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Reviews for Merry Christmas, Mister Taishou - ON HOLD

By : ElegantPaws

From EzriCandy on December 22, 2007
Two days late?! Hell, who cares! That chapter was wonderful and...HOT! Oh man...how great was that!? Under the Mistletoe...that's just an sweet touch that I thoroughly enjoyed!

I have to wait a few days for the update, but don't mind in the least. It gives me something great to look forward to :) -hopes she gets to see Kagura get bitch-slapped and Kouga gets whats comin' to him-

Awesome chapter, my dear! As always, I look forward to reading much, much more from you in the future!!

Ezzy
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From JenLazar on December 19, 2007
OOOooooohhh!!!!! I absolutely loved this. Have I told you before how much I love the uber long chapters? I sooo do! Now I must admit that I read this the night you posted but by the time I got online it was already in the wee hours of the morning and I know I'm usually am up and all but hubby decided I looked too pale and he made me sleep with him on guard until 1 am. He then went to work and I woke up at 5 am and read Chapter 4. I really wish we could have stayed with the first few paragraphs as they were really getting quite enticing.But even so you didn't let me down. InuYasha bought a dog? My guess it's to help bind Kagome and her kids with Sesshoumaru. After all, what's cuter than a puppy to fawn all over on and bring a family together? And someone needs to put Sesshoumaru in his place on the fact of using angry "colorful metaphors" when he's just been fogging up the windows with those delictable kisses and getting it on in other ways with his "perverted" boa. I'm surprized Kagome didn't put him in his place and make hime forget what was happening with the sleigh and tree. Throw the cell into the back seat. With that house load who knows when there'll be time for FUN. Geez, I didn't think Kagura would stay once she saw children and Yuletide decorations hurriedly being put up. I am totally in love with Jak. He's such a stress reliever. Now he just got himself another "toy" to play with. Kagura's lose is Jak's gain. Holtz is already fitting in...according to Jak. I do wonder more now then ever about Kagome's "sight". The old man got sick and Sess saved him with open heart massage and they had to take that memory from Kagome? See, I knew you had something going on with this when she first saw InuYasha's ears. Quite intriguing, my girl, quite. I didn't understand Jak's reaction. It would make me ask why and what did I do wrong. The scene with the pup was adorable. Now you're gonna have everyone wanting a pup like that. Sounds like a most busy and old fashioned Christmas for Taishou Manor. I'd love to write more because I felt bad for going back to sleep after reading this the other night. I just keep looking forward to each and every new posting that I fight my meds to read them. Love Ya!!! JEN
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From rowdygirl on December 16, 2007
girl, when was the last time i told you that you are brilliantly imaginative? now i know where i want to spend MY Christmases. you do such a good job of creating a lovely, captivating story. if you were here, i would be begging and pleading for another chapter, just one more, please, please, pretty please? i'll be really good...

janer
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From Akay on December 16, 2007
Hm... so I'm kinda backdated on some questions that I been meaning to ask you. Are you ready? Sure you are... you always are: Is Sango under the same spell Miroku and the others are?; Are Shippo, Kanna, and Hakudoshi demons still?; Um, I had a question about Houjo, but it's no longer relevant. You kinda answered that question somehow in one of those chapters... though I do have to ask what is going on between Houjo and Inuyasha? I'm kinda lost on this situation.; Why did that guy pass out? Who is he really? and I think that about sums up my questions. I think I ask them more for me than you because I know you're not gonna answer them directly. It just reminds me of what I'm looking out for. Lol.

Ew gross he just cut the dude wide open right in front of Kagome's eyes. I probably would have died right then. Kagome did well to pass out. *shivers* Woah. And what did they do to her? Why did Jak had to all of a sudden act that way towards her? Hm... so I guess I did have more questions. Haha. I've been waiting so impatiently for this chapter and now I'm even more impatient than I was before. This story is awesome!! Duh.

