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By : Meggiez

From nchsmi on October 14, 2007
Preach, child! I know exactlly what your talking about!!! Honey, I got a house full of them! I may have given birth to 6 kids, but it feel like 7 with my husband!!!! 3 little boys and a grown up little boy, oh boy! Great job on this chapter, the smut was excellent! B reading U!
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From nchsmi on October 14, 2007
I think I get it! Now, tell me if I'm wrong, but Sess is having 'Mother' issues isn't he? His mother wasn't mom of the year material, so he figures that every woman is the same. But, if InuYasha can get over his dissappointment with women & try. So why can't Sess find a way to work through it? I think Sesshomaru is jugding by the wrong book. I mean, InuYasha had a mother. And, from what I can tell, she was great!
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From Daktalakpak on October 14, 2007
Damn good chapter again. That convo between Inuyasha and Muhyou was interesting indeed. I'm waiting to see what he tols her to say to Sesshoumaru. Hmm, with that said, Kepp up the good work and update soon!
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From drcomalfy on October 14, 2007
Okay, so AGAIN I'm reviewing because... you know what your story did to me?! X_X lol I actually dreamed about it. Really freaking weird. I've never had that happen before. Ever. (Not that I can remember anyway lol). And because of this dream (I don't remember it in detail just that when I woke up I know it had to do with a story I read and then realized it was yours, and it brought up a bunch of questions I didn't see to ask the first time around).

So. Here are my questions/comments/concerns.

Sesshomaru let the viewers know of his doubts of having children with a female while his mate was Inuyasha because, regardless, if it was common among youkai for females to give up their young, some wouldn't and would never let go of their child and become like his mother, right?

And then this female called (goes back to look)Muhyou is part wolf and part dog demon (and therefore a half-breed like Inuyasha, though a full youkai). From her mother, the ookami, she is possibly able to have a litter of pups/cubs. And if she were to be chosen by Sesshomaru to sire children with her condition was that she could keep one herself, and that child would have a certain amount of protection.

Now, assuming I got that all right, what happens if she only has one pup (like from her fathers side of dog youkai do as opposed to the litter her mother's side has)? Then what? Will she give the pup up or will she want to keep it?

Also, part of me is scared that Inuyasha will take on the role of 'father-to-be' to this female (not in a sexual sense, just in a caring, protective way) and, while that's good and sweet I wonder how, if it does happen, it'll affect Sesshomaru. He already has huge doubts, thinking Inuyasha wants to be with females again etc. And since Sesshomaru has discovered that he loves Inuyasha,... Okay, I'm stopping!!! X_X

My imagination is totally running away with me! This is all your fault! LOL. Great job! Now this is stuck in my head and I'm going to go insane X_X lol

But yeah, great story, those are my comments/concerns and I look forward to your next update!

-DM
(ps. You should check out Lian Hearn)
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From VicHam on October 14, 2007
YAY!!! A sequel *does happy dance* I gotta tell you, I for one am glad to know I�m not the only person in the world who has issues with the whole m-preg thing in InuYasha yaoi (and I was seriously starting to think that I was o_O). Personally, I see it as a copout: �don�t like Kagome but Shessy�s hot, so write slash and then bend and twist until it fits a het storyline come hell or high water � little details like believability and characterisation be damned!� Harsh, I know, but I�m of the humble opinion that if you wanna bend the laws of nature, you need to lay some serious groundwork and most authors just don�t bother. Don�t get me wrong, I�m all for artistic licence and I have come across a total of two m-preg stories in my entire life that I liked (neither of which were in the InuYasha fandom by the way). I think a story swims or sinks on a reader�s ability to identify with what they�re reading and more often than not a guy with a baby-bump just isn�t gonna cut it with me. What I adore about this story, is that I can totally see it. I always thought that InuYasha would want a family dearly after the life he�s lived and you are honestly the first yaoi author I�ve ever come across to deal convincingly with the subject. Again, great work and thanks for a fantastic read ^_~
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From nchsmi on October 13, 2007
Okay, I'm fine with your choice not to make this a mpreg. I can even live with the fact, that Sess has to be with someone other than InuYasha. It's all good! Muhyou seems like an alright type of girl, very interesting! I just yoai smut and InuYasha getting the best of Sesshomaru! I just don't want some random female getting in the way, of how Inu and Sess raise the kid! Sess should be more understanding of what InuYasha wants. Inu wants a family. One that he never had! Get The Lead Out Sesshomaru! Give Inu the security he's longing for! And, Sess' mother really needs to be put in check! I loved what InuYasha did to her, drawing his sword on her in the first chapter was great! She needs more of that! Thank you so much for the heads up, I really appreciated it! This story is great, keep it up! One question, does this mean that 'You brought it on yourself' has ended or is there one more chapter to it? I know that this is a sequel, and all. But, the story doesn't say *completed* at the end or in the summary, so I'm not sure. Anyhoo, love the update, write more soon. B reading U!
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From xxbluxbellxx on October 13, 2007
Once again...great chapter! Left me with a cliffy though! I don't mind waiting for the smut, but when it does come...make it good =D I want a real good spanking scene somewhere in there to! haha..I know, I'm needy.

Keep it up!
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From calenloke on October 13, 2007
hmmm...threesomes are really not my thing...lol...but I can see where you're going with that. Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha are so close that they share everything, I just hope that its more Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru after Sesshoumaru is done with the girl...or whatever detailed about sessinu..lol. I'm a sap...I just can't help myself. I jumped up for joy when I realized you updated.
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From calenloke on October 13, 2007
YES!!! I understand perfectly what you mean about Mpreg, and respect your decision, but I'm also glad you are going to make her only a breeder. I love your story and I hoep to read more soon. Brilliant work. :)
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From drcomalfy on October 13, 2007
*SQUUEEEE*

Iono if you'd like Lian Hearn's books but they're based in a 'fantastical Japanese region." They're really quite good ^^

ANYWAY! OMG! Well, I'm not into threesomes, but... I will say that if you already have it planned out to be described in as much detail as Inu and Sess' encounters then I'll deal with it. I do really like the female you've picked though, and how you've had her described; she seems rather pleasant ^^. I just hope nothing horrible/horrible goes on T_T WAH!

Looking forward to the next great update!!

-DM
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From mamarita on October 13, 2007
Well. looks like you have a good start. So, Sesshomaru is going to come to the conclusion that he really loves his little brother. And will it also come out that InuYasha has the ability to bear pups? I can't wait to see what happens next! And if Sess and InuYasha do get together- what will his mother think?
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From drcomalfy on October 13, 2007
Quick question. Are you a fan of Lian Hearn? Something in your chapter reminded me of her stuff ^o^ I love it *needs to re-read the Otori series now* XD
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From Daktalakpak on October 13, 2007
Damn.. so good yet again. I so wanna see those too happy together.
Update soon!
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From evillblackcat on October 13, 2007
It's interesting...I would like that Inuyasha become pregnant...that would be very interesting...
update soon!please
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From sweetsatincocoa on October 13, 2007
I read this yesterday morning, but I was late for work and couldn't review. Tickled fucking pink, I am, that you continued this. Liking Inuyasha's spat w/InuMama. I should draw, but I suck at it now. My stuff is more Van Gogh now...maybe I should cut my ear off. Anyway, I'm happy about this. Yes indeedy bobby.
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