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By : lestatgirl96
  • From estelin on July 17, 2010
    this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing
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  • From liz2008 on March 10, 2008
    please update soon. please tell us of how the two demons meet up with the rest of the group and what happens after.

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  • From LADYWELLES on March 10, 2008
    WOW love it please update soon i would love to read more TTFN Marrosa
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  • From AnimeLuver89 on March 09, 2008
    O_O WooooooooooooooooooooW at first when i read the first chap i wuz like omg this is totally weird but as it progressed i found that I ABSOLUTELY LOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope to read more soon so keep up the good job :D
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  • From HarasMent3012 on February 02, 2008
    this story was interesting and original. it was good with teh thing about InuYasha hurting Kagome, cause i dnt like them together - i like her ans Sesshoumaru =] but i cant say that i liked InuYasha and Sesshoumaru together as an intimate couple. its kinda disgusting brothers doing that. lol. but it was good apart from that. =D
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 28, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From TheMikoShivae on December 05, 2007
    good so far!
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  • From crazycheryl on November 24, 2007
    Yes, keep it up I want to read more.
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  • From Chaosmage77 on November 24, 2007
    OOOO! I think some one is in trouble when the brothers find her!!!! Can't wait to see! please post the next chapter soon.

    kurai


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  • From BeautifulOblivion on November 24, 2007
    Your improvement is vastly stunning. I can't wait to read the next one! You can email me if you like at melrosefaulkner@yahoo.com. I do some beta'ing, but I get busy throughout the school year with planning lessons and grading tests, papers, so forth and so on. LOL

    You're welcome for the advice. I like to offer some when I can and always hope people take it for what it is. Not an insult but a bit of help to improve and become better. I can give a little more advice, and that is to find some of the well-written fics and read them. Figure out what makes them good and use them to improve your own. That's how I started. I am particular to Rinseternalsoul and Kogas Angel and quite a few more.

    Your pace is a lot better, and your meaning is more clear.

    Take care until next time! I will be waiting for the update.

    Hope you had a great Thanksgiving and an even better Holiday season. (And, that Santa is good to you. LOL)
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  • From ANGEL2006ASHLEY on November 24, 2007
    DAMN! Woooo hooo. Please update soon. I finally read this fic and it sounds funny in a way.
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  • From yeiko87 on November 24, 2007
    hm...I enjoyed it up until the point where they both enter her at once...Unless she just naturally has a very large entrance, it would be physically impossible for both of them to enter her at once with little-to-no foreplay involving penetration, and without her having had any previous hugely-stretching experience...With her hymen still intact, regardless of whether or not she is meant to tear, they wouldnt both fit without truly tearing her clean open (i.e. tearing past the frenulum, and possibly through the vaginal wall as well (due to sudden stretching without any past use))..thus leaving her to die of blood loss..etc..I hate to be a wet blanket and ruin fanfictions involving demons/etc with scientific stuff, but it really is quite off-putting when I cannot visualize what is happening to her human body, because of the fact that it *cannot* happen.

    haha other than that, however, I have no complaints! ^-^ good job
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  • From ANON - catcopy on November 23, 2007
    hey the story is great so far I can't wait to read more. I wouldn't mind to be your beta, if you still need one? If not that's ok, I still enjoy reading the story, lol.
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  • From Crysan on November 23, 2007
    OOOOO update again soon please. although that thing with inuyasha and sesshy scared me a bit I like your story!
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  • From Tricia1224 on November 23, 2007
    This is a great story. If you still need someone to check your grammar and spelling I would be happy to volunteer.
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