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Reviews for Her Destiny

By : cindygirl
  • From NovalisBelle on January 23, 2008
    Brilliant! this story is wonderful, yeah there are some pov errors and you tend to repeat phrases but it wouldn't be fun if every writer wrote exactly the same, your grammar is fine for the most part and anyone who has personal peeves just has personal peeves and that's their business. This story is wonderful and you most definitely have my vote for best action because it is the most action packed story in that category. Hope for an update soon !!!
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  • From marcia on January 23, 2008
    You have a habit of saying 'he heard the words she had spoken' or a variation of that. That is sooo annoying. We automatically assume he heard her unless you say differently. Do you assume that we're too dense to pick up on this? God, you have no idea how many times I want to grab you by the back of your head and smack your forehead into the table. Or maybe rub your nose in the paper and scold you like a puppy. Not conductive to making you quit but I'm sure it'd be therapeutic to me. You're not the only one who uses a variation of that phrase and I find it annoying every time. It's like hello cpt obvious.

    Why do you insist on taking the same scene and rewriting it two or three times just from different pov? Why not combine all the pov's you want to use in the same scene? Just when I think I'm done reading a scene you start the same one over FROM THE BEGINNING only from someone else's pov. Annoying.

    The story itself is good but it could be much better in my (unwanted I'm sure) opinion if you fix the two points mentioned above. Then again those are just pet peeves of mine. I've also noticed you changing tenses during the narrative. Be Careful of that a lot of people forget to watch it. I'll still read it anyway since like I said it IS a good story I just think it could be better.

    BTW it shows a great level of immaturity to attempt to blackmail your readers. What would you do if you simply didn't have the audience your ego desires to supply you with the amount of reviews you want? Not update for months? Years? Until it's met.
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  • From RinxAkarui on January 22, 2008
    You have my vote! I love this story ^^ The alternate universe in where Kagome and Sesshomaru meet is really great! Keep up the good work ^^

    Ganbatte!
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  • From niceone on January 22, 2008
    i love chapter 13 and the new character akurei the dark miko. can't wait to see who the other lords of the lands are. LOVE the story plz update soon!
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  • From savewolf on January 22, 2008
    love the new chaptert when you write more send em an email please and thanks it the same email you send the message of this chapter too
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  • From fallingmagic on January 22, 2008
    I have to say that I am anxiously awaiting the next installment of the story. I love how much of a spitfire Kagome is in the story. She is definitly not going to make it easy for Sesshoumaru is she? I love it. *insert evil cackle here*
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  • From cocoke5 on January 22, 2008
    wow that is great that your story is up to a awaird sorry my spell is bad but i hope that you win . for your story is real good and i went and vote for you. and the chapter was great and i love the way that kagome told them about her being from the future and how her dad hurt her. i can not wait for the next and see what happen next to them and see if the guy get her. so good luck and keep writting. be here to read and you are one of my favor authors. up date soon.
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  • From missy71 on January 21, 2008
    Well I have to say it was another great chapter. I can't wait to see what this dark miko has in store for Kagome. Thank you for the great story, keep up the good work.
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  • From TheWeimarClassicist on January 21, 2008
    YOU ARE SO VERY WELCOME!! I love all of your stories and I think you have tremendous talent !!! It is we who should be thanking your for writing such amazing works!!! Best of luck during voting!!!
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  • From bloodredbluemoon on January 17, 2008
    This story has me jupping. I can not wait to read more. The outcome of it I anticipate will be great.
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  • From RinxAkarui on January 17, 2008
    omggg Ch.12 was the greatest ^^

    Keep it up!

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  • From Sexgoddess2110 on January 17, 2008
    Can't wait for more! I loved it another Kagome super move just freakkin awesome! hehehe well update when you can

    Loves Arry
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  • From lovelessjayson on January 16, 2008
    Again another great chapter. Thank-you for updating I hope to read more from you.
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  • From niceone on January 16, 2008
    yes!! chapter 12 i love this story keep it up!!!
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  • From IntegraHellsing on January 13, 2008
    Love the chapter. Poor Shesshomaru, his quick temper keeps getting him in trouble. Please update soon!
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