

    Sorry, you don't have to answer that. I just have to torture myself by reading more.
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  • From drcomalfy on September 10, 2007
    Ahh. More? I'm liking this- though I see you've kept up with the recent manga chapters, however there was a small mistake in this paragraph:

    “Tetsusaiga?” Sesshomaru sounded intrigued, stepping closer to his younger brother and staring down into the narrowed gold eyes. “Why would I need that? I have Bakusaiga and Tokijin.”

    Sesshomaru has Bakusaiga and Tenseiga, not Tokijin (that was destroyed sadly T_T). Iono if that matters or not but I thought I should point it out lol.

    Great job so far, I'm totally feeling the emotions running torrent throughout this fic! I'm looking forward to the next update! ^^


    -DM
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