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By : Rashke
  • From LadyGralfon on February 24, 2017

    sorry you did not continue this story  it's really good


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  • From blue_heron on February 20, 2017

    I just recently returned to my Inuyasha love after many years adrift. I came upon this story and really, truly enjoyed it. You did a wonderful job of indulging in the rich, shy, and deep character development / play between the two. I felt like I was watching an intense, provocative tennis match between past and present. The different POVs filled in additional depth. I would have loved the decadence of many more chapters, watching the couple as they forge their path. As it is, it sharply stands alone. Thanks for the tremendous read! 


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  • From birdicatt on January 28, 2012
    LOved your stories. Have just started reading a couple of months ago and am glad to come across your stories. Loved your characterization of Sesshomaru. You have got him so right. HOpe you continue the next chapter soon.

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  • From Stephennie on October 26, 2011
    This is one of my FAVORITE stories. I love the scene where he is showing his dad his tatoos. That thought of what he looks like right there is a favorite of mine. So hot! The amount of detail you put in when describing the steamy scenes makes them exceptionally vivid. More like this please!
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  • From whiteluna on July 20, 2011
    This story is incredibly delicious. I love your portrayal of Sess and Kagome, their relationship to one another. It's incredibly unique and intense and outright amazing. I'm happy you didn't reduce Sessh's beast to a mindless idiotic thing. I love the moral ambiguity in which you describe him, it's luscious. I think you just described every woman's bad boy fantasy. That's so bad |D
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  • From JamieGib on June 29, 2011
    I have to say, this is the best story I've ever read on this site. You choose your words and craft your sentences very carefully, I can tell. Your writing is a thousand times more sexy and sensual than a hundred repetitions of 'cock' and 'pussy' could be. This portrayal of Kagome and Sesshomaru manages to keep her own personality (albeit a little less stubborn than usual) and reintroduces the concept of the 'killing perfection' as the demon that he really is. I think I could read your story over and over again because the depth of detail and the skill with which it was written make it a definite classic...not just for Kag/Sess fans, but for fans of finely crafted fiction everywhere. And I ain't just saying that, either!
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  • From Trelweny on November 19, 2010
    Love this! Absolutely love it! The visuals are just... wow. O_O Normally I'm not a fan of cutting Sesshomaru's long locks and yet you've painted a rather succulent short hairstyle for my favorite daiyoukai along with a sweet process of getting the hairstyle that not only do I not mind the change, I rather like it. ^_^

    The non-linear flow of this story is interesting, if a little confusing for some readers to comprehend at first. I personally love how with a bit of pause for thought the relationship's timeline becomes increasingly clear and precise. It's absolutely beautiful watching how and when Kagome and Sesshomaru's friends and family catch on to the nature their true relationship. Particularly after their very sweet beginning.

    I can hardly wait to read more, to see how their other friends react as they figure it out.

    Oh... and I totally love Kagura with BOTH Ginta and Hakkaku. ^_^ Me-OW. *laughs*

    Thanks so much for writing!
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  • From Silverkitsune26 on February 17, 2010
    Yey.......finaly an update, (does a happy dance). A wonderful chapter, fianly I get to know what happend to make them mates. All that is missing now is an update to Idiot's guide and all would be perfect.

    Please update soon. ^_^
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  • From SerasBernadotte on March 11, 2009
    Still waiting for updates~ Yours stories are some of the best Sess/Kags out there, and this is leaves your so... on edge! Please, I want to hear the next part! ;3;
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  • From SerasBernadotte on September 19, 2008
    I would very much like to know if/when this story will be updated again, or if you have discontinued (that would be very sad!).
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  • From SharaeNightWalker on July 15, 2008
    please write more on this. i wanna know what happens?!?!?
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  • From Demonlordlover on April 30, 2008
    This was a much needed chapter. I'm going to guess that this means we'll get a peek at what happened that night in detail - which has me excited. 8) I like this Sesshoumaru. He is protective, and yet also still the bloodthirtsy youkai that he can be. The closet scene where she was hiding was suspenceful. I could feel her fear.
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  • From on April 29, 2008
    This is a really good story! I'm hooked. Please update again soon!
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  • From emmaren on April 29, 2008
    You absolute tease.

    Run, Chaste Virgin, run!

    Okay, now that the intial reaction is over, I am interested to see how far Kagome allows her mind to be indoctrinated into his instinctual sexuality. While I am truly going to enjoy the lemon that the next chapter contains (unless you are more of a tease than I thought), what I hope you delve into is how her pysche begins to accept what it means to be his.

    We know that she has because she allowed him to take her in a club, I just wonder how she goes from a 15 year old virgin to an exhibitionist. I don't know if exhibitionist is correct, but I can think how to put it properly.

    I hope all is well with you and I will be looking forward to your next update.

    Emily
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  • From lonelyreverance on April 10, 2008
    I love your stories and can't wait for more... I am more of a muse then a writer, and i have had this plot bunny in my head since i read shadowsweaver's sin's of the father and tears of the fallen, so i present this challenge to you to do with as you like whether you can work it, or know someone else that is willing! Okay so it starts where kagome gets sent back further in time back to before sesshomaru's birth, she is 17 and has not yet resolved the shikon problem, she falls in love with inutaisho, the great dog general himself, kagome having the raw power but not the control to match him gains respect as his mate, however she can not have children nor will she age until she returns to her proper age. inutaisho with kagome's knowledge and consent get's another mate - sesshomaru's mother, of course his mother is a nasty peice of work chosen by her bloodline, she resents kagome's position in the household and lords it over kagome that she can give birth to an heir. when sesshomaru is born she poisons his mind against kagome, but despite this kagome becomes close to sesshomaru, but later he blames his mothers death on kagome and then begins to dislike his father because despite what he feels for kagome at the time he still likes her deep down... and when inutaisho throws everything away for izayoi he see's it as an affront to himself... which explains his strong dislike of inuysha. eventually sesshomaru recognizes his duty to continue the western lands and marry's the lady of the western lands (kagome) as is proper in the pack structure, however first he must convince her to do it because up till now she has seen him as a son. by the time of the jewel shard fiasco kagome was sent away for safety until younger kagome is gone. when time meets up again... it can be in the future or a day after kagome left for the farther past.... and from there it can go anywhere, but the meat of the story is focused on sesshomaru's ever changing and evolving relationship with kagome. who he does not recognize at first as the girl that travels with his brother...
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