Sessh is still hot with glasses. And I so guessed it was a puppy, but the fact that it was for him caught me completely off guard. Why would they get him a puppy? Interesting... what are they up too? I wanted a puppy for christmas, but my family are being butts and it doesn't seem like they want to get me one. So I asked for a hamster and they laughed... those jerks. Anyway. I'll be waiting for the next update next weekend... on the edge of my seat.
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From EzriCandy on December 16, 2007
Uh oh...what is Hakudoshi up to? I wonder what those plaques say outside...hmm, I'll just have to wait to find out! :-D

The part in the cabin was sad and I don't blame Kags for passing out after seeing something like that!

Excellent chapter as usual and I still love Jak!

I'll be right there for the next update!

Ezzy
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From Tricia1224 on December 16, 2007
Love, love LOVE the puppy. Fedora? Isn't that the hat that Indiana Jones wears? Boy things are starting to get really interesting. What did they do to Kagome after she passed out? I guess I will have to e patient and wait for the next chapter.
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From blackicekitten98 on December 11, 2007
i have no patience... hahahah...

more? or do i need to get down on knees and beg for some more story??!! lol... just kidding.

i love it... wish it were long sometimes... or updated even more often... i keep checking often for an update... ~grins~

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From Akay on December 10, 2007
Hahahahahahahaha *cough cough* haha. lmao.
Hey EP loved the chapter so funny. I think I read it over like two and a half more times. I say half because I had to go back to my fave part when u said like the four horsemen of the apocalypse. lol.... just picturing that had me laughing so hard. and the ending made me laugh too. "Silence woman. I'm kissing you." hahahahaha. And Jak, boy what can I say about Jak besides I love him lol. I had questions for u but i cant remember them right now so i'll go back and read again and then maybe the question would come back to me. Laterz.

oh and i absolutely love those scenes in the car when they were debating rudolph and why sessh is the way he is and the fact she was getting a lap dance from his "throw" lol... Sess is apervert hahah
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From SesshysRose on December 10, 2007
Awesome story! I really like how you have this one set up...kouga's evil...Kanna is autistic...very original! Keep up the great work! :) Have a great holiday as well!
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From JenLazar on December 10, 2007
Wonderfully fulfilling in every way. I just would like to ask, at the bottom of the chapter one can review or discuss the story...What's to discuss? It is enterainly perfect. It's a bad evening for for me so you were my only choice to read this evening but now I must sleep as the freezing rain is giving me much grief. Love ya and I pray you are somewhere away from this ice storm. Jen
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From EzriCandy on December 10, 2007
"Silence woman, I'm kissing you."
"Shut up and kiss then, Mister Taishou."

Those HAVE to be the bestest lines evah, lol!

I'm so glad that I came over to aff to search your name :) I know ASS is having some downtime so I was hoping upon hope that you posted here too and I just about bounded off my bed and did a victory dance when I saw that you did!

It was sad that the house burned down and poor little Shippou, Hakudoshi and Kanna were so upset by it which tugged at these 'ol heartstrings, but Jak made me laugh as usual...and Sesshomaru is just uber sexy every time I read and his glasses are mentioned! Damn thats just yummy!

One thing I'm really looking forward to though, is the confrontation about Kagome 'seeing things' and if she'll say something to Sesshomaru. OH! And I just thought of another! Inuyasha confronting that asshole gambler Houjo. I hope his ass gets BUSTED big time!!

Well, I'll see ya at the next update and thank you for continuing this Great fic! This is definitely going in my favorites :-D
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From Tricia1224 on December 10, 2007
I am really, really loving this story. No words to describe it though. It gives me a warm and fuzzy with a side of ice cubes.
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From TheMikoShivae on December 09, 2007
very good story so far :D
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From rowdygirl on December 09, 2007
happy happy, i'm so sappy! i love romance and boy is this a fun romance!
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From hasu86 on December 09, 2007
i am loving this. and will they ever tell kags what they really are? i'd assume they'd have to as it seems she's really the only one who doesn't know. i like your little twists, very nice, very nice. and yes, they kissed! haha, i got all excited. i do love jak in this and i hope the kids come through all right. i'm glad you added in kanna and hakudoshi as they deserve some happiness and of course shippou too. love the little guy to death. anyway, this is progressing along very well. looking forward to reading more!
-hasu86
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