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By : deviousauthoress1
  • From ANON - Shellnet on January 11, 2017

    To bad this was abandoned but it was funny and creepy as hell at the end and you probly were about to anounce that kegs is pregnent but this was abandoned but if you didnt lose the acount update alredy 


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  • From weyrdkat on January 21, 2008
    Devious. . . You must write more. . .it has been too long! While I waver between fanning myself and laughing my lil tushie off, I still notice that the grammar and spelling are good. . .and there is no horrible leet speak, oh Wonder of Wonders. . .and every girl needs a gay friend, even if he is your brother-in-law, and one of the most powerful demons in the Western lands. ..

    MORE MORE MORE! *skips away singing some anoyingly appropriate, and catchy 80's pop tune*
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  • From on January 20, 2008
    *snort* I always knew Sess was GAY! *falls over and rolls on the ground laughing* Mr. FLUFFY *laughs some more* FLUFFY SESSY! *laughs so hard eyes tear up* BWAHAHAHAHA FLUFFY! *calms down a bit* Okay, I'm alright. *starts laughing again* BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA, FLUFFY! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
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  • From ANON - Mclovin on January 01, 2008
    all i have to say is this... (its actually mor ethen just one thing.. quite a bit actually haha so yeah...) first off id like to say you are doing an amazing job with this fanfic! and i would love nothing more then for you to continue on with this. second would be that the way youve done everything, from your research to your execution and using the research is absoluetely awesome. i couldnt ask for a better fanfic. it incorperates everything i love about fanfics into it (that being that it stick with the show some what.. tweaks it.. and kinda makes an alternate ending... i LOVE it). third would be.. PLEASE KEEP WRITING THIS!!! i cant ask this enough... please oh please continue. and since i knowwww youll continue just for me haha... dont skip on the hawt hawt raunchy dirty nasty sex scenes. you always gotta love those. so once again... PLEASE CONTINUE!! and i love evrything your doing so far. thanksies!!! and really.. your doing great! dont stop now.
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  • From MrMcBob on December 05, 2007
    Bah. It's been going downhill.
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  • From MrMcBob on December 04, 2007
    The chapters are a bit short but this chapter (ch5) was funny. Yay.
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  • From MrMcBob on December 04, 2007
    Wow! So far (ch2) this story rocks! It's exactly what I've been looking for. If not for the occasional Japanese, I'd think I wrote it without knowing.
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  • From decaying5rose on October 26, 2007
    omg this is such a good story. i normaly dont have an account on aff but this story was so good that i just had to get one to reveiw you.
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  • From flamingangel on October 25, 2007
    Haha!

    You know, when I first saw this story around, I wasn't overly interested in reading it, but now that I have, I'm glad I did!
    It was so hard to not crack up laughing at times (cause really, I don't need the odd looks from my family!)

    Great story! Are you adding more chapters? I should hope so.


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  • From TheMikoShivae on October 24, 2007
    oh. my. kami. that was hilarious. i love sesshy too... but he does make a great gay guy. and dammit.. when is inu-kun going to tell kagome she is pregnant? she is gonna know when she gets sick. he better do it now before she gets REALLY moody. and he thought kuri was bad.... xD please give me more :D
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  • From ANON - InuYoukai on October 23, 2007
    Loved the last part of the chapter. That was very funny!!
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  • From ANON - The Mauve Hand on October 22, 2007
    I really like your story. A gay Sessie is very funny, but I must admit that there is a huge part of me that winces when reading it.....but in a good way!
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  • From weyrdkat on October 21, 2007
    Awesome new chapter! Sessh just gets funnier and funnier. . .and I love Kuri. ..she's awesome!
    Can't wait to read more!!
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  • From bladeknight88 on October 19, 2007
    Monkey poo...WTF... I just shat my self from the insanity. Good story.
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  • From ANON - Heather on October 11, 2007
    Oh my goodness, I really love your idea to make Shippo an adult in disguise. That is just too funny. Your writing is really good too, and although there are a couple of spelling errors, your piece is coherent and not over run with spelling and grammar mistakes, which is awesome! I can't wait to read more of the story. Keep up the good work!
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