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Reviews for Past Pain, Future Vengance

By : TwistedJester
  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2007
    good start. it explains quite a bit about sesshoumaru's attitude, and lays groundwork for any feelings you may develop between the brothers.

    watch tendencies with switching similar words, such as: fallow and follow, or innocents and innocence. even though, the word innocents in the title of the chapter made poetic sense.

    i will be eagerly awaiting your next update.
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  • From midnightsweet on December 11, 2007
    nice i can see him doing that.
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  • From wolfluv on December 09, 2007
    BRILLANT! THANK YOU FOR CLEARTNG UP THE STORY QUESTION!!!! MANY THANKS!!!
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  • From midnightsweet on November 30, 2007
    too short
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  • From wolfluv on November 29, 2007
    please don't tell me there is only one chapter left?!? This story is Great a new story line that I haven't ever seen! Please go on!
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  • From alleycat88 on November 29, 2007
    Poor kid!Sesshomaru...that evil man! Another good chapter...albeit still short. Please make them longer! *KISS*


    Lilith
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  • From nchsmi on November 29, 2007
    Wow, you came back with a vengance!!! (Pardon the pun) Great chapter! Next time, don't take so long! B reading U!
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  • From evillblackcat on November 09, 2007
    update soon, please, i can't wait to see what's next
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  • From darksinistra on November 06, 2007
    Story is good....but pleaaaaseeeee could you write longer chapters?!!! Or update soon cuz the waiting drives me nuts. lol
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  • From alleycat88 on November 06, 2007
    Nooooo! Evil cliffie! Please keep going!
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  • From mamarita on October 30, 2007
    OMG!!!! If you don't update soon, I will hunt you down and chain you in front of your PC... NOT MY SESSHOMARU!!!!
    In other words- great story- but update, please.
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  • From alleycat88 on October 30, 2007
    Sesshomaru DOES have a heart! He cared for baby Inuyasha! Awww! Please update soon!

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  • From Nesha85 on October 30, 2007
    Great story. Please write more. I can not wait to see if Sesshomaru is saved.
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  • From midnightsweet on October 29, 2007
    this is nice. looking forward to what's going to happen.
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  • From calenloke on October 29, 2007
    I like the story so far, I just have a question...in your summary you said Naruku took someone captive, is it Inuyasha or Sesshoumaru....I'm thinking it's Inuyasha but I'm not sure. Anyways, other than that, it was a good start and it flowed, I just feel bad for Sesshoumaru because we all know him to be strong and powerful. But to know that he was broke my that monster, well that just makes it tragic. He has to have some pride, please tell me Inuyasha is the uke in this story. Its just wrong to see Sesshoumaru as the one who has to take anything from anyone. I hope he gets revenge.

    Poor little guy to be robbed of his innocence, to never be happy or smile again. I hope Inuyasha can change that. I can't wait to read more.
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