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Reviews for A San Francisco Treat (A/N)

By : chanda
  • From mamarita on January 31, 2008
    I'm glad your computer problems are a thing of the past. I have anxiously awaited this story's continuation. Ok. so Inu-papa accepts the relationship. No real surprise, happens all the time in the demon world. I want to know how the two brothers are going to resolve their situation. I want them to be happy. I'm not one for incest, but his story isn't really about that. It's about finding a true love, even if he happens to be your brother. Please update soon. DLS
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  • From nchsmi on January 31, 2008
    OH thank God for your ex! Great chapter, it was well worth the wait. Update soon- B reading U!
    L8r!
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  • From ShadowOniShinobi on December 05, 2007
    this is a lovely story! cant wait for more
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  • From nchsmi on December 04, 2007
    Sorry for your pc troubles :(. I hope all works out for you, and you get a new one soon! B reading U (soon:))!
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  • From mamarita on November 30, 2007
    Please get on with chapter 5 and let the two of them get together........
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  • From nchsmi on November 27, 2007
    I am so in love with this story! I can't wait to read chapter 5!!!! Update quickly please!!! B reading U!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on November 13, 2007
    This story if off to a very good start. The only thing negative to comment on is Sesshoumaru's characterization. You have all of these ! after every other sentence of his, and that really doesn't fit into his character. Don't get me wrong, when you write fan fiction you tend to mold the character to your own perspective and such but; bottom line, Sesshoumaru was never excited at all in the series like your making him here in you fan fic, and it just doesn't read very well. Please use periods instead of random exclamation marks after his dialog. Thank you for posting this, and please take my comments into consideration.
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  • From mamarita on November 13, 2007
    Would love to know what Sesshomaru said to Miroku, but that can wait - maybe at lunch- but poor InuYasha- he has to get over this--- they belong together, and that is all there is to it!
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  • From nchsmi on November 12, 2007
    New update, new update! I'm so happy I'm so happy!!!! I love this! Keep giving the gift baby! B reading U (soon)!
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  • From ANON - jenny on November 12, 2007
    :) I am loving it!!!!!
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  • From Dragon7 on November 12, 2007
    Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!! I hope this is a Sess uke story.

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  • From setoswifey on November 11, 2007
    So far so good!!! Will we see and hear about more characters? I like the beginning...very original story.
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  • From mamarita on November 10, 2007
    Love it, love it, love it----- more please- and soon!
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  • From on November 09, 2007
    This is really good.

    I can't wait to see how they reconnect.
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  • From nchsmi on November 09, 2007
    Damn, you MUST update soon! This was a great read, it was kind of unsuspected! InuYasha growing up with christain values, but working in a bar. Having a sexual attraction to his brother. How does he get into these situations? Keep it up and I'll B reading U!
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