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Reviews for Trouble in Paradise

By : GrayWolf
  • From DragonellDeatheye on September 06, 2008
    ^_^ i really enjoyed reding this, good work.
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  • From solitare1 on October 15, 2007
    I like the idea. Keep it up if you can.
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  • From UrsurlaFretz on October 13, 2007
    I just found this. Need to keep better track of stories. Mai did learn a hard lesson now lets just hope it sticks. As for the other three they are geting off to easy. I liked this and thank-you for the story.

    ursurlafretz aka LadyVirgo1956
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  • From midnightsweet on September 08, 2007
    that was very good. even the quickie was good. i enjoyed it very much.
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  • From DINKA on September 07, 2007
    not bad... been a parent is never easy!!!

    although...the part of rescuing the pup....sesshomaru could use his ability to teletransport himself and rescue the pup....just as he did when he rescued Rin....
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