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Reviews for A Simple Kind Of Life

By : mikodawn
  • From 4inukag4 on December 10, 2007
    WOW I have to tell you this is getting DAMN good DAMN fast. I love it and PLEASE keep this up.

    Holly S
    You can't roller skate in a buffalo herd.
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  • From Rinseternalsoul on December 10, 2007
    Hmmm... when you say Inuyasha and Naraku, do you mean Inuyasha AND Naraku? hehe. I know, that is very hentai of me. Bad Rinseternalsoul! Seriously though, getting kissed by 2 Sesshomaru's has got to be the hottest thing ever. It just bumped up my fantasy collection by the dozens. Please don't be angry with me, but I hope that you can avoid having Kagome call someone a 'cunt' again. It was pretty ooc for her. Try to keep the character in mind even in emotional moments. Just a little unsolicited advice that may help you. We are enjoying your story very much. Again, thanks for the read.

    Rin

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  • From alatera on December 10, 2007
    I can't see her choosing between them. I know she has more of a connection with Sesshomaru than Lord Sesshomaru, but in essence they are the same being. Just different points of view since they have lived different lives. In dealing with Alpha and beta, depending on whose top dog who would win. I do wonder if she has a counterpart there where Sesshomaru is from. Will they return there at all? I bet its an interesting feeling to (technically) be jealous of one's own self.
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  • From bluemoonvixen on December 10, 2007
    Awww, Glad to see the demons working out their differences. ^.^ Hope Kagome can get around to giving them both attention and then they can get over their jealousy issues. Darn Kagura. X(
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  • From Risa on December 09, 2007
    Hey, I am really enjoying this story. I see that you are taking a poll.
    Well, Kagome rescued Sesshoumaru because she believed he was Lord Sesshoumaru; therefore, she really is attracted to Lord Sesshoumaru
    SESSHOUMARU:
    Sesshoumaru's mannerisms emulate how humans behave, and Kagome is enjoying the difference.
    Sesshoumaru is grateful for receiving his freedom, friendship and more. Things he was denied.
    LORD SESSHOUMARU:
    Lord Sesshoumaru quietly harbored feelings for Kagome and went through the length by secretly going to the well. He waited and hope for her return. Kagome understands Lord Sesshoumaru's reasons behind his personality.
    CONCLUSION AND DECISION
    I think Lord Sesshoumaru and Kagome should wind up together, and Sesshoumaru should find someone else, like Inuyasha.
    It was an important factor, for me, when Lord Sesshoumaru told Kagome that he needed her; she was TRULY overjoyed by it. It's all Kagome ever wanted was to feel wanted.
    I hope I made sense, and I hope you will continue with this very interesting story.

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  • From bluemoonvixen on December 09, 2007
    lol, Crazy confused dog demons. One doesn't recognise jealousy and the other thinks that she wants cold and cruel. Welp, can't wait to see how they're conversation goes. ^.^ Update soon!
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  • From Crysan on December 09, 2007
    Very nice. The story is getting better and better... when will Kagura show again, what will Naraku do, I know I know answering those questions would ruin the surprise...
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  • From DeadlySoulCaster on December 09, 2007
    Why must males draw the worst conclusion? I mean really, how hard is it to pull someone aside and ask a few simple questions to clear things up? But then again Im not a guy, nore do i have their whole Male Pride thing goin. And plus it wouldnt be a story without some drama. Great job on this chapter :) The guys are like switching roles now, how funny, they both want to be like each other for Kagome. Can't wait for the next update, much love to you for writing :D
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  • From rowdygirl on December 09, 2007
    oh yi, nothing worse than having someone hold a mirror up for you. this story just gets better and better.
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on December 09, 2007
    Wow... You already got another chapter out. Interesting dynamics. Can't wait to see the next one.

    Take care!
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  • From LADYWELLES on December 09, 2007
    wow i cant wait it is really good and i so want to read more plaese update soon TTFN
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  • From DeadlySoulCaster on December 09, 2007
    I vote Kagome gets both of them :D Great job with the story, love the plot, i like how Sesshomaru is making Lord S. show his feelings :> *starts singing 'feelings, wo wo wo feelings' from Buffy the Vampire Slayer* lol
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  • From Rinseternalsoul on December 09, 2007
    Nice addition. It seems that Lord Sesshomaru is being forced to see himself in a new light by Sesshomaru's suddenly cold and indifferent behavior. He might not like what he sees. Hopefully, though, Sesshomaru will see that this is not what Kagome needs from him. Okay, about your poll. If I had my choice, OF COURSE I would love to have a Sesshomaru double entre. Hell, who wouldn't? What's better than one Sesshomaru? TWO! Not only do we get the stoic surly demon we are used to, but we also get a delicious new version full of potential, caring and--dare I say it?--FUN. BUT this is your story and while I occasionally incorporate a slight change or addition into my stories to suit the readers, something of this nature would drastically alter the outcome of the planned plot. If you have pre-planned the story, then this could mean re-thinking and re-planning the remaining chapters. Now, if you did not have them planned to begin with, I suppose that it would not matter. Unfortunately, writing a story without planning ahead can lead to disaster, so if this is the case, be careful of your details. I guess ultimately it is up to you. You are the author and it will be you that decides the outcome. I'm always up for a Sesshy sandwich, but if you decide to stick with your plans leaving Kagome with only one, then it is fine by me. Thanks for the read.

    Rin
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  • From MourningRaven on December 09, 2007
    OOHHHHH! GOOD chapter! I am so thankful that you updates! I love this story you have no idea! I hope my opinion was helpful to you! well, Back to your great work!
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  • From Bridget on December 09, 2007
    I luv ur story!!! It has become one of my favorites. For the poll that u have up i say that yes kagome should be with both of the sesshomarus.
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