Reviews for A Time for ChangesBy : Fuafuru46 |
Why must Inuyasha be so DENSE!
AND WHY is he with Kikyo again!
She's clearly a bitch, and a secretive one at that, so what gives!
AND now Kagome's seeking solace in Kouga's arms, which he's ALWAYS wanted her to, but she'S weak and emotional right now, so that's not exactly a great way to upgrade a friendship of many years into a romantic relationship either!
SERIOUSLY, just have Inuyasha dump Kikyo before she can hurt him again; lock Kagome and Inuyasha in the Cafe for a night so that they can resolve their arguements and actually become FRIENDS; and have Kagome introduce Kouga to her friend and fellow Art Major, Ayame!
Ok... That's one HORRIBLE twist!
I'm freaking CRYING right now! WHY?!
O-ho... I can't WAIT for the inevitable introductions and reveals! So many interconnected parties... I just hope the tangles don't confuse them too much.
"My parents died 5 years ago"... No WONDER she's beating herself up about fighting with her little brother before he left for the front lines again!
Her situation is SO relatable though.
Like, from an outside perspective, it's not like Sango told her to find her own place, or stay with the three of them, so, if they just TALKED about it openly, the three of them could find a solution that works for all of them!
Also, the hints are pretty obvious, so, I don't think it'd be such a big problem if Sango and Miroku just switched roommates... I can TOTALLY see Inuyasha and Kagome living together! (Although he'll have to get his act together in the honesty department, regarding his hanyou status and human time and shit like that)
Still, it was a GREAT chapter, and I'm also really impressed with your descriptions of Kagome's drawings, they're not overly detailed, but I can see them in my minds eye when I read what you wrote about them!
Looking forward to reading more of your story!
Signed,
Hana
First Chapter and I'm already HOOKED!
I LOVE IT SOOO MUCH!
Your writing style is very relatable, and I love how you portrayed Kagome's and Kouga's friendship... I SO want Ayame to show up later and steal that wolf's heart!
Can't wait to keep reading it and see what happens!
Like: What do Kagome's dreams mean? Who is this woman she sees in her dreams? Is she an unawakened Miko? Is Inuyasha hanyou (Kagome didn't mention his ears, so I don't know if they were hidden under a uniform cap of some sort, or just weren't there, or she just didn't think it important to mention them)? Will they move in together when Sango and Miroku get a place for themselves? etc. You get my gist, I'm sure :)
Your new Fan and faithful Reader,
Hana
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